calculating my wrong assumptions..(sandhir SHOT.11) Page25UP 7/2/16 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey doll
don't want to disturb u
but if possible please give update
as a Christmas gift😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cardcaptor

hey doll
don't want to disturb u
but if possible please give update
as a Christmas gift😉


sorry dear failed to notice your words. I' ll update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Daddysdoll


sorry dear failed to notice your words. I' ll update soon :)

its OK😃
update sooner 🥱
demand is same
see I am not demanding at all 😆


and a very happy new year 😊
Edited by cardcaptor - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

REMAINING TRUTHS

DRAFTS FROM THE DIARY...

I was wrong. The Randhir Singh Sekhawat was so wrong, but I was just a 5 yrs old heart. I was no wrong in being actually WRONG. The mother that I just had got was pure love to me. She will cry watching me sad, smile watching me play with the dog I had brought with me from the streets in that rainy day. She won't eat unless I feed myself. She will caress my head while I would pretend to sleep. How motherly her hands were for actually helping to me fall asleep. She will treat me like a prince, though having a princess of her own who was younger enough to me to get more of her love.

The princess was a soft baby of just a yr then. I loved to keep looking at her. I didn't like to show this new mother that I yearned to play with her kid so I would just hide somewhere in a corner and keep looking at the princess. Sometimes not finding the lady near her I would just try to pick the baby up that I would fail miserably though. But astonishingly the girl would just smile and make funny faces at me, making me forget the failure. And then I would keep touching her soft cheeks and talk more childishly to her assuming that she would understand my language.

5 yrs old heart was growing faster and so was growing my affection toward them. It had been so long that I had seen my father come back to us. Some people in my neighborhood would say that he was about to die in days as his body had already drank a lot to its good. I knew my new mother had a small idea that where my father could be so I just decided to learn about it from her.

"Hey fugly, you know where my father is right??" Fisting a corner of a curtain I stood near the door expecting her to say something.

"I am gonna tell you but you need to answer me something first." She coming closer and holding both my tiny arms in her hands looked close in my eyes and demanded something and getting nothing in reply continued

"ammm why... do you call me FUGLY"

"Because I was told by my father once, that the one you hate the most in your life is FUGLY to you." I just said the truth but my new mother went pale hearing those words from me.

"So you hate me the most??" she asked me still so politely holding in her hands.

"I don't." I Confessed. "You and the princess don't make me cry like my father does." I further confessed a reality.

I saw her smiling a little and then embracing me whole into her arms. "Call me fugly but don't say that you hate me, because I Love hearing FUGLY from you but not the word hate." She parted to look at me and making me understand things in her own way.

"What if I say, I call you fugly because I like you??" I innocently questioned to make her smile.

"That would be perfect to listen." She kissed my forehead and smiled.

Days passed. I lived happily with them, before I learnt about my father. He had left us. I went to see him at hospital. He had left like my biological mother. I loved him too but being thoughtful from the beginning I had assumed that he was somehow not faithful to both my mothers. I cried that day. But I had my Fugly mom with me now. She was responsible to both of her kids now. So she had started working in a company. I and princess were cared by Kaka (servent) in her absence. We grew up together, the three of us while kaka remained for every one of us like a father. He still is, A FATHER...

...

"Awww how could he be so cute? He called her fugly because he liked her?? Aww!! I was so stupid. But it's not my fault either. He's not a 5 yr old heart now. He is a khadoos boss. Who'll never admit that, he, that he likes me? Oh God what do I do? Will he ever say?? But I should not be exited either. When I myself am not sure of my feelings why on earth will I wait for him?"

Sanyukta was right defending herself for the moment but deep down she knew he had always affected the most in her life. His gestures and eye contacts were always significant in most of the manners. His little touch and closeness had caused butterflies in her stomach. And now because she knows he loved her too, she was to be restless for whole of her life.

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Posted: 9 years ago
thank u for the UPDATE
love u for that😊
keep smiling and keep writing 😉
I m too much mean, see!!!!
thank u once again🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome fantastic superb update.

do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsme update
loved it

beautifully written
now sanyu everything abut rd
he was so cute

he liked her step mom

excited for next
update soon

keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMGGG
This. is. sooo, adorable.
I read it all and i havent read anything in months on IF i just read ff's when im depressed.
I love your ff so much
But please don't make randhir cry I hate when the more stronger or dominant character cries. 🥱

MAD CUTE THOUGH 😳😳😳
One thing I did not like was that theres not many side characters or side stories (sorry to criticize)😲
Eeek v.v i wanted to change the font/size but my ipad doesnt let me.
I need to find other ff's now do you know some happpy ones?😊

Anyways I give 8.45/10 ⭐️
AMAZING
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
another truth revealed to Sanyukta
the five year old Randhir is loved by his stepmother which his own father never gave him
now he changed the meaning of Fugly from hate to like
Sanyukta is happy to know that he liked her
but she doubts that he confess it or not
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
now she knows what fugly means to randhir.. And she is having a glimse of his past..
Continue soon

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