War Between A Lord And His Great Devotee, Ram And Hanuman Part 4 pg 3

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WAR BETWEEN A LORD AND HIS GREAT DEVOTEE, RAM AMD HUNUMAN



THIS IS MY NEW STORY ABOUT A WAR BETWEEN LORD RAMA AND HUMUMAN.CONFUSED???

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It is the duty of a valiant to save the one who seeks refuge even if he has to face his close confident or an ardent devotee. This is the essence of two popular mythical stories penned by some highly imaginative poets, woven around the lead characters of the epics Ramayana and Mahabharatha.

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HUNUMAN trying to save a person unknowingly announces to save his life and fight against his enemy. How does he feel when he comes to know he should fight against his Lord Rama??? Will Hunuma fight against Rama???

As the story develops you will see the great bhakti of Hunuma towards Ram.

How will Hunuman face his inner turmoil.

What will be Lord Rama's Reaction???

You all know that Rama astra i.e Rama Banam(arrow) is so powerful. It even destroyed Ravana.

How will Hunuman save himself from the wrath of Rama astra.

Will the war happen???

What does this story tell us.

LEARN ABOUT HUNUMA'S RAMA BHAKTHI SAMRAJYAM







Hey guys if u r intrested i will continue with the story

Leave your comments😊

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Hey guys give this a read too😊
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thanks all😊
i will give part 1 tomorrow😊
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WAR BETWEEN A LORD AND HIS DEVOTEE

PART ONE

Lord Rama after Ravanasura's Vadh returns to Ayodhya in Vibhishan's pushpak viman along with his dear wife Sita, Lakshman, Sugriva, Jambavata, Angadha and all other prominent persons. Human first reach Ayodhya with the speed of the wind just to inform his brothers in Ayodhya that Ram is returning. He stops Bharat from entering into fire and tell him that Ram Lakshman and Sita will be here in few minutes. After few minutes Pushpak arrives Bharat and Shatrughn are extremely happy to see their brothers. They embrace each others. Kaushalya Sumitra Kaikeyi are extremely overwhelmed to see their daughter in law safe and sound and embrace her with tears of happiness. Mandavi and Shruthkeerthi also hug their sister. Lakshman is very happy to be home. Whole Ayodhya rejoiced with their arrival. Lakshman stars searching someone in the crowd.

Sita asks Lakshman if he is searching for her, she reminds him of what happened. While Lakshman leaves for exile with Ram and Sita he with his powers gives Urmila a gift to take away his sleep too so that she can sleep till his arrival and will not miss him in his absence. Lakshman remebers everything he rushes to Raj bhavan to meet his Urmila. Sita smiles his behaviour. All of them reach raj bhavan. That night everyone will have a contented meal and everyone busy meeting each other and discussing what happened in 14 years. Its decided the next morning will be Ram's coronation cermony as king of Ayodhya.

Every one in Raj bhavan have a talk till late night and atlast retire to their rooms. Ram after many years have a peaceful sleep as Sita caressing his fore head with her soft hands. Sita missed Ram a lot tears of happiness wetting her chees falls on Ram's forehead. Ram gets up wipeout her tears and make Sita sleep on his lap. Slowly they fall asleep in each others arms.

There Lakshman apolozises to Urmila for staying away from her these many years. Urmila tells him that for her it is like yesterday they both aurgued on a silly topic and then complaining about it to their brother and sister. Hearing this Lakshman feel relieved and find himself so lucky to have a wife like Urmila. They both sit back on their bet arguing and talking to each other and slowly resolve into deep sleep.

Early in the morning everyone in Ayodhya are busy in arrangementsnfor Ram's Pattabhishek. All the streets are filled with Rangolis. Raj bhavan is being decorated with lot of flowers. Hanuman is supervising the arrangements. He starts aruguing with Jambavant and Sugriva about the flower decoration. He brings fresh waters from far of mountains for Ram's mangal snaan. Ram is still sleeping after his tiresome long journey.

Every one gathered in assembly hall of Raj bhavan. Sita tries to wake up Ram for his mangal snaan. All the three mothers his brothers are waiting to perform Ram's Magal snaan. All the people in Raj bhavan hunuman and everyone start to sing in unity to wake up Ram.

Wake up Shree Rama Wake up Raghu Rama

Wake up Shree Rama Wake up Raghu Rama

Wake up our Lord and come for our rescue swiftly

Wake up our Lord and come for our rescue swiftly

Wake up Wake up...

Its time for Lord of your dynasty Sun(surya) to arise

Its time for sunrise wake up Shri Rama

All devatas Maharshi's everyone await your ariival wake up

Rama wake up its time wake up

All the people in this world await your arrival come

Rule over their hearts

We know you may be tired of 14 years vanavaas

Rama we want to see you the great person

Who saved the entire world from wrath of Ravanasura

Sita maa is trying to wake you Lord Rama wake up

Wake up for your Mangal Snaan

Today is the day of Pattabhishekam

Wake up our Lord grant us your divine darshan

Wake up Shree Rama Wake up Raghu Rama

Wake up Wake up...

Ram gets up hearing the wake up call. A grand ceremony takes place and Rama is coronated as King Of Ayodhya . Ram and Sita take their seat on Raj Simhasan. Lakshman Bharat and Shatrugan standing by his sides and Hunuman at Ram's feet. What a beautiful scene it is. Everone hail for Rama. Maharaj Shree Ram ki jai ho...

Maharshi Vashishta and Maharshi Vishwamitra first praise Ram for his success

Lord Ram replies Its not his success alone Guruvarya's its because of your blessings and astra vidya you taught me, Support of Lakshman, Friendship of Vanaradesh Sugreeva, Jambavanta, Angadha, my dearst devoree Humuma also Vibhishan who went against his brother's atrocities and helped him all thw way. If these people are not there Ram could never succeed. After this everyone in the court hail in unison Shree Ram ki jai ho...

hope you all had a great sunday

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guys give part one a read so that can post part two😊
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Nicely written manas ,especially the wake call
Waiting for more
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part 2
war between lord and his devotee part two

Every one ask Ram about the importance of Hunma. Ram replied there is no Hanuma if there is no Ram . He is the one who first crossed the ocean and found where Sita is, he saved Sita who wanted to give praan tyaag. By telling her that her Ram will come here to save her from Ravan clutches. He gave new life to Lakshman by bringing Sanjeevani and gave him a life too. Hence if there is no Hunuman there will be no Ram.

Sita blesses Hunman. Ram gives him a boon to be alive for ever (chiranjeevi) and protect people who are in trouble. Every one hail for Ram.

Sita gives Hanuman a pearl necklace as a gift. Hunuman takes it from her and cut the string with his mouth and stars throwing each pearl on ground after scrutinizing it. Everyone in Raj sabha are confused with Hanuman's behaviour. Hunuman explains all that this pearl necklace does not have my Lord Ram and Sita maa in this necklace. Jambavant asks him if he is insulting Sita mata's present. Hunman tells everyone having Ram and Sita in his life is a big gift for him and he cracks open his heart and shows Ram and Sita in his heart. Everyone are shocked to see it. Hunuma's devotion towards his Ram is like a ocean.

That evening Urmila Mandavi Sruthkeerthi dress Sita as a newly wed bride. Sita ask them not to do so. But her sisters insist her to wear all the aabhushan. She wears them to please them. Meanwhile Ram enters the room and all the sisters leave giggling. Ram pleasently smiles at Sita and ask her why is she so heavily dressed. Sita tells him that her sisters forced her to do so. Sita removes the heavy jewellery and returns to a simple attire. Ram asked that why did she remove all the jewellary. Sita tell him it is for her Lord who likes to see her being simple. Ram make her sit beside him. He asks her to make a promise to him to help him in taking right decisions and guide him in a right way so that he becomes a perfect ruler. Sita simply nods her head and sleeps on Ram's lap and goes into deep sleep.

i know this is a short update
will continue soon
do read and comment guy
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manas😊
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hey guys sorry for the late update
These days I really could not resist myself from making Vms.
Now i Thought of finishing this story which carries a great message.
Do read it guys
share your views😊

PART3

A WAR BETWEEN A LORD AND DEVOTEE

Early in the morning Sita mata in her puja mandir offers prayers to Lord Shiv ji

Pratah- smaraami- bhava- bheeti haram suresham

Ganga-dharam vrishabha vahanam Ambikesham

Khatvaanga Shula varada abhaya hastam- Eesham

Samsaara roga haram ashuddam adviteeyam

(Verses taken from Aadi Shankaracharya Shiva Mannasa Puja)

Praatar-Namaami Girisham Girija-Ardha-Deham

Sarga-Sthiti-Pralaya-Kaarannam-Aadi-Devam

Vishva-Iishvaram Vijita-Vishva-Manobhiraamam

Samsaara-Roga-Haram-Aussadham-Advitiiyam

Praatar-Bhajaami Shivam-Ekam-Anantam-Aadyam

Vedaanta-Vedyam-Anagham Purussam Mahaantam

Naama-Aadi-Bheda-Rahitam Ssadd-Bhaava-Shuunyam

Samsaara-Roga-Haram-Aussadham-Advitiiyam

Meaning

1} In the Early Morning, I Remember Sri Shiva, Who Destroys the Fear of Worldly Existence and Who is the Lord of the Devas,

Who Holds River Ganga on His Head, Who has a Bull as His Vehicle and Who is the Lord of Devi Ambika,

Who has a Club and Trident in His two Hands, And confers Boon and Fearlessness with His other two Hands and Who is the Lord of the Universe,

Who is the Medicine to Destroy the Disease (of Delusion) of Worldly Existence and Who is the One without a second.

2} In the Early Morning, I Salute Sri Girisha (Shiva), Who has Devi Girija (Parvati) as Half of His Body,

Who is the Primordial Cause behind the Creation, Maintenance and Dissolution of the Universe,

Who is the Lord of the Universe and Who Conquers the World by His Charm,

Who is the Medicine to Destroy the Disease (of Delusion) of Worldly Existence and Who is the One without a second.

3}In the Early Morning, I Worship Sri Shiva Who is the One without a second, Who is Boundless and Infinite and Who is Primordial,

Who is Known only by Understanding the Vedanta, Who is Sinless and Faultless, Who is the Primeval Original Source of the Universe and Who is the Great One,

Who is Free from the Differences of Names etc and Who is Without the Six Modifications (of Birth, Existence, Growth, Maturity and Death),

Who is the Medicine to Destroy the Disease (of Delusion) of Worldly Existence and Who is the One without a second.

(this poem above is rendered by Adi guru Shi Shankaracharya in his work Shiv Manasa Puja. I just used it as its so meaningful)

After puja Sita gives aarthi to Ram. Later they both sit together in their private room talking randon things.

After that Ram gets ready for his official duties Sita at that time combs her hair. Ram comes near sita leans little forward and put something in her hair. Sita asks him what is it.to that Ramreplys it is the same Chintamani which Hanuman gave him as a signature of her presence in Lanka.sita's eyes welled up and all the memories came rushing back.

Sita in Ashoka vaan is fed up with Raavan's mental torture she decided to end her life with her long hair.At that time Hanuman appears from no where and pleads her not to do so. He gives her Lord Ram's ring as to assure her that her Ram willcome to help her.sita comes back to senses when she feels a warm hand wiping her tears. Ram tells her no to remind bad things.Sita gives back Ram's ring.

it is a rule in any kingdom that no one is allowed intoantahpura of king or queen without prior permission. Hanuman wants to take Ram and Sitas blessings so he breaks into their antahpura without permission even though all the soldiers stopped him.

There Ram and Sita are discussing about Hanuman.Sita tells Ram that Hanuman is like their first child. Ram senses Hanuman's presence and asks him to come in.He takes their blessings. He tells Ram that he along with Sugreeva Jambavant Angad is leaving Ayodhya to Kishkindha. Ram and Sita come out of antahpura and meet everyone and ask them to stay for few more days. But they request Ram tolet them go so that they can look after their kingdom.Hunuman is teary eyed as he has to leave Ram and Sita Maa's sharan. Sita asks Hanuman to stay back. Ram asks Human to leave for Kishkindha as they need his help and guidance I will always be with you and duty of an individual comes first and rest all are of least importance. Ram hugs Hanuma for one last time and ask him to leave. This is for the first time we see a Lord feeling devasted at the departure of his devotee Hanuma. Both of them walk away in opposite directions wiping their tears and hiding it from everyone .Sita apologised everyone for their behaviour and gave all of them a grand send off.

Will post the next part soon

manas😊


Edited by sugunmanas - 10 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go.
Fantastic!!!! You write so well. Awesome.

Very well written.

Please do continue.
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Read all the parts in one go...its superb. Keep writing

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