SWASAN OS--HAQ HAI TUMAHARA SANSKAAR

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Hey friends, I am very much disappointed with chipkali (cavity) track. So I am writing an OS about swasan. Hope this will lighten up all swasan fans mood.

After knowing the truth ki swasan got divorced kavita was very happy & she thanks to swara ki "acha hua ki tumne sanskaar ko divorce de diya h & ab hum dono ek ho jayenge. Jo kahani 5 saal pahle adhoori rah gyee thi wo ab poori ho jayegi.

Swara was shocked to listen this & see to sanskaar & trying to reading his eyes but he turned his face. Ye baat swara ko sahan nhi hui & she broken fully & hugged kavita & congratulate her. & said ki "Jo tumhara h wo tumse koi b nhi cheen sakta" after saying that she ran from MM.

Sanskaar was also heartbroken but he needs some tym to clear all the things . he left his place & went his bedroom. Piche piche kavita b uske room me aa gayee.

Sanskaar: kavita, bahut raat ho gyee h, tum guest room me jakr aaram kro.

Cavity: sanskaar, mujhe tumse bahut saari baatein krni h.

Sanskaar: abhi nhi pls hum kl baat krte h. pls leave from here.

Cavity leaves. sanskaar recalls all his memorywhich he had with swara ki kaise swara ne usko & uski lyf ko poori tarah se badal diya. Yahi sb sochte hue wo so gya & early morning he went somewhere. Nobody knows ki sansakaar kahan h????

At the evening sanskaar reached the MM. cavity ran towards him.

Sanskaar: kavita tum oopar room me chalo. Me abhi aa raha ho. Kavita leave.

DP sanskaar se kuch poochne lgta h isse pahle hi sanskaar kahta h "bade papa, trust me.mein aaj sb thik kr doonga & leave.

In d sanskaar's room where kavita was waiting for him

Sanskaar: kavita, dekho ye tum bahut ache tarah se janti ho ki mujhe jyada ghuma firakr baat krna pasand nhi h. ek baat h jo bahut ache se clear kr dena chata hoon. Kavita me tumse shaadi nhi kr sakta. Meri shaadi ho chuki h & mein swara se bahut pyar krta hon.

Cavity: pr tum dono ka to talak ho chukka h na & tum kewl mujhse pyar krte they.

Sanskaar: tumne sahi kaha kavita, mein tumse pyar karta THA pr ab nhi wo sanskaar to tumhare saath 5 saal pahle hi mr chukka tha. Aaj jo sanskaar tumhare samne khada h wo swara ka pati h & rahi divorce ki baat to wo mein tumhe batana jruri nhi samjta ki what exactly kya baat h wo hum dono husband wife ka matter h jo hum aaps me solve kr denge.

But fact is this ki me swara se bahut pyar krta hoon & uske bina jindagi jeene k bare mein soch b nhi sakta & kl uski namm aankhon ne b bata diya ki wo mujhse kitna pyar krti h ki meri khushi k liye wo kuch b kr sakti h.

Pls mujhe galat mt samjhna ab humare beech koi rishta nhi h & mein tumhe koi jhoothi hope nhi dena chata tha. & tum jitney din yahan as a guest rahna chati ho rah sakti ho but maine tumhare rahne ka intezaam b women hostel me kr diya h. subah se me issi kaam me laga hua tha.

Ab decision tum pr h ki tum kya chati ho??? Maine tumhe clear kr diya ki mein ab swara ka hoon.

Cavity (teary eyes): nhi sanskaar, ab jb tum mere sanskaar rahe hi nhi to mein yaha ruk kr b kya krungi & thanks for the hostel. I am leaving now. Bye.

Sanskaar: bye & cavity leaves the MM

Sanskaar monologue : swara mein aa raha hoon tumhe lene. Ye janne k baad ki tum mujhse kitna pyar krti ho ab mein tumhe ek pal b upne se door nhi rahne doonga.

He took of her mangalsutra (FB: swara k haath se jb mangalsutra gir gya that b sanskaar ne usse utha kr upni pocket mein rk liya tha)

In baadi

Swara window k paas khadi upne mobile pr sanskaar ki photo ko dekh rhi thi & asking kyo sanskaar, kya maine itni badi galti kr dee thi ki tumne ek baar mujh pr viswas krna b jruri nhi smjha. Maana humare beech husband wife ka rishta nhi tha pr friendship to thin a & kya friendship me MUnhi hoti tb kya dosti tod dete h. pr koi nhi mein tumhare liye bahut khush hoon ki tumhe tumhara pyar wapis mil gya h. pr dukh h ki mein pne pyar ko pahle nhi smj saki pr ab kuch nhi ho sakta.

& hugged her phone. Sanskaar was seeing all this from the door. He came inside

Sanskar: kisne kaha ki kuch nhi ho sakta. Swara turned & see her life is in front of him.

Sansakar again: bolo na swara. Agr tum chaho to sb kuch ho sakta h (sanskaar teases her)

Swara: sanskaar tum yahan kaise??? Koi kaam tha kya???

Sanskaar: hmm, tumhari koi cheej MM me raha gayee thi & meri ek cheej tum le aayee thi bus wahi dene lene aaya hoon.

Swara: nhi sanskaar, mein wahan kuchnhi bhul kr nhi aayee & turned her face from him.

Sanskaar comes to close her & wwhisper in her ear sach mein. & hugged her from her waist.

Swara feels current with his touch & trying to go away from him. Pr sanskaar was not in mood toleave her swara, her life.

Usne upni pocket se mangalsutra nikala & swara ko pahna diya & after that put a kiss on her earlobe.

Swara sees her mangal sutra & shocked & unable to understand sanskaar's behavior.

Sanskaar seeing her confused then said " swara tumne ye kaise soch liya ki mein kavita k pass jaonga???

Wo mera past thi & tum mera present & tumhare bina to mein jindagi jeene k bare mein soch b nhi sakta. Tumse naraj rahkr jo ye din maine gujare h na. ye main hi janta hoon ki kitni mauten mara hoon main inn dino. Pr ab nhi.

Pls mujhe maaf kr do. Maine tumhe & tumhare pyar ko na samjh pane ki galti ki. & ab upne ghr chalo. Tumhara sankaar tumhare bina kuch b nhi h.

After hearing hi s confession swara burst up & hide her face in his chest & sanskaar pated her hair. & hugged her tightly as much as he can.

Sanskaar cupped her face & look into her eyes & put a feather kiss on her eyes, then cheeks. He want to kiss her beautiful & rosy lips.

He looked at swara who understand what he wants & said shyly "HAQ H TUMHARA SANSKAAR"

& both shared a passionate, much waited kiss.

"ISKE BAAD K KHUD HI ASSUME KR LENA"😉

Pls share ur view is this help to lighten ur mmod or not 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This really did lighten my mood.
Nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc os
its bring smile in my lips...
gud wrk...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a luvly one...& much needed one for us...well written Manisha...

thumne kavitha ki jagah Cavity hi us kiya🤣...aur maine bhi aisa padliya...cavity..cavity..kaash serial mein yehi hothaaa
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful...
And yes I like the way you left something for our imagination...😉
Edited by pearl.16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful OS 👏
Sanskar should do something like this, but insane cvs will never understand what we want to watch
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This really did lighten up my mood! Nice and sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS manisha...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome storyline. It will give a hope to all swasanians,who are unhappy about current track.only positive thoughts will help us.swara and sanskar will realise their true love. Thank you so much for this os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aswome os mannu. Loved it. Kash ye monday ka wu hota.

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