MaNan FS - AA BHI JAA TU KAHI SE..!! Chap 2 pg5 6/1/16 (DISCONTINUE) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting...cont soon
plz pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Beautiful update..
so true yaa every love story first start with hate..

cabir too started saying mata rani😆

sab navya ki jaddu hai😆

abeer is so cute..

keep smiling n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
awesome yar plz continue it and update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome continue soon waiting very eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start

loved kavya n abeer

manan met with the accident????????????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg update
Nycc start
So cute abeer
Lovd it
Thnx for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. .. manan r married well that's a new info.. update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dat was realy a gud start.. CaVya and their cute nok jhoks..haha.. dey r jst Amazing.. Abeer is so cute.. Excitd 4 MaNan's entry.. !! Cntinue soonish ! :) Thank u 4 d pm ! Stay Blessed !! #OkThanksBye ! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hellooo..!!! Missed me?? Noo?? :( Achaa my stories??? Ke voh bhi ni :'(...Acha ok ok no more emotional atyachar..well ty fr response bt thoda kam tha..hain na...ab is update me acha wala response chahiye & haa acha mtlb ACHAA..!! Here goes the chap...


Chapter 2


At Abhi's house
Mu : Abhiii...!! Omg..!! 😲Meri black wali dress kaha gayi😭 Mujhe aaj CaVya ki party mein wahi wali dress pehenni hai.

A : Muku baby..!! Wahi hogi dekho na thik se...aur waise bhi tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise humari wedding anniversary hai.

Mu : Haww..!! Ruko tum abhi tumhe batati hu..

N she started throwing pillows at him & started running behind him in the bedroom.

Finally Abhi stopped her & said "Muku plzz itna mat bhaago..tired ho jaogi..n waise bhi tum ab akeli nhi ho...meri princess bhi tumhare saath hai..so plz b careful na baby...i dont want anyone of uh to get hurt" he kissed her forehead.

Mu : Sorry Abhi...i know mein tumhe bohot pareshan karti hu (making a pout wich was instantly pecked by abhi who was nodding his head in a 'no') but I promise aage se apna or humari princess ka dhyaan rakhungi.

A : Thats like my girl..!! Ab chalo jaldi se ready hojao..late horaha hai.

Mu : But meri black wali dress...plz Abhi help me naa to find it...plss pretty plss... (making adorable cute faces)

A : Acha ok ill help uh but frst stop making these cute faces or else main plan cancel kar dunga..you know what I mean. (He winked at her)

Mukti blushed & they both started searching fr her fav dress...After almost 20-25 mins she got it & shouted happily "Mil gayiii..yayieee...abhii see mil gayiii...finallyy" & she ran to the washroom to change.

Here Abhi was happy seeing his love happy & he sighed & murmured under his breath "Uff her mood swings"
After Mukti got ready they left fr CaVya's party..!!



At Dhruv's house
Alya was confused as to which dress she shud wear & was trying looking in the mirror from past 1 hour. And the shy boy Dhruv was just sitting there helplessly.

Al : Dhruv baby! Dekho yeh kaise lag rahi hai??

D : Haan baby this is sooo nice..its perfect...chalo ab jaldi se ready hojao.

Al : Nooo...baby..wait naa...see this..isme il look fat

D : Baby ull nt look fat..i swear...infact ull look hot..bt plzz ab jldi karoo hum late ho rahe hai.

Al : Dhruv uh dun love me anymore na...pehle tum mujhe dress select karne me kitni hlp karte the & now uh to dunt evn spare a glance at me..(sad face)

Dhruv immediately went towrds her & cupped her face & said lovingly "Alya dont ever say that I dont love you...You are my life...i cant evn imagine my life without you...I Love You Alya"

Alya was in tears & she hugged him & said "Sorry baby i know you love me...I Love You too" & she kissed on his cheeks.

Dhruv frst blushed bt then said naughtily "Abhi toh late ho raha hai isliye im letting uh go...warna i wud have returned it all back to you...bt koi baat nhi raat ko ill show you" he winked.

Now Alya was all red & she hit him on his chest to wich he laughed. Then Dhruv selected a beautiful dress fr her & she went to change.

After some time they were all set so they left fr CaVya's party.



At MaNan's house
Nandini was getting ready in her room & was sitting in front of the mirror. Manik came from behind & stood behind her & looked at her from the mirror. Nandini was going weak from his intense gaze & she blushed. Manik smirked seeing his effct on her.
Manik bent down & whispered in her ear "Nandini jaldi ready hojao...mujhe tumhe thikse dekhna hai" & bit her earlobe.

Nandini hissed in pain & closed her eyes. She then opened her eyes & said "Manik tum niche jao mai aati hu"

Manik tried to protest bt she threw him out of their room. After some time nandini was all ready in a red saree lookin heavenly beautiful. She looked in the mirror & blushed thinking maniks reaction. As she was abt to go down bt her phone rang & she picked it up.

Ab : Masii maa...app taha hoo?? I m misshing you..(making a sad pout)

N : (imagined his pout & went all awww) Awww mera baby is missing me...(he nodded over d phone) koi baat nhi massi maa naa bas 10mins me aa rahi hai...phir abeer aur massi maa milke dher saari masti karenge...ok??

Ab : Okkk !!! Massi maa i m wailing fr uh...tome fasttt!! I love you...muaahh..

N : (laughed) Baby wailing nai waiting hota hai...n yaa Massi maa loves you too...muaahh!!



Manik was already sitting in his car outside his house and waiting for nandini from past 15 mins & was frustrated & restless as to what took her so much time...he started honking the car & shouted "Jaldi karoo..aaj hi pohochna hai...agar itna tym lagaogi to hum waha aaj nhi kal pohochenge"

Nandini shouted from inside the house "Aa rahi hoon..thoda toh intezaar karo..."

"Uff yeh ladki...kya karu mein iska...har cheez mein itna tym lagati hai...pata nhi kab kaam jaldi khatam karna sikhegi" sighed manik frustratingly.

Nandini came running outside n immediately sat in the car & they drove away.

As she came running Manik was stunned to see his lady love lookin breathtakingly gorgeous. His jaw dropped down bt he composed himself as he was mad at her fr being late.


During the journey :
M : Kitna time lagati ho tum...ek to already late hai upar se tum..kya karu mein tumhara...

N : Uff..ok ok sorry na baba...itna gussa kyu ho rahe ho...hum tym par pohoch jayenge !!

M : Ha ha voh to hum pohoch hi jayenge (sarcastically)

N : Huh!! Ek to tumne yeh bhi nhi bola k mein kaisi lag rhi hu...upar se kabse gussa kar rahe ho😡 Ek din aisa aayega ki mein sab kaam ekdam jaldi se kardungi...ummm...jaise...

M : Jaise??

N : Ummm...haa tumse peecha chudana...monster!!😛

M : Vo to kabhi nhi hoga...tum kitni bhi koshish karlo😉 Acha bt on a serious note Im sorry.. Uh are looking breathtakingly beautiful...I swear agar vaha kisine bhi tumhari taraf dekha naa toh mein uski jaan le lunga (looking at her)

N (blushing) : Haa thik hai thik hai...abhi tum aage dekhke car drive karo...Concentrate on road!

M : Aahh !! Vo hi to nhi karsakta...CONCENTRATE!! Jab itni khoobsurat ladki aapke side par bethi ho (gawking at her)

Just then a truck comes from opposite direction in full speed towards them & seems like the driver has no control over it & nandini notices this n shouts "manikkk" loudly!!

He watches it n takes a sharp turn & "CRASH"



Pheww!! Hogaya...comment karna lamba lamba ...plzz ur comments are vry precious as it motivates me to ryt ...so lyk & comment..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Missed u baby 😛

loved the update..

beautiful..

u showed each couple amazingly 😊

everyone was Damn cute yaa 😃

hihi druv blushing...

aww between nandu n abeer so sweet..

but saah what happened at last [:^(

keep smiling n take care.

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