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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#451

😲 😲 😲

Finished ?

I didn't read last 4 updates !! How could I miss it ? 😭

RES

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#452

awesome ending
it was jst blissful to read this
i didnt hve much words

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SalmanShahidSm

@SalmanShahidSm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

Beautiful
i loved it
but now i ll miss this story
keep writing :)

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

Reserved!

Unreserved -

"One Love, One Heart, One Destiny"

What can I say, that I haven't said earlier.

It was beautifully written story.

Every emotions of the each and every character were very well penned.

. . And her eyes met his face and everything beating inside her stopped for a moment.

Swaron became finally one.

"Maybe the passion to love someone so unconditionally was something she got from him."

I liked how you brought Sharon step-dad or rather dad in the epilogue. Side characters are always important and you very well penned It.

Will miss this story.

Do come up with new story soon.

Love

Shivani

Edited by --Ecstasy-- - 10 years ago

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

such an awsm end of dis beautiful story... lovely...

do start a new ff soon... 😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Hey Chitra :)

First of all really sry for not being able to read this sensational piece of work.

Actually I was really not on IF so apologies.

Now coming to this SS. I remember reading its CS and introduction and I just simply loved it 👏👏 Not only at that time but still I Loved each and every part of it. I admire your orecision and the way you own up the characters. You add a new flavor to all of them. Be It Swayam, Sharon, Ryan or Sam you did a tremendous job in mending relationships and keeping intact the most beautiful relation, friendship. Incorporated with the SwaRon tale!!

Beautiful!! ⭐️

Even the way you ended Rhea's character was bang on. The fact that you showed her pov as well and didn't made her the vamp at all. Kudos to you girl!!

Imagery is the one factor that I absolutely love in your writing. Be it of the surroundings or of the characters themselves. Its just bang on!! I am a very visual person 😆 and I imagine the scene automatically but the way you depict each scene it becomes more easy to relate and imagine. I could literally imagine all of the chaos and the beauty you portrayed in here 😆😳

Also the way you justify all of your characters and the relationship they share <3 Its an absolute treat!!

Also the flashbacks in this SS were way too vital. Firstly, it saved the day and we as readers had something happy to take back and secondly it added to the spark of the story.

You are a wonderful writer, dear!!

Keep writing more 🤗

Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago