Shara Story * Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... * part 2 up,page 2!

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hi guys, i had thought of an idea i had thought of it much earlier and made the banner but... then thought that it wasnt a good idea... but now got a bit motivaedt to post it... hope u like the teaser adn banner.

Edited : not it doesnt have only one part... it will have more parts 😃⭐️



Shara OS : Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... Aur chabi kho jaye

Teaser :

Shamsher grabbed her arm and took her into the tekhana... She tried her best to freeherlselfbut couldnt ... He locked the room and pinned her to the wall... With both his hands on the wall... In his hand he had the key ... The room was dark... But some light was coming into the room ... Exposing shshers bare well toned back

A. Shamsher chodiye mujhe !

S. Itni jaldi ?

A. Chabi dijiye mujhe !

S. Yeh ? ( he shows her the key ) hummm ... (and throws the key out of the window

A. Shamsher ! Yeh kya kiya apne !


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: miniapplepie

hi guys, i had thought of an idea i had thought of it much earlier and made the banner but... then thought that it wasnt a good idea... but now got a bit motivaedt to post it... hope u like the teaser adn banner.



Shara OS : Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... Aur chabi kho jaye

Teaser :

Shamsher grabbed her arm and took her into the tekhana... She tried her best to freeherlselfbut couldnt ... He locked the room and pinned her to the wall... With both his hands on the wall... In his hand he had the key ... The room was dark... But some light was coming into the room ... Exposing shshers bare well toned back

A. Shamsher chodiye mujhe !

S. Itni jaldi ?

A. Chabi dijiye mujhe !

S. Yeh ? ( he shows her the key ) hummm ... (and throws the key out of the window

A. Shamsher ! Yeh kya kiya apne !



omg! this is great! cant wait to read the full version! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG! :O
*faints*

Mere wale mei itna romance nhi hoga guys sorry... lol.

abhi I wanna show just bonding.. bt anyway future mei aa sakta hai. And mini, girl u rock! Keep it up! Love the banner! ahh ur OSs they will make me go crazy over ShAra haye❤️ great job!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@amaraah

Thanku so much amaraah :)

Wilk be updating soon


Thanku so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cant wait to read further, plz update soon, since this is only whts keepin this forum worth visitin the actually storyline has nt taken off only n i dont kno when will it too. and plz write more parts or somethin intense!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@pree

Hi pree

Thanks a lot dear
im so happy u liked it
I will post the update soon woh exams chal rahe hain... So ... Time nahi mila ... Try karke jaldi hi thodi der mein update karungi

Pree ypur writings are way way better than mine trust me i just loved your os and the second part i was just ... Overwhelmed reading it ! I just love the way you show all the characyers bond ! Love it !

Thanku pree hope u like ye whole os as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@max_thakker

Thank you so much for your appreaciation

Im so happy you liked the teaser will continue soon

I love to write and you kbow... Somewhrre... Comments abd likes really encorage me and all the writers in this forum hopefully like you... More silent readers comment and like so we writers will write more because its very motivatibng

Yes dear ... This ones gonna be intense ;)


Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is gonna be a short yet intense os , enjoy guys ; )
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Enjoy ⭐️ and please leave feedback and like please ⭐️



Shara Story : Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho... Aur chabi kho jaye

Part 1

Shamsher grabbed her arm and took her into the tekhana... She tried her best to freeherlselfbut couldnt ... He locked the room and pinned her to the wall... With both his hands on the wall... In his hand he had the key ... The room was dark... But some light was coming into the room ... Exposing shshers bare well toned back

A. Shamsher chodiye mujhe !

S. Itni jaldi ?

A. Chabi dijiye mujhe !

S. Yeh ? ( he shows her the key ) hummm ... (and throws the key out of the window

A. Shamsher ! Yeh kya kiya apne !

Shamsher was stRing at her... Pationately... .intensely yet lovingly ...

S. Kya kiya ? Chabi bahar phenk di ...

He comes more close to aradhya... Looking at her eyes ... . Aradhya gets slowly lost in his dark brown eyes ...

S. Haan ... Kuch galat kiya ?

By the time hesaid this ... Aradhya was completely lost in his eyes...

A.hum... Hun ?

S. Nein pooch raha tha ki... Kya maine kuch galat kiya ?

This time therr was no response from aradhhya ... Shecouldnt say anything... Her eyes were on shamsher ... Shamsher noticed that... he decided to decrease the distance between them by coming more closer to her ... Now... There was just few mm between their lips... They could feel each others breath... The intensity in his eyes was increasing... So. ..

Aradhya closed her eyes ... Unable to bare his gaze ... He leaned foward and placed a kiss on her eyelid...

aradhya grabbed his arm put ofnervousnesd ... He then kissed her other eyelid... At that moment... Something fell on aradhya foot... Which brought her back to hersenses...

She opened her eyes... .. And looked him... Shamsher took on arm off the wall... And looked at the old little clock that fell on her foot... Aradhya was looking at him with sone questions in her eyes... Which he didnt want to answer ...

S. ...woh chabi purani chabi thi... Waise bhi phenk ni thi ... Asli chabi mere paas hain... ( he says looking at her eyes )

He puts his hand in his pocket and opens the door and looks at arDhya...

S. Chalein aradhya ?


Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awwee! that was so intense! hayeee!!☺️ Very well written! Good job!👏
Kp writing mini... u r One shots I tell you they r so... dreamy! I think we need more such OS's because show mei toh shara h nahi... *sigh*

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