SwaSan TS : Crush Part 2(last part) updated

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Anglaise
Hey misaki(sorry if im wrong)
Awesome Update dear..
written well 🤗

Heyya!😃

Thank you so much for leaving me this lovely comment. 😊 My name is Geetha . Do let me know your name too so that I can thank you properly.

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: anu91
Superbly presented dr...
Le ed it so much. ..

Hey Anu😃

Thank you once again for leaving me a wonderful comment. Always encourages me to do better on the next one.😃

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
awesome..
loved it,..
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That was sanskar's plan to ake swara realized her love for him..
Awww.
so sweet of him..

He felt bad for Kusum..

Nice..

Hey Jidnyasa (I hope I got your name right 😊)

Yes it was Sanskaar and Kusum's plan, well more like Kususm's plan to check if Swara has feelings of the "love" sort for Sanskaar and also in a way help kick start her realization as well.

Yes he did feel bad for Kusum since he had also felt that way at one point for Swara - he knows how much unrequited love hurts.

Sanskaar and not being sweet? Is that even possible?😉

Thank you so much for the feedback. It always is nice to hear what you thought of the characters and the story😃

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Hey buddy..
First of all a hearty thanks for such wonderful TS.. Though I hoped to see a finishing line.. But anyways.. Liked it.. I also like the character Kusum.. You are a gifted writer.. Keep going.

Regards,
Eshaal

Hey Easha (Hope I got your name right)

Thank you so so much for the compliments on the writing. Since I just got started, means a lot . So happy to hear that you liked Kusum 😃 I think you are the first one to say that. So thanks so much. I loved writing her as well. Once again thank you for this lovely comment . Makes me want to do better on the next one😃

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
Hi geethu🤗
Hope that is ur name dear 😃😃
I just loved reading ur wonderful TS ,an amazing end to an an amazing work dear👏👏👏
It was outstanding dear😃😃
Continue writing pieces of fabulous masterpieces,will love to read them in future😳😳
And ,I am Jenni dear🤗
LOlve
Jenni😃

Hey Jenni 🤗

My name is Geetha but you can of course call me Geethu, Geet, G or any other name that you can come up with😆

Honestly, it is such a wonderful feeling when I have new readers read and like my work. And when you leave me such wonderful comments about it , it makes me go all😳😃. That is all I always wish for , for someone to read and deem it worth enough to leave me what they thought of it. Thank you so so much for these amazing compliments Jenni🤗 I will try to always do better on the next one. I can't wait to read what you have to say on them. Looking forward to them😃

XOXO

Geetha

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: TRPS
sorry for the late comment Geetha. 😳 last time I was feeling bad for Swara , after reading this update.. ney!! not at all 😆 .never expected Sanskaar has already teamed up with Kusum in this!! despite planning all this himself , he was feeling bad that Swara felt ignored. that was really sweet. this old formula really worked on Swara that too quite well. Who is your muse!!! I can imagine Sanskaar grin and happiness by this whole scenario. by the way, he got quite easy punishment, after seeing Swara's anger ,I thought it is going to be something full of mischiefs. 😛 Hope, Swara will realise her feelings soon and See , what a sweet, loving, caring Gentleman her Sanskaar is. and give him due peace of heart and soul. :))
It was really very entertaining TS and you wrote it very neatly. :) Hoping to see more work from you. :)) Keep writing. :))

Hey! 😃

No sorry required . I'm in fact sorry for taking so long to come back and reply😭. what to do - work has been so insanely busy, finally got some time.

Anwys coming back to this wonderful comment from you, so happy to read that the second update managed to do away with any complaints that you had with my first update. 😃

Haha - did not see that coming huh? Sanskaar and Kusum teaming up? Surprise surprise!😆

Sanskaar will always be forever concerned for Swara , that should no longer be surprising na? The punishment - 😆 I have to completely agree with you on that one, he got away quite easily . But Swara madam has also started to feel something for his hasn't she? So madam couldn't help but let it go😳

Oh the realization reminded me - this was an interquel o my FF - Partners , if you want to read her realization do read it. It happens on the last update of the FF.

I will continue to write and write better . Looking forward to hearing from you again.

Thank you once again🤗Oh and do let me know your name😊

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Geetu.🤗 🤗
Happy new year and a merry christmas. Matlab the other way round.😛

Wonderful TS...I have as yet only caught up with the first part----the second will have to wait till I have time to breathe 😭

The shake and ice cream idea is great. I have tried it once. in the rains that too.😃

I do not like Kusum. She is silly. and a billy. and a tilly.😕---swara does not either...even if kusum was brilliant she would have disliked her. pati ka purana..ummhmm.😡

Possessive Swara😳 apna pati dusre ka chikoo kaise share kar sakta hai😡---
come here you--share my chikoo!!😆

As always the feelings were extremely aptly described and you saw the banter through to the end in a lively fashion.😃

love ya--

medha.

Loads of Love

Medhu🤗🤗

So sorry for replying so late to this one 😭

Belated happy new year and Christmas to you as well 🤗🤗 - the other way around😆

Yass! I finally found another person who doesn't think it is mental to try shake and ice cream in the night and when it's especially raining😃

No one seems to like Kusum - that poor soul,😆 but I'm sure you wouldn't mind her on the second one re😛 Pati ka kuch bhi nahin hain - bechari , she only had a crush on him🤣 She would be like hayye! Kaash ki kuch hoti🤣

Possessive Swra is definitely better than the mahaan one on the show na? 😆 I loved writing that bit. How can he drink her milkshake!😡 😆

You know how it always is special to hear it from you. So very happy to hear what you had to say Medhu🤗

Love you too🤗

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey Geetha,
Sorry it took me so long to finally get around to commenting. I really enjoyed your TS 👏. And I loved that it was little part of Swara-Sanskaar's past from Partners. This TS gives some great context for that FF.

Anyways jealous Swara was too cute. And the fact that it was their plan was hilarious. Sanskaar was starting to get his hopes up and I was like hayeee cuties 😳.

Even though I loved the TS it kind of made me sad as well. I mean just because we know what happens after in Partners. Just when Swara was developing feelings for him and started realizing it, she had to be separated from him 😕.

Oh and Kusum. I couldn't help but dislike her yet at the same time like her. I really had love-hate feelings for her. But you said that she was kind of like us, and I totally could see that. She had a crush on Sanskaar, but she wanted him with Swara 👍🏼.

In VK's last show, Saraswatichandra, his costar was Shiny Doshi. And her on screen name was Kusum. So I couldn't help but wonder if she has some correlation with your character Kusum, or if I'm just over thinking and it's just a coincidence 😆.

Thanks for the PM's by the way.

- Sapna

Hey Sapna😊

So very happy to hear from you again. No sorry required ever. It means a lot that you actually read all of them and enjoy reading them. I will wait for as long as it takes for you to finally get time to give your feedback. You can do it when you are free , I will always be happy to hear from you no matter how long it takes.😊

The fact that you thought the TS added something more to my FF means a lot. Especially since you are a regular reader of it, thank you for telling me that. Made me feel so much better.😊

I know I have to start working on my FF so that you guys can finally see what happens later. I am so sorry it has been so insanely busy on my work front that even replying to this lovely comment of yours took so long I will however start to work on it from now. Hopefully will have something by the weekend. 😊

No one liked Kusum 😆 honestly, it was expected seeing as she was "kabab mein haddi" or so you were made to believe in the first half. But I knew people would finally realize how she was nothing like that or rather so much like us and come to not mind her since of course she was based on us😆

You are bang on with your observation about Kusum's name and VK's show Saraswathichandra. It was hard to come up with a name and she was the first that came into my mind since of course I think Shiny and VK make a lovely onscreen pair too. I never really liked Kusum much but they looked good together and I absolutely adored Danny Sanskaar of course is on a whole other level altogether❤️. No comparisons whatsoever!

Thank you for leaving me this wonderful and detailed comment Sapna, always a pleasure to read what you had to say.😊

XOXO

Geetha

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misaki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac
Geetu 🤗
I finally found time to read this and comment, sorry fr the delay! You have done a brilliant job with this one. This gave me such a giddy feeling coz it deals with new found feelings, old crushes, Swara's miffed behaviour, Sanskaar's hope, all adorable things combined. 😆
I get Swara's milkshake craziness, there's just something abt milkshakes and ice creams when its raining. I wnt be able to stop myself frm having them too, but 4...not sure abt that 🤣
Loved Swara's possessiveness and Sanskaar's concern for her. SwaSan's banter here was so refreshing, I thoroughly enjoyed it. And that awkward encounter Sanskaar had with Kusum 😆
Btw you shldnt have said Kusum represents us, I totally imagined myself having a late night chat with him. That would have been so cool 🤣
PS: You have gotten me really intrigued by Partners. Be sure to tell me once its done. I wld love to read it and I might find more time to by that time.

Sana🤗🤗

So so happy to see your comment on this one😃

Awww, I'm grinning like a fool after reading that you liked it that much. There really is something about old crushes and new found feelings huh? I really liked writing this one as well😃

Haha - Swara's love for milkshakes while its raining is definitely something taken from me 😛😆 I love having them when it rains. So yummy! ❤️ I can totally have 4 !😆😛

I loved writing their banter - it was my favorite part since it came to me so easily and I loved putting them into words so to hear that you liked it makes me so very happy. 😃

Kaash! Kaash ki aisa ho sakta!😳 I keep imagining a thousand different scenarios where I meet him but of course I won't - the guy had to be fictional😭 Imagine if he were real, he would have got mobbed by all of us and bechara wouldn't have got the chance to even react😆 OMG!

I will definitely let you know once I am done updating Partners Sana, I have kind of taken a sabbatical on that one, what with the story going no where and my work. Will work on that now and of course let you know when it's done. would love to hear what you have to say about that too.

So happy to hear from you again Sana, hope to catch you here again. I myself haven't been frequenting the forum for quite some time but finally found the time to do it now and thus this very late reply.

Hoping to hear from you soon XOXO

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