Hey Chitra :)
First of all really sry for not being able to read this sensational piece of work.
Actually I was really not on IF so apologies.
Now coming to this SS. I remember reading its CS and introduction and I just simply loved it 👏👏 Not only at that time but still I Loved each and every part of it. I admire your orecision and the way you own up the characters. You add a new flavor to all of them. Be It Swayam, Sharon, Ryan or Sam you did a tremendous job in mending relationships and keeping intact the most beautiful relation, friendship. Incorporated with the SwaRon tale!!
Beautiful!! ⭐️
Even the way you ended Rhea's character was bang on. The fact that you showed her pov as well and didn't made her the vamp at all. Kudos to you girl!!
Imagery is the one factor that I absolutely love in your writing. Be it of the surroundings or of the characters themselves. Its just bang on!! I am a very visual person 😆 and I imagine the scene automatically but the way you depict each scene it becomes more easy to relate and imagine. I could literally imagine all of the chaos and the beauty you portrayed in here 😆😳
Also the way you justify all of your characters and the relationship they share <3 Its an absolute treat!!
Also the flashbacks in this SS were way too vital. Firstly, it saved the day and we as readers had something happy to take back and secondly it added to the spark of the story.
You are a wonderful writer, dear!!
Keep writing more 🤗
Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago
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