Rishta....Ek naai zindgi kah safar. Pt.26. Pg.105. Completed - Page 2

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Rishta
Ek naai zindgi ka Safar
Part. 1

Ek chota sa ghar jis mein ek ladki apnay parents ka rathii hai who aun kii ladalli hai. Ap dheakian ek room ek ladki sowi howi hai aus ki mama aarkar khatti hai

W. Geet beta ootha jaa subha hoo gii hai

G. Mama plzzz sonay doo naa Aur thori daar aur sonay doo naa

Mama. Theak hai soo jio phir maat khana tum late hoo gaii hoo thumian apni friend Nikki Aur Sapna saa milna tha na Cafe main. ( Nikki and sapna Geet 's childhood friend )

G. Ooo no mama ap phalay nahin ootha saktay thay Wasay time Kia howa hai

Mama. Aacha too mein ne late karwaya hai, hai na.

G. Nahin mama aisi koi baat nahin hai bass main too.

Mama. Aacha ab Aur makhan maat laga mujay Wasay tum ne time ka poocha tha na 8:30 hoo gayye jaldi kar thujay 9 bajay Cafe poonchna hai warna teri khair nahin.

G. I know mama main late hoon Aur who dono mujay kacha khaa jian gayye ok mama ap jio main tab tak ready hotti hoon Aur Cafe jatti hoon

Mama. Hana theak hai per breakfast kar ka Jana.

Geet. Nahin mama mein late hoo gaii hoon saa kuch laa loo gii

Ek taraf ghar mein tha khamoshi wala mahool par city ka dusray taraf ek barray ghar mein yani Joo Maan Singh Khurana ka ghar hai Wahan 8:15 bohat shoor tha

Nakul. Robin jaldi karo Maan baba aatay hoon gayye ( nakul head of servent) Aur aun ko late dii howi cheez aachi nahin lagtiii.

Robin. Nakul kaka sir ka pasta ko bannay mein time lagay gaa

Nakul. Kia sir bohat naraz hoon gayye ( nakul = N, robin= R, aenny= A, Vicky= Vi, Maan= M)

V. Kia hoo raha hai yahan

N. Ooo dadi ama ap hoo ap ne too darra dia.

D.A. Kyune hum ap ko bhoot dheaktay hain.

N. Nahin dadi ama acatully Maan baba ka pasty ko thori daar hai Aur 8:30 tak sir o sab ready chiya hota hai Ais liya thori tension hoo rahii hain

Vi. Good kaka all the best because ajjj ap too gayye

R. Kyuune Vicky sir

Vi. Ais liya robin bec bhai ka mood ajjj bohat kharab hai Aur subha subha Adi bhai ko daant par gaii hai.

D.A. Vicky koi naai baat batto Adi ko too daily Maan saa daant khata hai bechara Adi

R. Sir plzzz Aur too na darro mujay too lagta hai ajjj mera duty par last day hai.

D.A. Don't worry robin hum hain naa Maan ap ko kuch nahin kahin gayye

R. Dadi ama ap too rahnay doo ap hamisha aisay khatay hoo help karoon gii par sir ka gussa dheaktay hiii ap kuch nahin khatay.

D.A. Kia kaha ap ne

M. Nakul meri coffe

Vi. Dadi chalo table par bro aagye too daant parray gii.

Dadi vickey dinning table par jatay hain tabhi Wahan aaney aati hai

A. Good morning dadi and Vicky

Dadi and Vicky. Good morning aenny

M. Good morning dadi ama

D. Good morning beta and V. A good morning bhai

M. Hhhmmm nakul meri coffe Aur pasta

D.A. Beta kabhi too apni boring routeen change karo Aur kuch spicy khoo.

M. Thank you dadi ama mujay lagta hai ap ko yah spicy shor kar healthy Khana chiya and it is good for health.

D.A. Healthy food ap kii khaoo apna healthy food hum to spicy food khiyan gayye. Aur ap saa too baat bhi karna bekar hai

Vi. Dadi bhai kii shaadi karwa doo phir dhekna ap kii har baat minya gayye.

M. Gussay saa Vicky

D.A. Kya Vicky sahii too kha raha hai ab ap ko jaldi shaadi karni hoo gii warna

M. Warna Kay

D.A. Warna soch kar batton gii

M. Dadi ap bhi kaisi bachay saa kaam nahin hain Aur mera breakfast kahan hain mujay meeting ka liya late hoo raha hai

N. Baba who

M. Who kya kaka ap ko pata hai mujay har cheez time par chiya

N. Mujay pata hai bass 10 min Aur

M. 10 min Aur mujay late hoo raha hai main office jaa raha hoon.

D.A. Beta breakfast too kar loo Aur hamari baat abhi complete nahin howi

M. Main office saa kuch khaa loon gaa Aur shaadi wala topic close and I am happy to be single and I don't need anyone and then he left for office.

A. Dadi bhai too chalay gayye ab ap aun kii shaadi ka liya kasay manno gayye

D.A. Don't worry beta main bhi Ais kii dadi hoon Aur main ab Ais kii shaadi karwa ka rahoon gii dheaktii jio tum

Aenny and Vicky. All the best dadi we are with you.



Hello friends first thank you all for supporting me
And here is part 1 plzzz tell me do you like it or not
Plzzz ignore grammar and spelling mistakes

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