MG FF : A SECOND LIFE #5 Discontinued Note page 110 , May 1st, 2018 - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago








PART 58


Arabian girl.. the words brought maan out of their sweet moment , he never that the one encounter that still was engraved in his heart will be refreshed with his wife.. maan looked at geet and she was still in a trance with their sweet romance and maan just shrugged off the feeling that he again felt seeing those brown hazels.. he smiled towards his wife who was now away from him and was much enjoying drenching in the rain..the loud thunder made her scared and she immediately came and wrapped her hands around his torso


..her dress was hugging her like second skin actuating her curves.. maan's hands pulled her close..in an attempt to forget that one memory of the unknown girl whom he named the arabian girl ..


geet looked at maan and found him looking at her lost .. her eyes dipped in shyness and it was not before she found warmness spread within her as his lips met hers.. there was no restriction yet there was a shyness from both sides ..


maan was in a trance when he kissed and softly took her lower lip in his upper lip kissing her slowly like cherishing her very lavishly..her hands gripped him close and maan made her hands free from his torso making them engulf on his neck.. he slowly pulled her away from the shower to the shed that was on the KM terrace..that was witnessing their first expression of love.. she looked at him and geet found herself getting herself out of breadth as he kissed so passionately ..


his tongue toyed with hers..he nibbled and sucked her and in an attempt he lifted her from her waist supporting the wall making her trap between his body and the wall..



he slowly parted and saw her eyes closed and her lips swollen , maan tried to find any kind of discomfort in her , today he couldn't control himself , he was falling for his wife and he kissed her..

Maan was contemplating and found that she was still standing there probably shaking and shivering with the moment of their's , trying to grasp the newly evolved feelings of hers , whole day she was busy sorting out the feelings of hers and now maan gave her solution.. there was a sudden excitement , a happiness within her .. she at once opened her eyes to look at maan.. maan was still lost in his thoughts and was thinking that he had forced his feelings on her but he was startled when he found her softly pecking his lips in a return gesture and ran away leaving a super confused maan.

In **** RESTAURANT

Arohi was still sulking and arjun was trying to make her mood light..she had spend whole two hours in worry..arjun was not picking up the calls and was not even in his office , she was scared , though she had forbidden all the negative thoughts still with the passing time her worry was increasing ..

Please talk to me aru.. arjun said giving her a flower from the bouquet that he had brought for her.. purple orchids arohi's favorite .. today he had thought that he will make this date special for them but it turned special that he wont forget in this lifetime ..

Aru baba I am sorry.. my phone's battery was dead and I was..i was.. out for a surprise.. arjun said helplessly .. he was out for a gift for her. It was their two month anniversary today and now since everything was on track he had finally thought that why not have a first date with his wify after marriage but all the arrangements and plan failed..

What surprise..hauhh..you didn't think that I would be alone..you didn't think that I would be worrying for you.. pata hai how scared I was it was like someone was sucking life out of me arohi said with a little glum voice..

I was there for you..i wanted to give you that ring ..i saw that in an auction and you know ** is two hour drive from here so I was just in to it..pata hi chala time kab chala gaya and wo ring bhi koi aur le gaya arjun said with a dull voice and his eyes were having a guilt for not getting the perfect gift..

This melted arohi .. she smiled and came towards him.arjun was sitting with a dejected face..

Isliye mood off tha.. don't worry I have many ring..aur wo sirf ek ring hi toh thi..


Tumhare liye hogi woe k ring , mere liye wo mere emotions the , kitni cute ring thi wo bilkul tumhari tarah.. his words made arohi to smile and she kissed his cheek.. making him turn towards her..

(dialogue courtesy :KMH season 1)

I am sorry .. arohi finally said.. par hamara rishta us ring se thodi na hai.. hamara rishta dil se hai arjun.. she held hand and kept on her heart finally making him smile..

Next :

Arjun : arjun , ek aisa ladka jo sirf ek guroor tha ek fitoor tha , ek junoon tha..ek aisa ladka jiski zindagi me koi nai tha..jisne ek din ek pal ke liye zindagi chod die k dil ke liye duniye...

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Maan : geet tum ye mat sochna ki main ye sab tumhare liye kar raha hun swarthy(selfish ) hai ye maan singh khurana and apne liye isne tumhe apni zindagi bana liya hai..

Aaj se zindagi ki har subah tum se hogi har sham tum par hogi..

CONFFESION time.. my fav dialogues

How many r waiting









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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update šŸ‘
maan is lost in her arabian girl
geet is enjoying in rain but with thunder sound she back to maan's armšŸ˜‰
maaneet kissed mahiii mahiii
haye finally their first kiss after 58 parts šŸ˜†

aru is angry with arjun but he want to surprise her
but ring toh koi aur le gaya
waiting for confession šŸ˜‰
Edited by preetymaaneet - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting Eagerly for the next. Waiting when Maan will know that Geet is only the Arabian girl.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome finally maaneet moving in their relation.
arjun & aru still awesome..always love arjun's cuteness
cute update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...for a moment i thought maan is kissing geet thinking about Arabian girl in his trance ...but he shrugged his feelings and got shocked when geet came running and hugged maan when there was thunder sound...this is their first kiss and both were in there dreamland feeling each other...poor arjun wanted to surprise his wife with beautiful ring but all his plan spoiled by not getting ring and at the same time making her furious...luckily arohi understood him and his intentions and let go her anger... eagerly waiting for their confessions...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! wonderfully written! Maan lost in his Arabian girl! Maaneet kiss! intense passionate kiss! Arjun plan's flopped! Arohi angry bt she forgives him! update soon! lovely precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Lovely maaneet moment
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update
romantic maaneet
maan kiss geet n geet reciprocate it
cute arjun n arohi


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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update loved it
Awesome Manet moment
Arohi is angry with Arjun
And arjun manofy Her
Superb too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update but was very small
Maan lost in Arabian girl.
Maanest ' s liplock
Hope to more maaneet in next part
Will be waiting

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