Rantara SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho.. (part 1 pg 1)

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[B]Hellopss!!!! 😃
Back vid something that was cooking in my mind from Last two weeks..
And finally I penned it down..
I don't know ye kaisa hoga coz may be it will resemble with some typical drama.. 🤢

Don't worry it is complete..
And will be of six or five parts toh please aap log jhel Lena..
Please


PART 1



With the first ray of sunlight in his room his eyes frowned a bit. But his lips crept into a smile as he felt little bit heavy on his chest. He opened his eyes only to see his shining angel lying beside him with her head on his chest and fingers on his heart. 😳
Her hair were flying because of the cool breeze of morning that was coming into the room from window. He smelled the scent of those hair and kissed her her head. She smiled in her sleep and cuddled more into him. He chuckled on her childish behaviour. He was RAGHU NAIK, the famous business tycoon of India. And with him she was his Life, his everything,love of his life and his beloved wife ANTARA NAIK. It has been a year of their marriage and they 're expecting their first baby. 😳 Yeah!! Antara was four months pregnant. Both of them were very excited to welcome a new member in their family. Raghu cares a lot about Antu. He pampered her like a little girl.
Sometimes he scold her for being careless about her diet and when she shows Nakhraas in having food. Yet he is a busy man but he gave as much time he could give to her. Wasn't she So Lucky!!!! 😃
No doubt that Raghu is also very lucky to have her in his life. She made him eat his breakfast with her own hands. Sometimes he teased her so much that she blushed like a red tomato. He really loved to see her blushing like that. She managed everything very well. Even they have servants in their house but she made food for him with her own hands.(Sanju di!! 😉)
Coz Raghu always said
Antu yaar !! Mujhey tumharey haath ka bana khana khana hai..
I told you na..

She just smiled on his kids like attitude and said
Raghu tum bhi na kabhi kabhi bachon jaisi zid krtey ho... Pagal!!!
I don't know how am I going to handle two two kids...
Hey bhagwaan... You two will make me insane totally..
😲

While Raghu's reaction on this was...
Babess!!! U are so gone... 😆 🤣

She loves him so much that she cannot imagine her one sec about him. She got worried if he got late just by a minute of his normal timings to return home.
Two days before


Antu I am sorry na yaar!! It was an urgent meeting upar se we came to know that tabhi Jana tha so I couldn't inform you. I am sorry Jaan..

*Antara hugged him tightly and sobbed*

Please don't do this next time. You don't know how much scared I was. Tumhey kuch ho jaye ye soch k hi jaan nikal jati h meri. I love you so much. Like anything.

Well!!! I love me too... 😆

[COLOR=MAGENTA]Hawww!!!!
😡 (she hitted him in his stomach vid her elbow lightly)

He pretended as if he was hurted. She laughed on his drama. He joined her too. Then ge shoved her tears with his thumb and said

You know na that I don't like these biggie tears in ur beautiful eyes. I don't wanna see them in ur eyes next time. They aren't meant to be here. Samjhi aap!!!

She nodded silently and smiled.

Aur phir it has one more disadvantage. You know?? Chalo I will tell you. Agar aisey rougi na toh humari baby bhi kahin MINI RONDU ANTU na ho... 😉

After saying this he rushed for his life.

Tum toh... Ruko tum batati hoon tumhey main

And she ran after him.. Life was going on a beautiful track for them. Everything was just perfect. What else u want from life.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Present Day


Antu my Jaan... Good morning

Amm... Good Morning

... And she cuddled more into him. He understood that Today she was in full mood to sleep. So he wake up from the bed vidout disturbing her and after tucking her in her blanket properly. He got ready for the office and as he came back in the room he saw her standing there, near the bed with her hands crossed near her chest. She was looking at him continuously. He looked at her like What?? Kind of expressions.

Uthaya kyun nahi tumney mujhey???

Because my angel was looking hell beautiful while sleeping and I didn't want to ruin her sleep

Antara blushed as he said those words.

Haaye Main mar janwaan... Kya sharmati ho???

Her blush increased.😳 she somehow controlled her and pretended not to be affected.

Achaa!! Bass abhi bohot Hua.. You wait here for few minutes and I will make ur breakfast in 2 minutes

Arey!!! Nahi yaar I will have it in my canteen. I am getting late Antu..

No ways!! Canteen ka khana bilkul nahi. Last time u know na u had food poisoning bcz of that. Wait!! It will be ready in two minutes...

Two minutes!! Maggi banaogi kya??

He laughed while antra gave no reaction.

Hehehe!!! Lame joke. Wait here or I won't talk to you for one whole month if u go like this. Samjhey tum 😈

Raghu was very scared of her this tone. He knew she really won't talk to her if she has said it. So losing their funny battle he finally agreed.

Okay!! Samajh Gaye...

Good Boy!!! I will be back in 2 minutes 😊

She went out of the room and Raghu went in front of mirror to wear his tie and to do his hair. He was humming a song when he heard a loud scream of Antara.

Raghuuu...

He instantly rushed with full speed and what he saw was really very horrible sight for him. That moment killed him almost. His Antara was lying on the floor near the stairs with severe injuries on her body. Blood was oozing out from her head. Actually she got slipped from the stairs when she was going towards the kitchen. Raghu ran to her...

Antaraaa...

She was screaming in pain. Raghu immediately took her to a nearby hospital..

Part 1 is done...
Don't hit me for doing this with them... Pleaseee...
But it is necessary for some reason that you will come to know later...

Abhi k liye please comment whether u liked it or not..
I am waiting for your valuable comments...

Yours and yours only SHIVI...
😃
Edited by shivi808 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agar tum saath ho 😃
Naam ne merey dil ko chuliya and I'm sure the story will do the same 😃
Haven't read it but will do that soon 😉

Res me for now

And congrats for your new story my darling 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kuch lines maine kahi suni hain...nd its very much true...
Superb start gappu rani...kitne pyare lag rahe hain rantara i just imagined... Would b mumma daddy...hayeee...kitne cute cute...last part was heart wrenching...but fikr ki koi baat nahi kyonki...agar tum saath ho...toh every thing will b fine...
But mujhe kisiki bahut yaad aayi...u know that na baccha...
Keep writing... Love u loads...muahhh
Edited by Rasika9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super duper hit... shivi... 😆

its awesome dear 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhi53

super duper hit... shivi... 😆

its awesome dear 🥱



O yaar please bring those parts tomorrow which I have given you... Ok??

Don't expect thank you from me... 😆
Coz its Lub uhh!!!!; from my side 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivi808



O yaar please bring those parts tomorrow which I have given you... Ok??

Don't expect thank you from me... 😆
Coz its Lub uhh!!!!; from my side 😃



haan ... dear muje pta tha tu.. yhi bolegi... islie mne already rkh lie... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My darling,the lines are very familiar to me 😳
I loved it though 😃
Shivi,Antara is four months pregnant and she fell off the stairs 😭
Please ussey Theek karo yaar..
She fell off and I was like "ouch!!" 😕
Hope she'll be ok in the next part warna mera muh aloo jaysa ho jaayga 😕
Update soon.
Love and hugs,
Sanju
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivi dear, How's you?...
The story is fantastic, superb, mindblowing😉👏
Muje dialogues pasand aaye...😆😆😆
Hayye Main mare jawan Iss Story pe😳
They're acting like a kids...
But at last, yeh kya hua😲😲
Hope sab tik ho😕😕
Continue Soon...
LOve YOu..❤️
Tare Care.😊

P.S. Dear if you have a little time, then plz leave a little comment on my stories😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agar tum saath ho beautiful title 😃
Beautiful update.. 😃
Raghu ke kuch baaton main kho gayi thi 😳
Ye Kiya yaar antu gir gayi woh aur baby safe ho bass..
Cont soon golu.. 😊
Thank you 😊
Love n hugs!! 😃

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