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Posted: 9 years ago
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written by - shibu (scene - 1,2) mansi (scene 3)


*Scene 1*

~Next day~

~ Mall~

Dolly- mujhe jhumke dekhne hai...

Jwala- Dolly Di, yeh aapko shopping mein itna interest kyun hai yaar?

Dolly looked at her angrily and she bit her tongue, remembering her mood swings
Bunty- mujhe naya cricket bat chahiye...


Kirti- Pehle hum Dolly Di ke liye jhumke dekhte hai, phir tere liye cricket set, ok?

They walked in the accessories shop, when Jwala bumped into someone.
Jwala- Sorry, sorry...

They looked at Rashi, who was smiling at them.
Rashi- Chill Jwala, it's ok...

Kirti- Rashi, tum yahan?

Rashi- Arrey haan, meri Di ki beti ka... poori shopaholic hai...so unn dono ke saath aana pada...Tera leg ab better hai na?

Before Kirti could reply, Raashi received a call, and after answering the call said,
Rashi- Great, mujhe shopping le aaye, aur khud chale gaye..

Dolly- That's greats na... Tum hume join karo...

Rashi-(hesitant) Are you sure?

Kirti- Of course, hum Dolly Di ke liye jhumke kharid rahe the... Chalo...

They had a gala time shopping. They entered a coffee shop after shopping for 2 hours and placed their orders.

Rashi- You know what, you guys are too cool...

Jwala- Arrey abhi toh tum humare poore gang se mile nahi ho thikh se...ek baar unse milego naa, toh kitna maza aayega, tum soch bhi nahi sakti...

Rashi- Then I should surely meet them...ek kaam karte hai, iss weekend lunch pe chalte hai...what say?
Dolly- Sounds good...

Kirti- Rashi, meeting acchi thi nahi...

Rashi- Haan...

Dolly- I am starvings...

Bunty- Ruko di, abhi aapki choco-chip ice-cream aa jaayegi...

Rashi- Waise Kirti, Samridh ke measurements le liye the naa tumne?

Kirti's expressions went dark. She mumbled a yes. Jwala noticed the smile wipe off her face. She wanted to ask her the reason behind her sudden change in expression, but decided against it.

Kirti- (changing the topic) Dolly Di, ab hume ghar chalna chahiye, nahi?

Dolly- Meri choco-chip ice-cream ko aane do, phir jaayenge...

Kirti nodded and went back in the time remembering how Samridh threw her down on the oil and became more frustrated and annoyed.

*Scene 2*
~Near NK House~

Nisha was returning from the market, when she saw a guy, sitting near a car. It looked as if the tire was punctured and he was trying to change it.

Nisha- (to herself) Yeh itna jana-pehchaana kyun lag raha hai? I think I should talk o him.
Nisha walked towards the man and said

Nisha- Excuse Me...

The guys turned and Nisha looked at him trying to recall where she had seen him earlier.
Guy-(smiling) Bhool gayi naa mujhe Nisha?

Nisha- (happily) Samridh tum?

Samridh- thank god, tumhe main yaad hoon...

Nisha- Obviously, who can forget the person jo har saal "Best student" Trophy jitata tha...
Samridh smiled.

Nisha- Tire punctured?

Samridh- Haan yaar... aur mere paas spare bhi nahi hai...
Nisha- Toh phir ab?

Samridh shrugged his shoulders.

Nisha- Mere paas ek idea hai... Tum ek kaam karo,mere saath mere ghar chalo... Main mechanic ko yahan bulaake tumhari gaadi thikh karwaane ke liye kehti hoon...

Samridh- Arey iski koi zaroort nahi hai..I'll manage...

Nisha- Mujhe tumhari ek nahi sunani...Itne saalon baad mile ho, aur mere gahr nahi aayoge? Not done...(making a baby face)Please...

Samridh-(smiling) Tum bhi naa...Thikh hai..

He locked the car and Nisha called the mechanic, who promised to be there in hour. Soon they were in Nisha's house.
Samridh- Nice house...

Nisha- Thanks...Tum betho...I'll get a cup of coffee for you...
Samridh looked at the pictures on the wall, and noticed an unknown person.
Samridh- Nisha, yeh kaun hai?

Nisha- (smiling) Kabir, my husband...

Samridh- (surprised) You are married? Can't believe that...
Nisha- (faking annoyance) Very funny...

Samridh kept looking at the family pictures while Nisha prepared the coffee. Then they talked about college, their life so far...
Suddenly, the door bell rang and Nisha opened the door. She smiled at her husband, who gave her a cheeky smile as he entered. Kabir was taken aback to see a unknown guy in his house. Nisha understood what was going on his mind and said

Nisha- Kabir, yeh Samridh hai...mera schoolmate, aur Samridh, yeh Kabir, mera husband...

They shook hands and Nisha went in the kitchen to get water for Kabir. She returned and the two continued talking. To Kabir's shock, the two were very good friends and he couldn't help but feel jealous.

Kabir- (in his mind) Ajeeb insaan hai...mere ghar pe mere hi beewi ke saath aise baat kar raha hai, jaise khud ki beewi ho...(to Nisha)Main change karke aata hoon...

Nisha- Haan...

Samridh- So Kabir is a dancer... Kaafi lucky ho yaar, har din pati ke dance...huh?

Nisha-kuch bhi...main acchi dancer nahi hoon...(without thinking)tumhe tumhara aur Kirti ka last dance yaad hai...
She realized what she said when Samridh smile turned into a frown. She mumbled a sorry. Samridh kept quiet for some time. Silence enveloped the two, till Kabir entered.

Kabir- Nisha meri black t-shirt kahaan rakhi hai?
Nisha- Cupboard mein...

Samridh- (trying to lighten the mood) Kabir poori tarah se tumhare oopar dependent hai, nahi..

Nisha-(blushing) Tum naa, chup karo...

Samridh-(smirking)Arrey, maine kya kiya hai, Ms. Blushing?

Kabir- (in mind) Kya kiya Ms. Blushing? Blushing my foot...idiot, gadha, duffer, Bandar... jaata kyun nahi hai yeh...mann karta hai ki isse laath maarke gahr se bahar nikaal doon... God! Main kyun itna insecure feel kar raha hoon? Jealous toh ho jaaunga hi naa, Aakhir meri itni pretty wifey, itne good-looking...good looking? Good looking my foot... Ek number ka bandar dikhta hai yeh...ooollu..

Scene - 3

Uman restaurant

Umesh was busy in the kitchen coordinating with the others as they were all new and he was explaing them some things

Umesh - to aap log samaj gye na aap lgo kya kya karna h... mjhe koi bhi complain nhi chahie... aaj aap lgo ka forst day to aaj ka excuse h... now aap log jaie...

He dismissed them and begin working on the "dish of the day" when two slender arms clutched him from behind. He smiled recognising the touch and smiled

Umesh - aman.. aagae itni jaldi ghar se... tumhe bola tha na aaram se aana... mai hu yha sab sambhal lunga...
Kitni thaki hui ho...

Aman - (facing him) tm bhi ladoo... ur tm meri itni fikr karte ho... yehi dekh k meri thakan choo mantar ho jati h...

She smiled lovingly and he do the same...

Aman - waise by god... aaj bade cute lag rhe ho laddo...

Umesh - lagta h apne chhote bhai k saath jyada hi pat rhi h... kya baat h...

Aman - lo ji ab kya mai apne pati ko compliment bhi nhi de sakti...

She turned making a puffy face... umesh bit his tongue and hit himself mentally

Umesh - are mai to majaak kar tha... tm to serious hi ho gyi... tum compliment kya punishment bhi de sakti ho...

Aman - vo kyu...

Umesh - kyuki... m all urs...

Aman blushed and turned towards him.

Aman - same here...

Umesh smiled fondly and leaned to kiss her cheeks when suddenly he tasted chilly. He opened his eyes and found aman holding the dish he was making against her cheek.

Umesh - aman...

And his eyes started watering and he begging for water as aman stood there laughing clutching her stomach almost rofling on his condition.

Umesh - aman.. aah... kitni mirchi thi... he bhagwan...

Aman stopped laughing and gave him the water... feeling guilty

Aman - sorry laddo... mai bus majak kar rhi thi... m so sorry

Umesh clutched her hand that was on his side and pulled her on him.

Umesh - pta h... mai bhi majak hi kar rhi tha...

And he started laughing while aamanglared at him but soon joined too...

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WRITTEN BY SHIBU

*Scene 1*
Kabir was busy cursing Samridh, when Nisha's mobile ring. After she attende dteh call, she told Samridh that the mechanic had repaired his car, so he decided to leave. Nisha requested him to wait, but he denied.
Kabir- Finally, yeh Mr. I am so cool jaa raha hai, that means he has some real work to do in life... pata anhi Nisha isse do minute bhi kaise baat karta hai? Kitna annoying hai, (in funy tone with weird expressions) Kabir poori tarah se tumhare oopar dependent hai, nahi,(trying to calm himself down) Chodo, Aakhir woh jaa raha hai...good riddance...
Here Samridh left the house. Nisha entered the room to see Kabir sitting on the bed and mumbling to himself.
Nisha- Tujhe kya hua?
Kabir- (annoyed) Mil gaya apne pati ke liye time, yaa abhi bhi uss Samrdih s ebaat karni hai tujhe?
Nisha- Kitne salon baad mila hai woh...kitna badal gaya hai...
Kabir- Tu uske baare emin akise soch sakti hai?
Nisha- Dimaag se...
Kabir- Very funny...woh idiot...uski himaat kaise hui mere gahr aane ki?
Nisha- Kabir, usse idiot mat bulaao, he is so sweet and haan, woh ghar nahi aaya tha maine usse invite kiay tha...
Kbair- Dinner tak sse rukwa leti, jaane kyun diya? Apne pati ki koi fiqar hi nahi hai...
Nisha- Ismein tumhari care akrne-naa karne ki baat kahaan se aati hai? Kuch bhi bolta hai tu Kabir...Aur woh balck T-shirt? WOh bhi tumhe dikhaayi nahi di, cupboard emin toh thi...
Kabir- (to himself) Dikhaayi kaise degi, poora dhyaan tumhare aur uss Samrdih ke baaton pe jo tha...
Nisha- Kya kaha?
Kabir- Kuch nahi,a ur aage se teri aur uss Samridh ki help bilkul nahi lunga, samjhi? Apne kaam khud karunga...kisiki zaroort nahi hai mujhe...
Nisha-(now angry at his childish behavious) Mat lo kisi ki bhi help... (realizing)EK minute, ek minute..kabir, kahin tumhe Samridh se jalan toh nahi ho rahi hai?
Kabir- (avoiding) Jalan? Matlab jealousy?
Nisha- Urdu mein hasad , waise, sachi-sachi batao...tum J ho rahe the ki nahi?
Kabir-(making faces) Nahi...main kyun Jealous ho jaayunga? Woh bhi uss Samridh se... Main bhi handsome hoon, hot hoon...phir main kyun jealous?
Nisha couldn't help but laugh at his expressions.
Kabir- (giving up)Fine, maine jealous ho raha tah...aur kyun na ho jaaungi? Fter all woh meri eklauti ek wifey ke saath flirt kar raha tha, toh todha jealous hona is not bad...It's shows ki I love you so much...
Nsiah- (laughing) Accha mera pati dev? Philosophy huh? Mr. J Singh Rathore...main sirf aapki thi, aapki hoon aur hmesha aapki hi rahungi...
She hugged Kabir.
Jwala walked in the house to see Nisha and Kabir hugging
Jwala-(turning) Sorry, sorry...maine kuch nahi dekha...
NiBir looked at her in shock and broke the hug.
Nisha- (awkwardly) Arrey Jwalu, aa na...
Jwala turned to make sure they weren't in a weird position and then entered. The three looked at each other awkwardly and then laughed to erase the awkwardness.
Nisha- Kya hua Jwalu, tu suddenly aise?
Jwala- Suddenly aise ka kya matlab? Aur mujhe todhi pata tha aap aise (she winked and the two blushed) Ok, jokes apart, mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai...
Kabir- Bol na... sab thikh hai?
Jwala- Haan jiju, and it's not about me... It's about Kirti...Woh actually kuch dino se naa Kirti bahut zyaada pareshaan hai...baat-baat pe gussa karti hai...attitude dikhati hai...
Kabir- Shouldn't Dolly be the one who should get mood swings?
Nisha shot an angry glance at him which silenced him.
Nisha- Tu isse ignore kar, kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...
Jwala- Aur kal uska mein sprain aaya tha, kaise giri yeh bataane ke liye bilkul ready nahi hai woh... Phir Rashi aayi, aur Kirti baar-baar uski baat katati thi, finally usse lekar jaldi-jaldi mein meeting ke liye chali gayi...
Nisha- Aisa toh Kirti tabhi karti hai, jab she is avoiding something...
Jwala- Wahin toh main bhi keh rahi hoon...Aisi kya baat hai jo Kirti humse chipa rahi hai... Anyways, aaj hum mall gaye the, wahaan hume Rashi mili...aur baaton-hi-batoon mein usne kisi Samridh ka naam liya, usne pucha, "Waise Kirti, Samridh ke measurements le liye naa tumne" toh her mood was off again...Baar-baar ghar jaane ki zidd karne lagi, aur ghar pahuchte hi room mein khud ko band kar diya...
Kabir- Yeh Samridh kaun hai?
Jwala- I think uske new event ka model...
Nisha- Aisa kyun kar rahi hai Kirti...mujhe lagta hai mujhe usse baat karni chahiye...
Kabir- Nahi Nisha, let's give her sometime... Jwala tu abhi ghar jaa, agar Kirti ke behaviour mein koi changes ho toh hume bata dena...
Jwala- Ok jiju, bye...
She left. Kabir looked at his wife who had confused expression on her face.
Kabir- Tu kya soch rahi hai Nisha?
Nisha- Yahin ki suddenly Kirti aisa kyun behave kar rahi hai...I think it's all because of Samridh...
Kabir- That's obvious Nisha, par aisa kya hua hai Samridh-Kirti ke beech mein ki woh itni chidchidi ho rahi hai...
Nisha- Pata nahi, aur woh batayegi bhi nahi... Par pata hai Kabir, school ke dino ki aata hai, last day tha, aur aaj jo Samridh aaya tha naa, woh unn dino bilkul geek-types tha
Kabir-(shocked) Kya? Can't believe yeh "I am so cool" geek types bhi tha...
Nisha- Haan, and he liked Kirti...last day ke get together mein usne Kirti ko propose kiya and she insulted him... Kitna ajeeb co-incidence hai naa, ki Samridh was hurt because of Kirti a few years ago and Kirti is hurt because of Samridh now?
Kabir- Nisha, kahin yeh Samridh hi Kirti ka new model toh nahi? (laughing it off) Main bhi kya bakwaas kar raha hoon, aisa todhi naa ho sakta hai...Samridh kitna common naam hai... main bhi naa... Accha hum ek kaam karte hai, kuch dino mein Kirti se baat karte hai, thikh hai?
Nisha was lost somewhere, so he snapped infront of her eyes. She looked at him.
Kabir- kya soch rahi ho?
Nisha- kuch nahi, but I think you are right, yeh Samridh school waala Samridh ho sakta hai... We have to talk to Kirti about this...
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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written by sarthak



Scene -1 At kirti's office

Rashi and kirti were discussing some official work.

Rashi - toh tumne photographer ke saare bills and documents update Kar diye

Kirti- ya rashi done.. Kal jaane se pehle Kar diya..tha...

Rashi- cool...ab yeh photographer payment ke liye irritate nahi karega...uska kaam bhi ho gaya...
Kirti- Right..

(Samridh enters)
Rashi- Hii...Samridh ...good morning

Samridh - good morning baby..

Kirti (in her mind- baby !! koi iss geek ko sikhayega how to behave professionally)

Rashi- btw Samridh kal mai tumhara CV dekh rahi thi..coz tumhara past experience update karna tha...office files mai..but man u surprised me...modelling mai itne acche and on the top of it...u passed ur college with awesome grades..
Samridh- oh thanks..

Rashi- nahi but seriously how were u able to manage both studies and modelling...

Samridh - bilkul waise hi jaise u manage both your work and your beauty. U r looking very beautiful today.

Rashi- oh kuch bhi...
Samridh (in flirtatious tone) - nahi baby seriously u r looking damn awesome today. Mujhe toh abhi se confusion ho raha hai model mai hu ya tum.

Rashi (smiling at the compliment)- thanks par tum meri kuch jyada hi tareef Kar rahe ho.

Kirti(to herself )yeh inka we find each other very attractive drama zyada nahi ho raha..I mean how blah..professionalism naam ki bhi kuch cheez hoti hai..

Samridh- No Rashi I mean it .

Rashi- aww..so sweet of you.

Samridh- thanks waise ek baat bolu??

Rashi- ha bolo na.
Samridh- tum jaisi ho waisi hi rehna kisi aur ki tarah mat banna.

Rashi- matalb??mai kuch samjhi nahi...

Samridh(looking at kirti)- your nature is very good Rashi ,you don't judge people by their outer appearance tum kisike baare mai bina kuch jaane prejudice nahi hoti unlike other people.(stressing on the words other people)

Kirti(to herself)- yeh kahin mujhe taunt toh nahi Kar raha sadoo kahin ka ,yeh saare geeks ki same problem hai ,egoistic log hamesha apne aap ko sahi samajhte hai..

Rashi- arrey kirti tum kyon itni chup chaap baithi ho...
Kirti- ohh nothing like that Rashi mujhe ek important call karna hai mai abhi 2 min mai vaapas aayi.

Rashi- ya sure.

Scene-2

Kirti came outside their cabin and pretended to be busy in her phone.
Kirti-(to herself)- Thank god yeh bahana bana diya warna andar toh inn dono ki bakwas sunkar mai pagal hi ho jaati. But kirti tujhe itna fark kyon pad raha hai agar woh Rashi ke saath flirt Kar raha hai , I mean you should focus on your work, tujhe kuch farak nahi padna chahiye uski in harkaton se . Remember one thing tu yaha par usko sirf isliye seh rahi hai because yeh tera kaam hai don't get too much affected by that geek.


Kirti goes inside the cabin again determined to focus only on her work.
Rashi - baat ho gayi kirti??
Kirti- ha Rashi...
Rashi - ek min idhar aakar yeh new designs dekh lo..
Kirti - ya sure.

Rashi was explaining about the new designs to kirti and Samridh was seating opposite to them reading a magazine.

Rashi- toh yeh left wala final karde.
Kirti- ha its good, chalega.

Rashi started tying her hairs.
Samridh- leave it Rashi tum khule baalon mai bahut acchi lagti ho.
Rashi( with a smile)- Ok Samridh jaisi tumhari marzi.

Kirti (to herself) - what the hell am doing here. Dono apni professional relationship bhool gaye hai kya and Samridh school mai toh muh se awaz nahi nikalti thi aur ab khule baalon mai acche lagti ho...idiot kahin ka.

Rashi noticed the uncomfortable look on kirti's face.

Rashi- (to herself) - yeh kirti itna weird kyon behave Kar rahi hai , mujhe pata lagana hi hoga.


Scene - 3 At kirti's office

Lunch time was about to begin.

Rashi - toh finally saare designs final ho gaye
Kirti- yup finally done.

Peon comes inside their cabin.
Peon - kirti madam aur Rashi madam aapse milne kuch log aaye hai.

Kirti - abhi iss waqt kaun aa sakta hai..
Rashi- chalo chalkar dekhte hai. Samridh we will be back in a minute.
Samridh - ya sure.

Scene -4 In the office corridor

Kirti was surprised to see dolly, saurav ,sukku , jwala and Bunty.

Rashi- hi everyone
Whole group together - hi

Kirti - tum sab yaha par, kya hua??
Saurav -arrey kirti kuch hua nahi hai balki hone wala hai.

Kirti - kya?
Dolly - arrey kirti tum bhool gayi jab hum shopping par gaye te tab Rashi ne kaha tha na ki aaj lunch saath mai karenge .

Jwala- toh isliye hum aap dono ko lene aa gaye .

Sukku - correct aur hame Jana hai Umesh Bhaiya ke restaurant jaha par Umesh bhaiya aur Aman bhabhi hamara special lunch ke saath wait Kar rahe honge . Nishu aur Kabir directly waha pahuch jayenge.

Kirti - ohh but yuh achanak ek baar call toh kar dete.(to herself- kahin inhone samridh ko dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi ,nahi mujhe kisi bhi tarah sabko samridh se dur rakhna hoga)

Rashi- common kirti, its fine. Thanks aap sab aaye u guys r very sweet. Hum dono aap sabke saath lunch ke liye jarur chalenge.

kirti- Ya toh chale ab.
Rashi- arrey ek minute pehle in sabko hamare male model se toh mila de.

kirti- (in a panicking voice)- nahi hum late ho jayenge waha par sab hamara wait Kar rahe honge.

Dolly- nahi kirti abhi toh nishu aur kabir ko aane mai time lagega aur mujhe toh uss model ko dekhna hai kitna handpump hoga na woh.
Bunty- dolly di handpump nahi handsome.

Dolly- ha ha wohi tum samajh gaye na.
Saurav- par dolly kya jarurat hai..

Sukku- tu jyada j mat ho dolly di sirf uss se milne jaa rahi hai shaadi abhi bhi woh tujhse hi karegi.

Everybody laughed while Saurav made a innocent face.
They moved towards kirti's cabin.

Kirti- (to herself)- yaar yeh kya ho gaya Rashi ne kaha phansa diya ek male model hai koi Bollywood superstar nahi Jo uss se Milne me jaa rahi hai. Agar Samridh se yeh log mil gaye toh bahut problem ho jayegi, iss geek ne mera jeena mushkil Kar rakha hai.

They opened the door of the cabin but found no one.
There was a note kept on table .
Rashi - "Sorry mujhe urgently apne friend se milne jaa raha hu see u in the evening".
Abhi toh yahi tha maybe 2 minute pehle hi nikala hoga.

Kirti breathed a sigh of relief.

Kirti- who toh abhi chala gaya ab hume bhi chalna chahiye uss se phir kabhi mil lena.

Bunty- ab sab jaldi chalo kyonki mere pet mai chuhe basketball khel rahe hai.

Everyone laughed at bunty's statement and marched outside the office.
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SCENE 1
UMAN RESTAURANT

Aman - laddo... tum kya kar rhe ho... sab log aate hi honge... chhodo vo kaam baaki log h na...

Umesh - offo aman... tension kyu le rhi ho... ho gya bus... ur ye lo aa gya mai...

Voices - ur hum bhi...

Two voices came from background. Aman and umesh turned to see nibir coming in. Nisha ran and hugged umesh while kabir hugged aman.

Umesh and kabir side hugged each other and lead to a big table arranged for them. Aman excused herself to the kitchen while the three of them seated.

Kabir - umesh... meri behen se kaam karwa rha h... (faking anger)

Nisha - to... tu nhi karwata unki behen se kaam...

Kabir - oe maine kab tjhse kaam karwaya... mai to tera kitta khayal rakhta hu... tu hi h jo jabardasti karti h...

Nisha - ha ha bda aaya khayal rakhne wala... ek kaam to thik se karna aata nhi h...

Kabir - dekh nisha tu bhot bol rhi h ha...

Nisha - oe ungli kise dikha rha h... meri marzi jitna bolu tjhe kya...

Kabir - nisha...

Nisha - kabir...

A group of voices - dno chup ho jao...

They turned to look at the source and found the cousins and rashi standing with irritated written on their faces. Nibir looked at each other and gave them a silly smile while they shook their heads.

Kabir - sorry...

Nisha - yeah u should be...

Kabir - oe tjhe nhi bola maine...

Nisha snorted while dolly shouted.

Dolly - shut ups u both... kabhi nhi sudhroge na... har samay ladte rehte ho...

Nisha - sorry dolly di...

All of them then sighed and hugged each other while jwala introduced rashi to the rest of the gang members.

Rashi - jwala u sure na ye dno (signalling towards nibir) husband wife hi h... mjhe lga school going teenagers h...

She giggle as others laughed while nibir made pouty faces.

Dolly - nhi rashi ye hmare very much in loves wale love birds h...

She winked while nisha blushed.

Kabir - ab dolly ji meri biwi ko chidana band kijie... ur baith jaeye (mocking)

He showed his tongue to her while she did the same making other chuckles. All of them get seated and started chatting while umesh and aman served them with the delicious food and joined them too.

Sukku - to rashi... kaisa lga tmhe hmara gang...

Rashi - u people are pretty cool u know... i dont have any brother or sister... so its so enthralling to see u guys and actually m jealous too...

Kirti - u have us...

They smiled at each other and started eating and talking again.

Aman - rashi maine suna koi bada h handsome banda tum lgo ka lead male model h...

All the girls perked up at this while boys frown and kirti wanted to ran out of the room now.

Dolly - ha aman ye to hme unse milane bhi wali thi par vo hi khi chala gya...

Saurav scowled while dolly eyed him.

Rashi - ha shayad samridh ko koi kaam hoga tabhi chala gya warna...

Kabir - samridh???

Nisha and kabir looked at each other and then at kirtis scared and irritated face.

Rashi - ha samridh hmara main model...

Kirti - (monologue) ye log bina us champu k baat nhi kar sakte kya... yha bhi mera picha nhi chhod rha h ye ladka..

Nisha - what a coincidence... mai ur kabir bhi mere ek old school friend se mile jiska naam...

Kirti - (almost shouting) mjhe icecream khani h umesh bhaiya...

Everybody turned to her while she smiled sheepishly... as nisha and kabir pass each other a knowing look.

All were talking when sukkus phone rang and as soon as he saw the caller id his face lit up like a 100 watt bulb.

Bunty - kiska phone h sukku bhaiya...

Saurav - (whisper shouting) alisha... iski hone wali biwi ka...

Bunty - sacchi???

Everybody stifle a laugh as sukku choked on his water. He hurriedly look at kabir who seem to glare at him and sukku turned that very glare to saurav while kabir and saurav grinned at each other secretly.


SCENE - 2

Sukku excused himself and pushed a button on his phone.

Sukku - hello...

Alisha - hello sukku... kaise ho...

Sukku - better than ever...

Alisha - hmmm???

Sukku - matlab m good... tum btao...

Alisha - m good too... baaki sab kaise h... ur dolly di... unka baby kaisa h... ur...

Sukku - (laughing) bus alisha...

Alisha -(almost pouting) has kyu rhe ho...

Sukku - sab thik h alisha... dolly di bhi thik h ur ha baby abhi born nhi hua h... to i assume agar dolly di thik h to baby bhi thik hoga... (and he started laughing again)

Alisha - very funny (mocking and blushing)

Sukku - ok... ok m sorry... r u angry...

Alisha - hmm... sochne do... may be may be not...

Sukku - (scared) mai majak kar rha tha...

Alisha -(innocently) mai bhi...

It took sukku a minute to realise what she said.

Sukku - (faking anger) alisha...

She smiled cheekily and it melted sukku though he can't see her still feel her every emotion.

Alisha - sukku... tum gussa ho? Mai majak kar rhi thi...

Sukku - tmhe lagta h mai naraz hounga tmse...

Alisha - nhi...

Sukku - ek baat puchu...

Alisha - hmmm...

Sukku - tum sabke baare m mjhse hi puchti ho... khud kyu nhi puch leti unse...

Alisha bit her tongue how could she tell him that she just wanted to talk to him regardless of the topics...

Alisha - vo mai... vo... ha... kyu ese kyu puch rhe ho tmhe pasand nhi h ki mai tmhe phone karu... bore karti hu na mai tmhe... pasand nhi tmhe to nhi karungi tmhe pareshan...

She did a small party jig at her answer where sukku was dumbfounded at the situation he has landed himself. He didn't meant that he was just trying to pull her leg.

Sukku - nhi alisha mera vo matlab nhi tha... mai bus.. mai vo... m sorry alisha... ur mjhe achha lgta h tmse baat karna jab bhi tum call karti ho... esa kuch nhi h... mai bilkul pareshan bhi nhi hota hu... shayad mai hi tmhe pareshan karta hu...

He was going on n on when suddenly alisha called him.

Alisha - sukku...

He silenced immediately.

Alisha - sukku... tmhe mjhse baat karna achha lagta h??

Sukku - (he had to admit it to her now) ha... bhot achha lagta h...

They both were smiling in silence when someone called sukku...

Kabir - sale sahib aap meri behen se baatein baad m kar lijiega... aakar pehle lunch complete kar le...

Sukku narrowed his eyes at kabir as he stressed on "meri behen".

Alisha - sukku... bye... jao bhaiyu bula rhe h...

Sukku - hmmm... bye alisha...
Alisha - sukku...

Sukku - hmmm..

Alisha - tum mjhe bilkul pareshan nhi karte... ur...

Sukku - (his heart thumping) ur???

Alisha - mjhe bhi tmse baat karna achha lagta h...

N she hurriedly cut the call leaving sukku stunned. As he recovered he grinned widely and moved towards the table with a wide smile.

Everybody was amazed as how happy he looked and soon the lunch was dismissed and everybody started for their places.



SCENE - 3

Kirti and rashi were also moving out when nisha called her.

Nisha - kirti sun na... tjhse kuch puchna h...

Kabir too came in view as rashi smiled and moved towards her car.

Nisha - kal hm samridh se mile... tjhe yaad h samridh... jo hmare sath school m tha.. hmare batch ka topper ur jisne...

Kirti was mortified hearing what nisha told her. She was not in a mood to divulge anything to him.

Kirti - (faking laugh) kya bol rhi h nishu... kaun samridh... mjhe koi samridh nhi yaad...

Kabir tried to speak too when kirti interrupted...

Kirti - achha guys mjhe jana h... rashi wait kar rhi h ur office m bhot kaam h... bye...

She hurriedly went off leaving nibir confused over her behaviour.

Kabir - ise kya hua...

Nisha - pta nhi... par pta lagana padega...

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Scene 1

Next Morning At 10:30 Am at Samriddh's Company

Samriddh was sitting on his cabin and was busy with some files then after few minutes he calls his secretary to know about his today's schedule...

His secretary then knocks the door and said *May I come in sir*

Samriddh - yes come in...

Then she came inside and stands infront of him...

Payal(his secretary) - sir...

Samriddh - yes kirti tell me my today's schedule...

Payal - sir its Payal not kirti she said hesitantly...

Hearing this samriddh slapped himself mentally on taking kirti's name instead of her...thinking that how can he made such mistake...while working..but then within a second he again regained his super cool attitude and said...

Samriddh (with attitude)- yes payal ghayal who ever you are I don't care and i dont have any time to waste in knowing your name...so just tell me my today's schedule...

Payal - sir 11 am me Singhaniya and company k sath meeting hai, 11:30 am ko waadhwa's k sath meeting h, 12:15 ko Jain fabrics k sath meeting hai and apne apni afternoon ki sari meeting cancel krne ka order de dia tha kal...to rest of the meetings has been cancelled...

Samriddh- OK...and listen...ye jain fabrics whi h na jinse do din pehle meeting cancel ho gyi thi??

Payal - yes sir whi h...due to some circumstances ye meeting cancel krni padi thi...

Samriddh - OK u may go...

And then Payal left and he again got busy with his files...

At 12:14 AM

Samriddh was heading towards his conference hall...he is always punctual with his time like a true business man Acc. To him...respect time...time is money...as soon as he entered the hall...he saw a young man who was waiting for him and of his same age and his face was looking verry much familiar ...the man also looked at him in same way as samriddh looked at him...then within few seconds both shouted in unison...

Both in unison - hey what are you doing here??

After saying this both laughed lightly...and then saurav said...

Saurav - hie samriddh kaisa hai tu yaar...pehchaan bhi nhi aa rha tu to...us din ke baad to tu gayab Hi ho gya...as soon as he said this he bite his tongue to make him remember his insult's day...

And then a Silence of awkwardness took place between them

Samriddh then broke the silence to reduce the awkwardness and said...

Samriddh - hie saurav ...tu to abhi bhi pehle ki tarah Hi h...

Saurav - ha wo to h...but tu to hero ban gya yr...anyway maine to sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki jis samriddh malhotra se aaj Milne wala hu wo tu niklega...

Samriddh - ya...so Jain fabrics is your company...saurav nodded...then they start their meeting...

Then after half an hour ...their meeting got over ...

After meeting

Saurav - ab itne salo baad mila h to contact me rahiyo...samriddh nodded then they exchanged their numbers...and both dispersed for their work as samriddh have to leave for kirti's office...

Saurav was walking on road thinking that he will tell gangwal cousins about his surprised meeting with samriddh when his eyes falls on the poster which was hanged outside the road...*masala dosa* he reads and remembers how he and dolly named their company as DOSA...though they registered it with the name *Jain Fabrics*...and then a small smile formed in his lips...remembering that old gud days...

Scene 2

At Afternoon

At Cafe

Kabir was sitting on cafe and was waiting for shekhar since 10 minutes...and silently thanking shekhar that he gave his visiting card to him at their verry first meeting...through which he got his phone number...

Kabir(monologue) - kaha reh gya ye gadha...picchle das minute se wait krra hu iska...accha Hi hota ki use usi din bevkuf bana deta jis din papa ne idea dia tha agar ye out of town na gya hota...he was getting frustrated while waiting for him...deh he again continued... Kabir beta wait kar le...kaam Tera h...ata hi hoga wo chuha tere pinjare me kaid hone...he then took a deep breathe to relax himself...and again started waiting for him patiently...then after some what 5 minutes shekhar arrived...

Then both kabir and shekhar shook their hands and seated comfortably on their chairs...

Shekhar - ha Mr.Kumar boliye itna urgently kaise bulaya??

Kabir - firstly don't call me Mr.KUMAR ye naam mujhe bhut elderly feel krata h...call me kabir its cool...he said with his carefree attitude...

Shekhar - OK...kabir bolo kya baat h...he said while smiling...

Kabir(monologue) - chuha hasa Matlab pinjare me fasa...

Kabir - wo actually maine aapko apne business k bare me btaya tha na...aur us business k liye acchi jagah dhundne k bare me..

Shekhar - ya wo readymade dresses and all na??

Kabir - ha actually mujhe jald se jald yha apna business set karna..h I don't have much time...and apne kaha tha that u will help me...

Shekhar - ya I said but wo kya h na mai bhi apne kaam me busy Jo jata hu to I hardly get time...

Kabir -ya I understand shekhar...that's why I called u because I have an offer for u..

Shekhar- kaisa offer??

Kabir -ab mai yha aapke Siva kisi ko janta nhi and 2 3 baar Milne k baad lagta h that u are a trusted person so lets make a deal professionally...aap place dhundne me meri help kijiye and I will give u 15% commission...isse aapka time bhi waste nhi hoga...because for u it will became your business deal aur mera kaam bhi ho jayega...what say???

Shekhar thinks for some time and said...

Shekhar - OK kabir mai is bare me soch ke call krta hu...kabir nodded then they again shook their hand and both left from there...



Scene 3

Shekhar's Home

Shekhar was sitting on his sofa and was thinking about the offer that kabir gave him...

Shekhar(monologue)- ek place dhundne ka 15% commission...not bad...dubaai se aaya h paise wala bakra h...aur sabse badi baat ye mujhpe trust karta h shekhar pe as soon as he said he laughed loudly and again continued...viraj ki academy to mai hasil kar Hi lunga aur iska 15% bhi pbura nhi hai...ab agar apple I Phone 6 k sath Samsung J7 free me mil ra to rakhne me kya arz h...aur waise bhi agar is kabir se accha contact bna k rakha jaye...to is bakre ko bhi halaal kia ja sakta h...karleta hu iska offer accept...ab koi bakra khud Hi halaal chahta h to mai kya karu...saying this he again laugh out loudly...

Scene 4

At KNH

Kabir was marching here and their in hall since 2 hours...seeing him like this nisha got frustrated and said...

Nisha - kabir baitha ja na yaar...tujhe aise March karte hue dekh k mera sar ghum ra...

Kabir - kaise baith jau nisha...uska ab tak phone nhi aaya...kahin usne phone nhi kia to??kahin usne hamari deal accept karne se mana kar dia to???aur kahin hamara plan fail ho gya to??fir hum kya krenge??he said this in one go...with tensed voice...

Nisha then came towards him and holded his one hand with her and said...

Nisha - relax kabir...itna tension mat le...tere tension lene se kuch nhi hone wala...so think positive...uska call aata Hi hoga...

Kabir - aur nhi aaya to??

Nisha - aayega...I trust my hubby...mere hubby ke charm se koi nhi Bach paya aaj tak samjha so don't challenge my hubby...okk...

Kabir then pulled her closer to himself n said *accha*...n as soon as he said dis his phone started ringing...and the call was of shekhar...seeing the name of shekhar in his caller I'd he jumped with excitement like a small kid...while jumping his phone falls on sofa...

Nisha - kabir relax...relax ho ke phone utha...he nodded and attended the call and put the phone on speaker...

Kabir - hello shekhar...

Shekhar - ya kabir...actually maine tumare offer ke bare me socha...and your offer seems convincing so I accepted it...

Kabir - OK...great...then I will call u...later and tell u when we will meet...next time..

Shekhar - OK then...bye n he hanged the call...as soon as he hanged the call...nibir hugged each other in excitement that the first step of their plan became success...then after breaking the hug...

Kabir - phas gya chuha pinjare me...he said with grin..

Nisha - ha...maine bola tha na...mere hubby k charm se koi nhi Bach sakta...she said n winks..

Kabir - ha wo to h...saying dis he again pulled her in bone crushing hug...

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