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lavv

@lavv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

first thanks for d update...

and again thanks...this time for giving d happy closure to d update...they r meant to be...they r soulmates...

u know for d last update, d start seemed +ve, at d end, i was more than sad...i know its fiction n all..vth d story, vth arman -ridhima gng through rough phases n their path ups..i was just like travelling vth them in this story...forgettting its a stroy in d first place...

most of d times, i felt, i know wat they r gng through bcz i can read both of them...n like z third party i know we r helpless bcz its just a story...its been years, vth character development n love, may b we also deeply fell in love vth them n this story...

for d last few updates. it was really sad...in my last comment also, i was trying to tell d same dat phone call at bomb time..ridhima was r8..everyone took him for granted..if he was in ridhima's situation, if ridhima wanted to go also, she has family n friends who could stop her..against her vl..she z not free to do wat she wanted...she vl happily give her life for arman...dats sure...but her parents nevr allow her to do dat..dats y i dnt want to thnk of dat situation...

u hav written dat so beautifully...

dat one second, she felt arman died, n still she z not bale to go vth him...she was alive b4 she came to know he z also alive...

dat one update, wer ridhima was in wheel chair not able to talk to anyone..like born dumb person...now i know y u hav written dat...she was shocked of d bomb...but she was gone numb dat she thought arman died...she z like d dead person living...it made sense now...then she started talking, bcz she came to know arman z alive...dat day wen they weel chaired her to his room, wen he came out of d short coma type..she wanted to tell him r8...she z not able to do dat...at dat moment...but she felt relief wash over her...now it made total sense to me..

wen she z able to talk, she z not able to look at him in his eyes..valid...bcz she was gulity n she knows her love form him vl always vl b less...

vth d last updates, i actually got to know how it vl b if arman died//didnt feel good writing dat word//, she could hav been alive, numb for a while, if she knows arman z not alive, dat condistion could hav been continued, she m8 hav been come to talking , walking n all for her parents...but she could hav ended her life...it was clear, she wnt live...her guilt n pain vl nevr leave her till she ends her life...if she just thinks one case...i.e...if arman was in her position sitting on d bomb...he might hav not allowed her...but deep in his heart he wanted her to b vth him, even its death...i suppose...n , if he has parents also, he could hav been there for her...

she z r8..she cant love him dat much even if she wanted to...

in d part, wer rdhima comes to dat conclusion n accepts, dat arman just needed her for his survival n vl love her like dat only..she was talking abt how she felt wen she thought for a moment...but she skipped d part he was gone throught d same if not more, n d on eperson he lived for z not even looked at him n her treament preoved...her love for him vl always b less compared to arman...

d one way she can show her boundless love z, she can do wat he done for her ...d other way z, she can give herself to him...surrender herself to him...her mind,soul n body...dats wat she did...showing him how much she loves him...she was laways apprehensive to become his...now she proved herself more than him dat vth pure love for him..no one mattered to her...family, society, her rules...nothing...its abt him...n her love for him...

u hav written it so beautifully...u r such an mazing writer...

any idea of publishing this work...its really dat material..atleash e-publishing...

they r meant to be...true soul mates...

continue d great work...vl b waiting for d next update...

waiting to see, how ridhima vl b back to her, glaring nature at arman..

arman always wanted his own family...like having kids...ridhima' s thought abt dog idea was cute...but he z already great vth kids..like minnie n raunak n others...so y did she wanted 2 years...career...baby vl d ultimate happiness ridhima can give him..he vl b on cloud infinity at dat time i think...thinking too much,...

forgot add in my last commnet, liked d way vivek joined d friend group of d gang...truly speaking i havn't seen this show except one or two scenes...n nevr wanted to try, wen cmae to know how they twisted starting vth soulmate concept to something else n then making them together...but i loved AR n d gang through d stories only...

this z my favourite, friendship, love , hospital environment vth few real heart warming encounters...totally loved it...

i didnt know how to phrase few things i felt...so, it was totally good...

//at one time(funny way though), i evn afraid dat, ridhima vl think payal vl b better n vl love arman more at d time of after blast numb phase of her...lol...thank god...i am saved...//

take care...

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i forgot to add,

i hope dat house arman took her was, thier cottage house...but he said his house...wen he z angry he uses dat...other wise he says their house...wanted to assume its lonavala cottage house of theirs...or just d house in mubai...but they r not having their mobiles...bcz arman dragged her out...or arman had his phone...shanky being good vl stop others calling him for sure...for a while lol...

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lavv

@lavv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

han yaar, i always wanted arman parent's to b his real parents...

at dat time, wen padma mom told to ridhima abt arman's mom...

i was like, even after knowing she z diseases n gng through d chemotherapy or watever treatment, y did they adopted him...n she being doc n shashank's classmate, made me think arman may b her real son...

his father z too rich, n they adopted him...n they loved him totally..she made sure he vl get good fortune n future n all...may b she loved dat guy, got pregnant, coming to know her diesease, left him in d orphanage, dat guy married her...n from arma's past it seems his dad's side doesnt want him...may d they didnt want her too...n may b dats d reason, she didnt reveal her true identity after her husban'd death n her condition, she knows he vl b thrown into d orphange again...

i think all these things yaar...

it vl b good if his parents r his real parents...he may feel dat his crying gone waste or watver...or may b happy dat he had his true parents...n he vl can visit dat delhi house n all vth hope...fingers crossed

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lavanya26

@lavanya26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: KSG.SRK
This thread needs to finish sooon. I read this chapter everyday.And when I read some old ones I realise how they ve come a longgg way!the gradual development in their relationship with time is so amazing .

Lol me too, I read it everyday without getting bored. It's like my favourite TV show.

New thread on its way 😆😃

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: lavanya26

Lol me too, I read it everyday without getting bored. It's like my favourite TV show.
New thread on its way 😆😃

Everytime I read, its like a new thing m reading. Can't get enough of.

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Regina_Phalange

@Regina_Phalange

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Everytime I read, its like a new thing m reading. Can't get enough of.

YAY! :D I always knew I wasn't the only one.TWOS!! is something I really look forward to,like my favourite sitcom or something like that. Even the old chapters...You know like I can watch F.R.I.E.N.D.S every day but still enjoy the episodes and laugh at the jokes that I've literally memorised by now,it's the same thing with TWOS .Thats why we're all telling you to publish it,Rachna!The book will be a treasure for us,which we can go back to whenever we feel like .Amidst all the chaos in life ,stressful and depressing college n studies ,TWOS is one of the very few things that makes me happy at the end of the day! Thank you 😃

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blessed4

@blessed4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: KSG.SRK
YAY! :D I always knew I wasn't the only one.TWOS!! is something I really look forward to,like my favourite sitcom or something like that. Even the old chapters...You know like I can watch F.R.I.E.N.D.S every day but still enjoy the episodes and laugh at the jokes that I've literally memorised by now,it's the same thing with TWOS .Thats why we're all telling you to publish it,Rachna!The book will be a treasure for us,which we can go back to whenever we feel like .Amidst all the chaos in life ,stressful and depressing college n studies ,TWOS is one of the very few things that makes me happy at the end of the day! Thank you 😃

i too read it every day

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lavanya26

@lavanya26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: KSG.SRK
YAY! :D I always knew I wasn't the only one.TWOS!! is something I really look forward to,like my favourite sitcom or something like that. Even the old chapters...You know like I can watch F.R.I.E.N.D.S every day but still enjoy the episodes and laugh at the jokes that I've literally memorised by now,it's the same thing with TWOS .Thats why we're all telling you to publish it,Rachna!The book will be a treasure for us,which we can go back to whenever we feel like .Amidst all the chaos in life ,stressful and depressing college n studies ,TWOS is one of the very few things that makes me happy at the end of the day! Thank you 😃

I know, specially the atmosphere she creates when all friends are together, like the time in lonavla post their engagement or when armaan was looking for a kurta and a 'glaring' rahul kicked him out. LOL, i mean you can totally imagine it happening. I swear, what made me look up this fanfiction again after many years was the joke about how nerdy basket is when she thought getting her name added to the dictionary was the most romantic thing in the world. I keep smiling looking at my phone all day while my mother hovers around looking af me suspiciously, hoping to discover a boyfriend 🤣

I think I need to go to rehab. One of these days I will probably post a chapter long comment with my comments on every chapter because I think I owe it to each of the chapters, considering the number of times I have read them. And no, ksg srk you are so not the only one, TWOS has many fans (high5 there). And uh, I really don't want to put you off by making this comparison rachna, but remember fifty shades was also a Fanfic. TWOS IS NOTHING LIKE FIFTY SHADES, LIKE THEY JUST COME FROM DIFFERENT GALAXIES OR UNIVERSES OR WHATEVER, but don't think less of it only because its a Fanfic. Hell, if I had it my way I would have started a TWOS Fanfic. And as far as it being too cheesy is concerned, I don't know, I think that's what you meant to achieve in this story? Like the perfect love story? The world's oldest story? I love the title, btw. And I love kung fu panda too.

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Meher_

@Meher_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

I don't have words to describe the beauty of this chapter. You have written down everything so beautifully just like their Relationship. I always love predicting next part of twos and now after reading this chapter i wonder how they gonna express their feelings with each other after expressing theire love for each other in each possible way. Their after love making morning will going to be lovely. Also thank you so much for updating so soon i am desperately waiting for next update

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San

@slippedaffairs

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: lavanya26

I know, specially the atmosphere she creates when all friends are together, like the time in lonavla post their engagement or when armaan was looking for a kurta and a 'glaring' rahul kicked him out. LOL, i mean you can totally imagine it happening. I swear, what made me look up this fanfiction again after many years was the joke about how nerdy basket is when she thought getting her name added to the dictionary was the most romantic thing in the world. I keep smiling looking at my phone all day while my mother hovers around looking af me suspiciously, hoping to discover a boyfriend 🤣
I think I need to go to rehab. One of these days I will probably post a chapter long comment with my comments on every chapter because I think I owe it to each of the chapters, considering the number of times I have read them. And no, ksg srk you are so not the only one, TWOS has many fans (high5 there). And uh, I really don't want to put you off by making this comparison rachna, but remember fifty shades was also a Fanfic. TWOS IS NOTHING LIKE FIFTY SHADES, LIKE THEY JUST COME FROM DIFFERENT GALAXIES OR UNIVERSES OR WHATEVER, but don't think less of it only because its a Fanfic. Hell, if I had it my way I would have started a TWOS Fanfic. And as far as it being too cheesy is concerned, I don't know, I think that's what you meant to achieve in this story? Like the perfect love story? The world's oldest story? I love the title, btw. And I love kung fu panda too.

Its a slow and gradual process but when it sets pace, it turns into a habit and sooner or later addiction. And that connection had been created of us and TWOS.

You can't stop reading it.

I read the whole 3 days in my Summers.

Its not only of different galaxy or universerse but it also don't share its heaven with us.

I can discuss TWOS anytime. Not just a FanFuc but its kinda like a Novel which I could read as many times. And when we miss DMG we know where we have to go and its Rachna's place, our TWOS thread.