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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Nice start

Maan simla apne project ke liye aaya hai par kisi ki baat maan na toh aata nahi aur snowfall main fas gaya!!!

Ab village mein toh pahuch gaya aur teen chaar din toh rukna padega...mazaa aayega!

Ab geet se bhi milna hoga!!

Waiting for unfold the story...

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

sONIA YOU ARE VERY GOOD WRITER I LIKE ALL UR STORIES.

I read pro-luge and chp.1 both together

initialy in pro. you write she sold herself to stranger for her family and than she end up in big problem as fruit of misdeed came oposite to family, how she will survive?, is she strong enough to face all hurdle and take out herself from it successfully?who was that stranger?

but after reading part one i think it was maan, who is going in village, i rememer one very old story film barsat if i dont mistaken, where sothing similar happens and she is waiting for him, iremember few lines of song,der na karna kanhi ye ye aash toot jai aash toot jai,tum na aao to dilki lagi kaise hum bujai kaise hum bujai, aag ki lapto mein jaal utha mera dil, mil na sake hai mil na sake hum...barsat mein...!