Shara Story * Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... * part 2 up,page 2! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: miniapplepie

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Shara OS : Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... Aur chabi kho jaye


Shamsher grabbed her arm and took her into the tekhana... She tried her best to freeherlselfbut couldnt ... He locked the room and pinned her to the wall... With both his hands on the wall... In his hand he had the key ... The room was dark... But some light was coming into the room ... Exposing shshers bare well toned back

A. Shamsher chodiye mujhe !

S. Itni jaldi ?

A. Chabi dijiye mujhe !

S. Yeh ? ( he shows her the key ) hummm ... (and throws the key out of the window

A. Shamsher ! Yeh kya kiya apne !

Shamsher was stRing at her... Pationately... .intensely yet lovingly ...

S. Kya kiya ? Chabi bahar phenk di ...

He comes more close to aradhya... Looking at her eyes ... . Aradhya gets slowly lost in his dark brown eyes ...

S. Haan ... Kuch galat kiya ?

By the time hesaid this ... Aradhya was completely lost in his eyes...

A.hum... Hun ?

S. Nein pooch raha tha ki... Kya maine kuch galat kiya ?

This time therr was no response from aradhhya ... Shecouldnt say anything... Her eyes were on shamsher ... Shamsher noticed that... he decided to decrease the distance between them by coming more closer to her ... Now... There was just few mm between their lips... They could feel each others breath... The intensity in his eyes was increasing... So. ..

Aradhya closed her eyes ... Unable to bare his gaze ... He leaned foward and placed a kiss on her eyelid...

aradhya grabbed his arm put ofnervousnesd ... He then kissed her other eyelid... At that moment... Something fell on aradhya foot... Which brought her back to hersenses...

She opened her eyes... .. And looked him... Shamsher took on arm off the wall... And looked at the old little clock that fell on her foot... Aradhya was looking at him with sone questions in her eyes... Which he didnt want to answer ...

S. ...woh chabi purani chabi thi... Waise bhi phenk ni thi ... Asli chabi mere paas hain... ( he says looking at her eyes )

He puts his hand in his pocket and opens the door and looks at arDhya...

S. Chalein aradhya ?



Wow! So intense i love it! 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

awwee! that was so intense! hayeee!!☺️ Very well written! Good job!👏

Kp writing mini... u r One shots I tell you they r so... dreamy! I think we need more such OS's because show mei toh shara h nahi... *sigh*



thanku so so much pree 😃😃⭐️⭐️

yaar scachi mein ... ab meine show dekhna thoda sa band kiya... i cant see veer... he reminds me of chanda and how cvs ruined prz1... so now will watch if shara scenes aayengein ... and for anjali , munmuin and arjun ascenes with bd , i cant see veer all the time ... hes very annoying ... and hope cvs will show more romance between shara ...

and show shammu and munmun scenes coz i love their bro - sis bond 😃😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awe plz continue thisn story forward, this is so well written!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: max_thakker

awe plz continue thisn story forward, this is so well written!



thanks a lot dear 😃😃⭐️⭐️

im really happy you liked it 😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️

i will continue this story 😃😃⭐️⭐️

i have changed the title and will contniue 😃😃 in fact... im going to update now 😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys , this is the part 2 of the story hope you like it an dplease leave yuor feedback and hit like please 😃⭐️⭐️⭐️ hope you enjoy it 😃😃⭐️⭐️

Part 2

Aradhya was about to come out the room but manchala came

M. Bhai ap aur bhabhi yahan hi rahiye... Woh... Bahaar tilak rj ke gunde guss gaye hai...

A. Kya ? Bauji ! Par... Woh...

M. Bhabhi ji... Ap pareshaan na hoye ... Please... Yhan par hi rahiyega

Aradhya had tears in her eyes... Her father came there... Why ? He is shamshers sasurji... Her daughter is bhavri devis bahu... How can he attack bhavri devis house like that ? All these thpughts made aradhya cry ... She walked to a corner of the room...

Shamsher noticed those tears inher eyes ... And tokdmanchala

S. Theek hai manchala ... Hum yahan hi rahengein... Dont worry...

M. Haan aur bhai... Lock kar dena andar se... Pata nahi... Kab kya ho jaye...

S . Theek hai... Tu khayal rakhna sabka... Aur... Sab abhi tak holiday par hain na ? ghar tohnahi aye hain na? Phobe karke unhe batadena ...

M. Ji bhai unhe maine phobe kar diya woh kal aayengein... Aur hum aur guards unhe sambhal lengein... Ap pareshaan na ho

S. Theek hai... Mujgekhabar karte rehna ...

M. Ji bhai

Abd msnchala leaves the place...

Shamsherlocks the door and turns around ... He sees aradhya crying at a corner ... She wasfeeling helpless... Her back was agaibst the wall... And She sat down Desperately... Shamsher came to hr ... And sat down just like her... Besides her ... His heart wad tearibg into pieces ... He couldnt see tears in her eyes...

Aradhya wiped her tears with her fingers ...

A. Unhone mujhe khud ke ghar se nikala ek zabardasti shaadi karvake mere marzi ke khilaaf ... Mujhe pata tha ki unhone kabhi bhi mujhe pyaar nahi kiya... Par ... Merr sasural par attacl karna ... Ayr woh bhi kyun ? Ek theke ke liye ? Kyun. ? Unhone mere aath aisa kyun kiya ?

Shamsher hadd no words... He couldnt utter a word... Aradhya slowly kept her head on his bare shoulder ... He looked at her ... Her face had becomed pale brcause of so much crying ... Aradhya then placed her hand on the other side of his waist ... Kind of hugging him...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey mini... :)
aww that was a great part :) emotional one, beautiful too poor Aradhya! :'(

updt soon :D

and u r welcome dear! Kp writing! Yea u r ryt.. Veer is like Chanda, ek dum psycho! pata nhi wat will come of this show... hoping CVs mend things soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pree.Jaani-

hey mini... :)

aww that was a great part :) emotional one, beautiful too poor Aradhya! :'(

updt soon :D

and u r welcome dear! Kp writing! Yea u r ryt.. Veer is like Chanda, ek dum psycho! pata nhi wat will come of this show... hoping CVs mend things soon.



Hi pree 😃

Thanku dear 😃

Yes i wannashow this situation is very emotionl ccoz i love these intense and emtional scenes between leads 😳

Will try to upfste as soon s possible ⭐️

Chachi veer toh ... Hes very irritating
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
what... o my gawd why did u stop now, please let this comfort be,let them love.plz update soon, csnt wait!

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