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vishwamba

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

I'm new here but I admire ur writing skill superb👏

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: vishwamba
I'm new here but I admire ur writing skill superb👏

Welcome dear. It is really overwhelming when someone's first post is on your thread.

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Sneak Peek of Part 22

" Manorama Aunty, you are elder to us but that doesn't mean that you will badmouth my sister and I will listen to it quietly." Khushi thundered at Manorama, while she stood aghast in shock.

" Look at this mannerless lady. Standing in my house, you are shouting at me? Or are you forgetting that you are a mere guest here and have absolutely no right to teach me manners?" An angered Khushi who was shuddering with fury was about to burst when Arnav's voice fell on her ears,

" Sorry, Mami. But Khushi and you are related to this house in the same manner. As you are the daughter-in-law of this house, Khushi is also the daughter-in-law of this house and even if she wasn't, she has every right to stand up for her sister. And what are you even accusing Bhabhi of? Trapping Bhaiyya? Haven't you see true love in Bhaiyya's eyes for Bhabhi?"

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OKay! First-timer! I haven't ever written a family drama!

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Mally

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Dammit! Yeh kya hae? Bas chotu sa teaser? I expected it to be a huge update like the Mahaupdate ones!

Koi Nahi! At least you decided to continue it so I'm happy! *shed's Khushi ke asoon!*

Awwwh did Arnav just take Khushi's side? How cute! And uff Manorama will never change and I love how Khushi stood up for her sister!

Now listen! Do update soon or else I won't talk to you. Dhamki hae yeh. Lightly maat lena xD

Edited by -CrazySobtian- - 9 years ago

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-
Dammit! Yeh kya hae? Bas chotu sa teaser? I expected it to be a huge update like the Mahaupdate ones!
Koi Nahi! At least you decided to continue it so I'm happy! *shed's Khushi ke asoon!*
Awwwh did Arnav just take Khushi's side? How cute! And uff Manorama will never change and I love how Khushi stood up for her sister!
Now listen! Do update soon or else I won't talk to you. Dhamki hae yeh. Lightly maat lena xD

I told you it was a teaser, pagli. But you were all lost in jiju. My Mahaupdate will be 1500 words that's all.

This lady is a perfect option to be an actress. Rajshri, Swastik, Triangle Films, please cast this lady in your next venture. Khushi ke asoon for a teaser. Now that is typical of me too.

This Arnav is too cute! Manorama Mami is one irritation for me sometimes.

Achcha, Bin Baatein karein reh Paogi Madam Ji?

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Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Loved the teaser for part 22 👏
Eager for the chapter 😃

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Mally

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
I told you it was a teaser, pagli. But you were all lost in jiju. My Mahaupdate will be 1500 words that's all.

This lady is a perfect option to be an actress. Rajshri, Swastik, Triangle Films, please cast this lady in your next venture. Khushi ke asoon for a teaser. Now that is typical of me too.

This Arnav is too cute! Manorama Mami is one irritation for me sometimes.

Achcha, Bin Baatein karein reh Paogi Madam Ji?

Thanks for the compliment though xD *sheds more khushi ke asoon!*

Lol Arnav is so damn cute <3

And you see Kuch pane ki liye Kuch khona parta hae! So you decide :3

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-

Thanks for the compliment though xD *sheds more khushi ke asoon!*
Lol Arnav is so damn cute <3
And you see Kuch pane ki liye Kuch khona parta hae! So you decide :3

Yeh baat! I like! Dekhte Hai, Sochte Hai Vichaar Karke Kal Pradosh Kaal Tak Hamara Nirnay Aapka Tak Pohoncha Diya Jayega, Mohatarma.