Poem dedicated to Thahaan.. hope u like it guys

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My 1st work for Thahaan..!!


Soone soone raahon pe
Tere mere paaon ke
Nishaan reh gye...
Waqt kitna bad gya
Hum ab bhi wahin
Thahre reh gye...!!

Jis pal se suru hui ye daastaan
Uss pal ko phir dhoondun kahan
Inn khooye hue paalon ke darmiyaan
Main bhatakta phirun har lamha
Koi to bta de
Mujhe ye samjha de
Kyu lab pe aate aate
Lafz ruke reh gye...
Waqt kitha bad gya
Hum ab bhi wahin
Thehre reh gye...!!


Kuch wo bhi na bole, kuch maine na kaha
Aankhon hi aankhon mein shikwa kr liya
Hothon pe jhoothi hasi saza ke
Ashkon ko apni palkon mein bhar liya
Khaabon ke tukde
Yaadon se jo bhichhde
Dil ki jameen pe gire reh gye...
Waqt kitna bad gya
Hum ab bhi wahin
Thehre reh gye...!!!!


Hope u like it.. pr pasand na aaye to direct bol sakte ho šŸ˜›

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piyali99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neett šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Its such a sweet poem !! 😳
Really tere jaise cute haišŸ˜³šŸ˜‰
Really good wrk girlšŸ‘šŸ‘
Keep it up !ā¤ļø
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Who said it ki its not good? Arre its awesome, perfect, superb (aur badhiya words I don't have) ā¤ļøā¤ļø
Best and 1st poem I ever read on thahaan.šŸ‘šŸ‘

Please aur likhna..and kaash yeh thaahaan padhe😭 😭 aur unhe akal aaye..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neet pialu is absolutely r8! U r the cutest girl on this forum and we r glad that we have a person lyk u
Neha99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are sooo good at it. Loved itšŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Netti supreb šŸ‘
Lovly poem ā¤ļø
Neett thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u so much guysšŸ¤—
Mujhe dar tha ki tum sab ko pasand bhi aayegi ke nhi.. tum sab ka pyaar dekh kr main bht khush hoon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyali99

Neett šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Its such a sweet poem !! 😳
Really tere jaise cute haišŸ˜³šŸ˜‰
Really good wrk girlšŸ‘šŸ‘
Keep it up !ā¤ļø

thanks peehu šŸ¤—
I'll try to keep it up..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanshiii

Who said it ki its not good? Arre its awesome, perfect, superb (aur badhiya words I don't have) ā¤ļøā¤ļø

Best and 1st poem I ever read on thahaan.šŸ‘šŸ‘

Please aur likhna..and kaash yeh thaahaan padhe😭 😭 aur unhe akal aaye..

thanks meri bestie pooh šŸ¤—
Dimaag pe itna zor na de word dhoodne mein bs ek šŸ¤—hi kaafi hai.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanshiii

Neet pialu is absolutely r8! U r the cutest girl on this forum and we r glad that we have a person lyk u

😳😳

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