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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Hey piya
really sorry 4 not commenting on previous parts
busy with all da festivities now a days
btw happy pongal...(dont no u celebrate it or not)
coming 2 story...
Finally both sisters came infront of asad...
Nd zoe is really mean yaar
she only cares about money n herself
asad dint listen 2 zoya...dis man is always in a rush
ek baar sun to leta...
Now zoya left...but where?
hope asad finds her soon n brings her home...jaldi!!!! nd also complete zoe's story 4 4ever
waiting 4 nxt part
update soon
thanq



Don't worry dear 😃
Glad u got the time to read now
Next chapter is the last one
Hope you will enjoy reading it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harkav

I read the story in one time its an interesting one pls continue soon .loved it so much.



Thank you for reading 😃
Glad u liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Amazing update

Zoe is a bitch how can she do to her own sis
She even agreed to sell her daughter
Asad realised the truth about zoya
Hope everything fall back into place soon
Continue soon:'))




Everything will be fine in the next chapter 😃
Glad u liked the update 😃
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Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Update Tonight..????
Yahan toh 1:30 AM bajj rahe hai...
Aur kitna wait karna padega.



Mayur my friend...you forgot I live in Los angeles
Tumhara 1:30 at night is equal to mine 2:00 pm in the afternoon 😃
Updating in 15 min now...ab meri raat ho gayi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Pia,

Main kahan se start karoon? Just caught up wid all the chaps. Ryt now im feeling all sorts of emotions, few mins back i was crying.


One thing im sure if at this moment is that my words wud do no justice to ur story, its heartbreaking and touching, both at the same tym. Simply beautiful. I loved each chapter to bits.

There's one thing i want to do desperately and that is to kill Zoe. Even the word bitch looks paler in comparision to her personality and dirty deeds. I wish Asad wud have thrown her out himself. It might have reduced my anger towards her a notch. But i guess the biggest slap to her face will b when Zoya resumes her responsibilty as Lily's mother with Asad by her side. Cant wait. Plzz update soon.


I'll begin with Mary. I dnt hold her responsible for being unwelcoming towards Zoya, it was a natural instinct. You wint b hospitable towards someone who has caused hurt to one of ur loved ones? But with time as she observed Zoya's interaction with Lily and in general as well, her opinion changed. She started caring for her as well. She wanted the best for Asad and knew Zoya was the one for him. Im glad she supported Zoya even after figuring out who she really was.


Coming to Rashid. Well i wnt let him off the hook so easily. Not for being rude or disrespectful towards Zoya, he is a father grieving his favorite son's sudden demise, but for being so rude, bossy, stern and emotionless towards his elder son. I honestly hated the way he treated Asad. It hurt me a lot. Asad was ryt, its easier to put the blame on someone else than own ur mistakes and dats exactly wat Rashid did. He was the reason why Asad turned up late to meet his mum but Rashid always overlooked that detail, indulged himself in alcohol to hide the guilt, remorse n pain. It dsnt like it worked for him but it surely did break Asad's heart many tyms. All said n done, im glad he accepted his mistake of treating AsYa wrongly before dying.

Now my babies, Asad and Zoya. There were so many moments which broke my heart and all i wanted to do was hug Zoya tight. I dint approve of her way to protect Lily but i dnt hold her responsible for it or dislike her. Her love for her tiny neice was so deep n strong dat she cud even throw herself off a cliff just to save her. She truly is Lily's mother in all senses. Apart from being a tender hearted mother, she's a woman too who lost her heart to the man who had left no stone unturned to show his dislike and vowed to never fall for her charms. I honestly had tears rolling down my cheeks reading this part. How desperately Zoya tried to make Asad understand but then realized she had lost him n den her goid bye to Lily, it was lyk someone twisted my heart. I swear u've used such words that it was as if i was watching it unfold instead of reading the scene. This scene was heart wrenching.


Asad... well cant blame him really. He always showed resentment, anger and hatred towards Zoya but it was never directed towards her. It was meant for Zoe, the one who played the part in his bro's death. N despite making it clear repeatedly n vowing as well he cudnt help but fall for the lady in his home. Zoya hasnt realized it when he screamed falling for her cox she was too upset n broken by the turn of events but im happy, v v happy, dat he has fallen in love as well. The part where he removed her fingers from his arm was like a punch, seriously. Anyone in his position wud react the same even worse but am glad he saw Zoe for wat she really was and realized his mistake but not soon enough to hold back the person he has come to love.

Well now he needs to do some search n then apologize for his sarcastic comments.

Hope Asad finds her soon enough cox hearing Lily's cries is heart breaking.

Pia, this story has been absotutely fantabulous. Thank you for sharing it wid us. Waisey tumhare paas raat kab hogi? Ab to subah honay wali hai :( plz update soon, plzzz.

Lovee.




Wow! What a long and amazing feedback 😃
I can't believe you caught up on all the chapters so soon.
I agree with everything you've said
Aur ab meri raat bhi ho gayi 😊
Updating very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Ha ha why dear
Was the chapter that good 😃
Or that bad 😕


Your chapters bad 😲
NEVER
😃😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Hey Pia

Seeing tht we r getting the last chap now
Will we be getting a surprise of a new story tonite😉
U r so adorable for replying to every1 of ur comments
Love u for tht



No dear, no new story tonight 😊
Hopefully tomorrow or day after tomorrow
I'll keep posting as long as you guys are will to read 😃
All the reader's take out time to read and comment
I want to reply to everyone...that's the least I can do 😃

Love you too Anopama...you are the best 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter Sixteen (Last)

Zoya took the first available flight, arriving in Sydney bleary-eyed and broken-hearted. She stayed with Khushi for a week, hardly coming out of her room, her eyes red from bouts of weeping, her slim body visibly shrinking as each day passed.

Khushi sat on the end of her bed on the seventh day and frowned in concern. Come on, Zoya. Don't take this lying down. Go and see him and tell him how you feel. Yesterday's paper said he's back in town now.'

I can't,' Zoya sobbed.

Yes, you can,' her friend insisted. You love him and you love Lily. He needs to know.'

'He hates me.'

How do you know that? Things might have changed by now. Who knows? True colors of Zoe might have set him straight.'

Zoya rolled on to her back and scrubbed at her eyes. It's my fault for not telling him the truth from the start. He has every right to be angry. He married the wrong woman.'

What rubbish!' Khushi said. He married the right one, if you ask me. You are everything he needs. You are loyal and faithful and would rather suffer yourself than hurt someone else. What more could a man ask for?'

Zoya's chin wobbled. I just wish I could tell him how I feel.'

Khushi got to her feet. Do it.' She handed her the phone from the bedside table. Call him now and ask to see him.'

Zoya stared at the phone for a long moment.

Go on,' she urged. What's his number and I'll dial it for you.'

Zoya took the phone with an unsteady hand. No...no, I'll call him.'

Good girl.' Khushi gave her an encouraging smile. I'll leave you to it.' She went to the door and turned back to add, Good luck.'

Zoya gave her a tremulous smile and, although she'd only said she'd call Asad to get her friend off her back, she looked down at the phone in her hands, surprised to see she had pressed more than half the numbers in already. She took a shaky breath and pressed the last three.

Zoya?' Mary answered on the second ring.Zoya! Where are you? We have been so worried! Lily is not sleeping and Asad is"'

Is she all right?' Zoya gasped.

She is missing her mother,' Mary said.

Where is Zoe?'

Mary made a noise of disgust in the back of her throat. Not that mother"you. Your sister is only looking to make money off her.'

What?'

She has asked for a huge amount in exchange for Lily,' Mary informed her.

Zoya closed her eyes. And...Asad? How...how is he?'

He is upset.'

I know.' Zoya bit her lip. I don't blame him.'

Where are you?' Mary asked. He's been looking for you.'

He told me he never wanted to see me again.'

That was then, this is now. Come home Zoya. Just talk to Mr. Khan once and I am sure everything will get sort out.'

I don't know if it can be sorted out.'

Lily and Mr. Khan needs you, Zoya. This is where you belong.'

After hanging up the phone she just sat and cried for a long time missing Lily and Asad.

Next day, Khushi had gone to work when Zoya heard the door bell ring.

She looked at her wrist watch wondering who would come around this time.

Zoya got a shock when she opened the door and found Zoe standing there. 'What are you doing here? And how did you know I was here?'

'So many questions at once! Aren't you at least going to invite me in?' She asked smirkingly.

Zoya stepped aside to let her enter, 'Now tell me why you're here?'

'By pretending to be me, you took away that was supposed to be mine.' She moved towards Zoya menacingly. 'Now I'll do the same.'

'What are you blabbering? What have I taken away from you?' Zoya sad, looking confused.

'If you have not stepped into my shoes, today I would have been Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan. My dream of being married to a billionaire would have come true.' She gave Zoya a hateful look. 'But because of you, I've lost everything. Asad tricked me into signing the adoption papers, and refused to pay even a penny.'

'You deserve even worst punishment than this.' Zoya said smilingly. 'I'm glad Lily doesn't belong to you anymore.'

'Don't gloat. I have not given up yet.' She looked at Zoya with jealous angry eyes. 'You pretended to be me, now it's my turn to switch identities. The only thing remains to do now is to eliminate you from my life. Then I will live the rest of my life as Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan.' She said while walking in a circle around her. 'Asad might have fallen in love with you, but it's me who'll enjoy warming his bed.

Zoya turned around and slapped her hard. 'I should have done this a long time ago. It is my fault that you have turned into this horrible person. I shouldn't have ignore or try to cover up you misdeeds.'

'Enough of your boring lecture!' Zoe came closer and grabbed her neck to strangle her. 'I hate you Zoya. What a misfortune I have! For the rest of my life, I'll have to adapt your boring personality.' She strangled her harder making breathing much more difficult for Zoya. 'For Asad and his fortune, I can make this small sacrifice.'

Suddenly the door burst opened behind them and Asad entered. Zoe abruptly left Zoya's neck, who fell to her knees, trying to catch her breath.

'Zoya', he shouted and ran toward her. 'Are you okay.'

She nodded and tears streamed from her eyes as she looked up at him.

Asad stood up and slowly started walking toward Zoe.

She could see the fury written across the face and eyes of the man who walked toward her. Swallowing hard, she took a step back.

'I never thought you'd stoop so low.' He gave her a head to toe disgusting look. 'You tried to kill your own sister. The sister who bear all the punishment for your wrongdoings. Who has sacrificed her life to keep your child safe.'

'Yeah, I want to kill her because I hate her. And if you don't pay me the money you've promised I will kill you also.' She said going frantic and throwing a flower pot towards him.

Asad ducked just in time to save himself from
getting hit. Before she can attack again, Asad moved swiftly and slapped her across the face.

'No one can harm a person who is protected by Allah himself. And now it's time you pay for your sins.'

Soon after the cops came and arrested Zoe for attempted murder.

Asad looked at Zoya who stood quietly the entire time. The whole incident has terribly shaken her up.

Zoya?' He stepped towards her, then stopped. Are you okay?'

Yeah' she said quietly.

Thank god you called yesterday and I was able to track your whereabouts.' He pushed a hand through his hair, making it even more untidy than it already was. What if I have not reached here on time today.'

But you did!' She gave him a grateful look.
How's Lily? What will happen to her now that Zoe is in jail.'

Your sister has signed the adoption papers already. She is our daughter now.'

'That's Great.' She looked at him with startled eyes.

They both stood silently for a while, not knowing what to say. Then both opened their mouths to say something, then both closed at the same time.

'You go first', he said while giving an affectionate smile.

I just wanted to say that I'm sorry for what I did. I thought I was doing the best thing for Lily but...I can see now how terribly wrong it was. I thought you would take her away from me but now I know you are not the tough man you pretend to be. You are...' She tripped over a little sob. You are the most wonderful man I have ever met.'

And You are Lily's mother in ways your sister could never be,' he said, his voice suddenly rough with emotion. I was wrong to speak to you the way I did. I was so angry at how you had deceived me. I never once stopped to think of what you had sacrificed in order to protect Lily from Zoe.'

W-what do you mean?'

A shadow of a smile haunted his mouth. Not only you marry me, but you were even ready to give yourself to me.'

Color seeped into her cheeks and she had to look away.

No.' He stepped towards her, taking her by the shoulders in a gentle hold so she had no choice but to meet his eyes. Do not hide the truth from me any longer. I want to know why were you ready to do all that for me '

I...' Her eyes fell away from his. I couldn't help it. I had never felt that way before.' She lifted her eyes back to his. I think I fell in love with you that first day when you came to my flat. You picked up Lily and you had tears in your eyes. I know you were grieving the loss of your brother but you still had room for her in your heart and were prepared to do anything to protect her. I had the very same feelings. It made me realise we were more alike than different. I couldn't help falling in love with you.'

He swallowed convulsively as he reached for her, burying his head into her neck. I have wronged you so badly. How can you love me?'

She felt the moisture of his eyes against her skin and hugged him tightly. I just do. No rhyme or reason. I just do.'

He pulled back from her, his expression tortured. I cannot believe I am hearing this. You mean you forgive me for what I said to you?'

You were angry.'

Not just angry,' he admitted ruefully. I was so hurt. I imagined you laughing behind my back at how you had fooled me.'

She gave him a quizzical look. I thought you said you never allowed yourself to get hurt?'

He smiled. You are not the only one who can tell lies, you know. Of course I was hurt. In spite of what I believed to be true of you, I had fallen in love with you. I wanted to believe you were not capable of the behaviour that had led to my brother's death, but every now and again you would remind me of it by acting like your sister. I had no choice but to think you were one and the same.'

And yet you fell in love with me?'

He gathered her closer. How could I not? You were always so loving towards Lily and you responded to me so delightfully. I ached for you day and night and, while I hated myself for my weakness, there was nothing I could do to stop myself from touching you.'

She sighed against the solid warmth of his chest. I can't believe you love me.'

He stroked a hand through her hair, pressing her to his heart. You had better believe it. I have been out of my mind these last few days trying to find you. I have not slept or eaten in days.'

She smiled up at him. Me neither. I missed you so much.'

He gave her a suddenly serious look. I have lain awake at night agonising over the ways I have insulted you. Do you know how wretched I feel? You are the most beautiful person, your nature is gentle and loving and your natural shyness so endearing. I have been such a fool for not seeing it from the first. If I had been thinking clearly I would have, but I was torn apart by Ayaan's death and my Abbu's demands to claim Lily no matter what the cost. I knew he was dying, time was running out and I had to do whatever I could to fulfil his last wish.'

Zoya stroked his jaw tenderly, her eyes shining with moisture. Don't be so hard on yourself. I was the one in the wrong. I should have told you right at the beginning when you came to my flat but I was frightened you'd take Lily away. I didn't think. I just acted on impulse and then it was too late to back out.'

I hammered on you,sweetheart ,' he said with regret. I can see that now. I was determined to show you for the money-hungry opportunist I believed you to be. I didn't allow for any other explanation.'

But it's over now,' she said. We have each other and we have Lily.'

But you have been cheated out of so many things.' His expression turned serious again. A proper wedding, for one thing. I do not know how I am going to even begin to make it up to you.'

She gave him a twinkling smile and nestled close. I don't mind so much about the wedding. I am happy to be with you and Lily. Asad, just take me home.'

Asad smiled as he scooped her up in his arms and carried her towards the door. 'Your wish is my command.'

A/N: I want to thank each and every one of you for taking out time to read and comment.

This wonderful story is an adaptation of the novel 'Bought for the marriage bed' by 'Melanie Milburne'. All the credit goes to the Author.

Thank you again everyone 😊
Edited by iluvasya - 9 years ago
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So the end
I may look into reading the original to see the difference
Bcuz the name seems to give a whole other output
So to the update flawless as always
Zoya reached back to Sydney I was shocked
Thought it would have ended in India
So a week passed Asad returns too
Both r depressed he can't find her
So amazing a man with so much resources can't find her but her bitch of a sister could
So Zoe the witch bitch comes and tries to kill her
Wow she wants to take zoya place now
To be Asad wife the be the shy demure zoya just so she can have the billionaire husband
Thank god Asad came to save his lady love
Thank god zoya got no money out of Asad but he got lily as his and zoya child
Can't beleieve the witch tried to kill him too
Glad she is arrested so keep her forever
So Asya moments were so sweet
They r like this innocent sweet newly in love boy and girl
He is afraid to touch her
Aww thy talk they confess they apologize they hug they comfort the assured
They just was too sweet we got no intimacy just comforting loving hugs
And it just give us tht mushy felling
But zoya line should have been take me HOME
Love it
Looking forward for what is next
Edited by anopama - 9 years ago

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