WILL LOVE YOU TILL THE END M NEW FF Part-7,page-13,updated-4/04/2016 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Great update!
I'm getting a vibe that something disastrous may happen at d party...Maybe, Dips would create some sort of a misunderstanding between Rishbala...
Update d next part soon...
Thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update.
Now I all the more sure dips is going to do something in the party.
Misunderstanding is on the way.
Waiting for the nxt chapter.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you guys for the lovely comments here is the next part

Part 3

Deepali was hell jealous on seeing both of them together...4 of them came towards Sultan and Deepali...Sultan met everyone casually...but Deepali was still staring at RK...RK noticed this and to break the awkwardness he said.

RK: Hey Dips

Deepali: (she was full drunk) she went close to RK and hugged him tightly...(and while still keeping her hands on his shoulder she said)...hey hero...come lets have a dance.

RK felt awkward...he looked at Madhu...who was all confused as why Deepali is behaving like this...suddenly Deepali turned his face from Madhu towards her.

Deepali: Uff RK come on now stop staring your girlfriend...you can stare her as much as you want after we have a dance now come on.

RK again looked towards Madhu...she didn't like Deepali's behaviour...but she was not insecure...she understood RK's situation and Noded her head in yes and smiled at him...RK too smiled at her...and both of them went to dance...and here Karan asked Trishna for a dance...and she said yes...and they too went for a dance.

As Deepali and RK were dancing she came very close to RK

RK: What are you doing dips?

Dips: What is wrong with you RK...you used to like all this...but why are you behaving so weird now.

RK: My girlfriend is here...and you are flirting with me in front of her.

Dips: Oh come on hero...we all know what's the truth...so why are you behaving like this just chill.

RK: So if you know the truth...then please for gods sake stop behaving like this...or else you will ruin everything.

All this while RK and Madhu were glancing at eachother.

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While RK and Deepali were dancing...Madhu felt sad on Deepalis behaviour...when suddenly Sultan offered Madhu a drink.

Madhu: Thanks Sultan but I don't drink.

Sultan: Really(he chuckled)...well that's a major problem as RK drinks alot.

Madhu: I know but I don't...and I will never ever drink.

Sultan: Cool it's totally your choice.

Madhu was still looking at RK and Deepali...when Sultan said.

Sultan: Madhu you know na that Deepali is RK's ex?

Madhu: Yes...I know that.

Sultan: Then why did you let him dance with her.

Madhu: What's the problem in that...she was his ex and now he loves me...and I know he genuinely does.

Sultan: Hahaha..

Madhu: What...why are you laughing?

Sultan: With being a drunkard he is a big flirt too...so be careful.

Madhu: Shut up Sultan...I know him...he will never ditch me.

Sultan: Really...wanna bet?

Madhu: Uff please Sultan don't try your bet game on me...I hate it.

Sultan stares at her for a while.

Madhu: Now what?

Sultan: I hope you get to know about him soon.

RK: About whom Sultan?(suddenly RK interrupted)

Sultan and Madhu looked at each other...and Madhu said.

Madhu: Nothing RK he was just telling me what you like and dislike.

RK: Really...so tell me what do I like the most?

Madhu was nervous...she couldn't think of any answer...but after few seconds she said.

Madhu: D...Drinking. (she stammered)

RK: No Madhu...you are wrong.

Madhu knew that she could be wrong as it was only a guess.

Madhu: So then what do you like the most.

RK: YOU

Madhu who was all upset few minutes back blushed after hearing that...Deepali again felt jealous on seeing all this.

Deepali: So typical of you RK...at least say something new to your girlfriend...you say this line to every other girl.

RK looked at her in anger...even Madhu was feeling bad on hearing this...Deepali suddenly realised what she said...and she tried to cover up.

Deepali: Okay okay...jokes apart...Madhu he genuinely loves you.

Madhu just faked a smile.

Meanwhile Trishna and Karan also came back after a dance.

Trishna: Hey guys...what's going on?

RK: Nothing Trish...just telling Madhu how much I love her.

Trishna: You are saying this to her from the morning...everyone can see how much you love her.

RK: (RK pointed towards Trishna and said to Madhu) See even Trish knows how much I love you.

Madhu: But when did I say that you don't love me.

RK: you didn't say but your eyes are asking so many questions to me.

Madhu: No no RK it's not like that.

RK: If it's not...than will you have a dance with me my love(he forwarded his hand to Madhu)

Everybody screamed...Karan asked the DJ who was his close friend to play a romantic song...and suddenly the song started...DJ asked everyone to empty the place for the couple.

Song- Tumhe Apna Banane Ka Junoon. From hate story 3

Madhu at first felt very shy and nervous on how RK was looking towards her and holding her tiny waist while dancing...but after some time she started feeling comfortable in his arms...they danced on the song very passionately...they were all lost in each others eyes...at the end they gave the famous RK pose...and everybody applauded and hooted for them...Madhu forgot everything about what Deepali did few minutes back.

Finally they came back to their friends...Deepali was hell jealous on seeing them both together again.

Trishna: Wow...you guys were looking so good with each other.

RK: Well Trishna thanks for the compliment...but I must say you and Karan were also looking good with each other...when you both were dancing.

Trishna and Karan looked at each other and smiled.

After enjoying for so many hours finally Madhu said

Madhu: Ok now we should leave.

Deepali suddenly spat the drink on hearing this...and she and Sultan started laughing..while RK said.

RK: What...are you mad...it's only 1 o'clock.

Madhu: That's why I am saying...we should leave...it's too late ...what you guys will say to your parents.

RK: Madhu...they know how I am...when I go for a night out. ..I only come home the next morning...and If I will go so early they will definitely feel that something is wrong with me.

Madhu: What...but that's not good RK...please now let's go home.

Deepali: Madhu if you want you can go we won't stop you but we are not going anywhere.

Suddenly RK interrupted

RK: Okay okay fine guys...I'll drop her and Trishna and then will come to you afterwards.

Karan: Ummm...I think even I will leave now...it's too late.

Deepali: What the hell man...are you guys crazy...we never do this you know...and today...only because of Madhu you want to leave so early...Do whatever you want even I don't want to stay here...(and she said to RK)...come drop me home.

RK: Deepali I am going with Madhu...You go with Sultan he will drop you okay.

Deepali: Go to hell RK...

RK didn't say anything everyone knew she is saying all this because she is all high...and finally Deepali left with Sultan ...Trishna and Madhu left with Karan and RK.

The end
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice part.
now i'm sure its some plan or bet.
waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome updt..!! Dipali is on mission being close to rk.. Madhu is not insecure..why o why she let dipali dance with rk.. wohoo rk & madhu on tumhe apna banane ka junoon.. Sultan tried to creat e a rift between rk-madhu..& now they are heading back home...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Great update.
Now I'm all the more sure dips n sullu r on a mission to create misunderstanding bw Rishabala.
Luckily nothing happened in the party but something is going to happen very soon.
Loved the update.
Thanks for,the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome update!
I have a strong feeling that something is fishy...RK is definitely upto something...which will hurt Madhu ...
His convo wid Dips just doubled my suspicion.
Rishbala dancing on Tumhe apna banane ka junoon... What a beautiful sight would it be! 😳
Waiting for d next part very eagerly.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one.But I doubt there is something fishy.May I be wrong .Anyways enjoyed rishbala moments n that bi...h Deepali should be insulted. Thanks for pm n continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Just awesome. Dips trying to get close to rk n sullu trying to create misunderstanding between rishbala but rk spoiled it. Im glad that he did. Hope their true faces comes out in front of everyone soon. Rishbala dance was so good. N dips again jealous awe that was fab . Awesome update simran. Loved it. Thanks for the pm. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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