NIBIR FF- LOVE AAJ KAL(DISCONTINUED)

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Hello guys me again pata nahi kya hogaya hai mere saath idea pe idea aate ja rahe hai aur mai ff ss ts banate ja raha hu.
Actually yeh ff mai aaj update isshliye kkar raha hu because mai isse as a birthday gift de raha hu ansh aka tasyam koko as a birthday gift 😃. Happy birthday again.

Don't take tension mai pehle phir se dunga phir ts phir magic of love and phir this ff.

So ab bakwaas band story padho like and comment dono karo.

Aur agar kisine res kiya toh jaldi se unres bhi kar dena pls 😆

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<font color="#0000cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="6">CHARACTER SKETCH</font>

kabir singh rathore- A billionaire who lives in london with his family. He is good at heart and does not show off his powers to other.

Nisha gangwal- A sweet,lovely innocent girl. Who cares everybody. Who fights for justice. She hates rich people because of their show off nature.


Arjun singh rathore- Kabir's father. Loves his family a lot and a very down to earth person.
Vasu singh rathore- Kabir's mother.Believe in simplicity.
Ayesha mehra- Kabir's big sister. Always help kabir in any circumstances.
Sunny mehra- Kabir's brother in law. He is jiju cum best friend of kabir. Always help him.

Gangwal family as same as show.

So guys this is the character sketch.
Hope you liked it.

Scroll down for prologue.


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PROLOGUE

London

A boy of early 20's was standing in the corner of a party was not enjoying the party at all. The boy was non other then kabir. So he goes to his luxury house and to his big room. He was sitting on his bed but a knock knock disturbed his silence and says
Kon hai?
Voice- Mai hu andar aau.
Kabir- Nahi.
Voice- Kyu??? Tu apni badi sister ko andar aane nahi dega.
While she enters the room and asking this questions.
Kabir-Tuje mai ha bolu ya na bhi bolu tabhi tu andar aayegi toh puchti kyu hai. Bol na ayesha.
Ayesha- Awww mera bhai ka mood off hai.
Kabir- Ha hai thoda sa.
Then another voice came and says
Kya hua saale shaab.
Kabir- Abey saale tu.
Ayesha- Sunny mere bhai ko tang mat karo.
Sunny- Ok nahi karunga mai but isse hua kya hai.
Kabir- Thak gaya hu life se.
Sunny- Matlab.
Kabir- Mere life mai hai kya bas yahi paise,bade ghar aur bahut saare chamche. Aur kya hai mere life mai bore ho chuka hu issh life se.
Ayesha- Tu kehna kya chhata hai.
Kabir- Mai kuch din ke liye akela rehna chhata hu.
Sunny and ayesha- Whattt???
Kabir- Kaan ke parde kyu phaad rahe ho.
Sunny- Tu pagal hogaya hai kya tu aur normal life paagal hogaya hai.
Dekh kabir tu ayka industries ka future owner hai aur 50% shares ayka industry je tere naam pe hai.
Kabir- Ha toh.
Ayesha- Toh baat ko samaj tu kahi bhi akele aisa nahi ja sakta hai.
Sunny- Kabir ayesha is correct.
Kabir- Ha tu toh bolega hi ayesha is correct biwi ka chamcha kahi ka. Dekho guys maine decide kar liya hai mai bas jaunga thode dino mai aajaunga pakka.
Sunny- Dad mom ko kya bolega tu.
Kabir- Bol dunga thode dino ke liye kuch kaam se ja raha hu.Vo log maan bhi jayenge mere baat ab samjhe.
Ayesha- But tu jayega kaha???
Kabir- Jaipur.
Sunny- Jaipur matlab india.
Kabir- Yup.
Ayesha- Par kyu?
Kabir- Aise hi dad nai bola na unka hometown jaipur hai toh mai waha pe jaake ghumu ga yaar.
Ayesha- Ok tu kab jayega tab??
Kabir- Kal.
Sunny- Ok but tu waha pe apna khyal rakhna agar kuch problem hua toh mai aajaunga just one phone call mai aajaunga ok.
Kabir- Ok chal good night.
Then ayesha and Sunny leaves the room.
Kabir(monologue)- kash yeh mere kuch din life ke best moment ban jaye please god bana dena.

India
Jaipur
Gangwal house

While on the other side in a house a group of cousins were sitting on terrace and asking questions to their captain jugaadu.
Kirti- Batao na nishu tuje kis type ke ladke pasand hai.
Jwala- Bolo na nishu bro.
Nisha - Ok sunno mujhe ek aisa ladka chhaiye jo mujhe care kare aur simple rahe sabka khyal rakhe sabse pyaar kare. Bas vo raees na ho.
Dolly- Kyu
Nisha- because vo log bahut show off nature ke hote aur agar kisi raees nai mujhe propose kiya toh mai uske tange tod dungi mai.
Sukku- Baap re baap nishu bhagwan kare tera wish pura hojaye.
All cousins gave group hug to each other and leave for their room.
Nisha(monologue)- Kash yeh mera wish pura hojaye bas.



So guys this is the prologue. Hope you liked it.
Please do like and comment.
Sorry for errors.
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏story hatke hai nice one...👍🏼
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Superb sujay..ye kya stories pe stories..wah..chalte raho sujay tum bht aage badoge..i know ye annie baba ki line honi chahiye but maine chora li 😳 ..sujay ek cheez clear karde tu pakka iska happy ending dega na?nhi confirm karlena chahiye na...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb story sujay 👍🏼
keep writting
Awsome cs & prologue
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ek aur new FF...😲

Tu aur Sana kumbh k mele main bichre bhai behen hai kya??🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sameeha151

Superb sujay..ye kya stories pe stories..wah..chalte raho sujay tum bht aage badoge..i know ye annie baba ki line honi chahiye but maine chora li 😳 ..sujay ek cheez clear karde tu pakka iska happy ending dega na?nhi confirm karlena chahiye na...


Sami tujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai k iss story ka happy ending nahi hoga??🤣...story ka title dekh...LOVE AAJ KAL...ye story pakka rom-com hoga...😳...emotional nahi...😆
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naucfan

Awesome👏story hatke hai nice one...👍🏼


Thank you anu 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sameeha151

Superb sujay..ye kya stories pe stories..wah..chalte raho sujay tum bht aage badoge..i know ye annie baba ki line honi chahiye but maine chora li 😳 ..sujay ek cheez clear karde tu pakka iska happy ending dega na?nhi confirm karlena chahiye na...


Thank you sameeha 😃
Iska happy ending hi hoga because mere se kabhi bhi sad ending nahi hoga 😉

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