DivyAnsh OS (sunshine)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys I dunn know what I wrote but I just wanted to start... as I can see there is not even a single ff,ss,... the forum is sooo silent.

Also I wanted to explore Anshuman's feelings for bhoomi and divya... as many people thinks how can he fell in love with another women...I have tried to show this thinking and helplessness

Anyways this OS is completely my imagination.

It's a bit sensual. But I have controlled my dirty mind

Well enough of my bak bak .

All the rotten ANDA'S (EGGS) AND TOMATTOESSS ARE WELLCOME.😆

Please give your precious feed back

and i do embrace criticism positively😃

location

(DIVYANSH ROOM)

REMINICISING THE MORNING EVENTS

She was crying badly

( she looked at LORD SHIVA's idol and goes near it) maaf kar dijiye shiv ji aaj fir maine sabse jhooth bola, sach chhupaya

Majboor hoon mai apne dil ke haathon,,, ek arse ke baad mujhe ek parivaar ka pyar mila hai. Mai inhe khona nahi chahti , lekin mai jaanti hoon jis din sabke saamne ye sach aayega sab nafrat karengey mujhse.

Ansh ne aaj mujhe bacha liya jhooth bola unhone mere liye, sirf isliye taki unke parivaar ka, apno ka dil na tootey.

Jaise hi sab theek ho jaega to mai chali jaungi yahn se

She was so lost in her thoughts,that she dint realized that ansh is standing in front of her

Kya kaha tumne

"Intense eyelock..."

DIVYA - yahi ke mai jaldi hi yahan se chali jaungi, thank you ansh mujhe aaj sab ke samne embarrass hone se bachane ke liye, I know ye sab aapne apni family ke liye kia hai, jab unko pata chalega ke maine unhe itna bada dhoka diya hai to vo toot jaenge

ANSH - (still looking in at her) ho gaya tumhara ab meri baat suno, bahot dino se bahot kuchh bol rahi ho tum aur mai sun raha hoon,,, ab mai bolunga or tum sunogi

Mai samajh nahi pa raha hoon ye sab kya ho rha hai ,,, kaun ho tum ye nahi janta mein, kahan se aayi ho, yahan kyu aayi ho, meri or mere parivaar ke liye itna kuchh kyu kiya tumne, sabka itna dhyan kyun rakh rahi ho, kuchh nahi janta mai

Bas itna jaanta hoon k kheecha chala ja raha hoon tumhari taraf, tumhari baatein, tumahri acchhai, tumhari wafa, sabke liye tumhara pyaar, nahi rok pa raha mai khudko .

Bahot koshish ki maine tumse door rehne ki, apne dil ko ye samjhane ki, ke ye meri bhoomi nahi hai, agar tumse pyar kar liya to dhoka ho jaega uske sath, bahot pyaar kia hai maine bhoomi se, lekin uske jaane k baad toot gaya thha mai fir tum aayi meri life me, meri har takleef ko apna bana liya tumne, nashe me doob chukka thha mai, tumne firse insaan banaya hai mujhe .mujhe us andhere se bahar nikala hai tumne.Mere rude behaviour ko har din har pal bardasht kia hai tumne or kabhi uff tak nahi ki.

(she looks at him tears rolling down her cheeks, she was breathing heavily... like her lungs stopped working)

Bhoomi mera pehla pyaar hai, par kehte hain ye zaroori nahi k aapka pehla pyaar hi aapka aakhri pyaar ho... mujhe mera aakhri pyaar mil gaya hai divya

I LOVE YOU

( she stunned as well as shocked to hear such things from ansh...she wanted to say something but lacks air... she could not breathe before she could say anything ANSH continues)

Ho sakta hai log mere pyar par sawal uthaye ho sakta hai unhe lage ke maine apni patni ko dhoka diya hai, but who cares tum ho to mujhe kisiki parvah nahi

(he turned to face her)

Jaanti ho tum har jagah ho

(cupping her face)

Meri aankhon me, meri saanso me

(he took her hand and placed it on his heart)

Ye,,,,,, ye tum ho... Sun sakti ho na

Or tum kehti ho ke tum chali jaogi... Mujhe chhode kar,,, kaise jiyunga mai tumhare bina divya

bhala koi insaan bina dhadkan k jee sakta hai?

Divya maheshwari,,, aaj mai anshuman prajapati apne poore hosh o hawas mein bhagwan k saamne tumhein apni patni sweekar krta hoon. (and with that he filled her hair partition with vermillion, she closed her eyes)

(she has tears in her eyes, she was crying... Crying badly... And she shattered in front of him)

Ansh holds her... DIVYA...

DIVYA- itna pyaar kab ho gaya mujhse ansh

Pata nahi lekin,,, deewano ki tarah pyaar krta hu mai tumhe.

Maine tumse pyar kia hai,,, tumhare chehre se nahi, tumhein bhoomi samajh ke nahi. ,,,,, itna pyaar k vo yuvraaj to kya mai khudko bhi tumhein koi takleef nahi pahochane dunga.

Tum tak aane wale har dukh har takleef ko mujhse hokar guzarna hoga, mai tumhe itna pyaar dunga k tumhare ateet ki sari buri yaadein bhool jaogi tum. Ab tumhein kisise door jane ki zaroorat nahi hai,,, lets start life afresh together.

And she hugged him tightly... I love you ansh I love you sooo much bahot bar koshish ki tumhein sach batane ki par himmat hi nahi hui, mai tumhein khona nahi chahti ansh meri duniya sirf aap se hai ( and with that she gets unconscious)

(He picks her, placed her on the bed as he turned to move, she gets up and grabbed his hand ansh moved and sits besides her on bed)

DIVYA- an...

ANSH- Sshhh relax, mai yahi hoon kahin nahi jaunga, kabhi nahi jaunga

Hamesha tumhare pas rahunga SUNSHINE. ( gave her a peck on her forehead)

He removed her left earing and kissed on her earlobe,,, she was breathing heavily

He looked at her face intensely and gets drowned in her doe like eyes,,, she was looking pretty like a picture...he was mesmerized

Mesmerized?

Yes mesmerized seeing her innocent, beautiful face, deep eyes

He scanned her face eagerly He looked at her as if she was the only woman on earth, as if there was nothing else in their private universe but the two of them.

He planted a gentle kiss on her neck and faced her again to see her,,, he so wanted to see her,,,, yes he wanted to stare at her face whole night

She cupped his face She'd become addicted to this, to him. She adored the way he looked at her she wrapped her arms tightly around his shoulders and he whispered in her ear...

So jao sunshine,,, mai yahin hoon tumhare paas

She buried her face in his chest... And cuddled in his embrace smiling.

He didnt sleep and was just looking at her face whole night.

I wont let you get hurt baby I love you...

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

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snehaHCAPK thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice @zubi_23.
luved d os. n i could imagine divya n ansh having this convo so gud job. keep writing.
..Kitsune.. thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
That was a very sweetly written OS. Thanks for sharing :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
thanks SNEHA and KITSUNE
i want to write more on DivyAnsh... but i dunn like death tracks so i am not watching the show atleast for a weak,,,, ll see how the story move ahead after the leap...,,, i scared who ll be the male lead 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice os
please write on new leads as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great story! Divyansh rocked!! Really missing them.

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