Swasan - Kaun Ho Tum - A Romantic Sci-Fi FF Prt - 2 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys , this is my second FF and i think it is unique in terms that nobody has tried Science fiction in Indian TV yet . Just hope you appreciate it

Part - 1

Scene start in mall of London, inside a huge and lavish garment store

Cash counter closes and a girl asks her friend to leave for home

Friend - R u gonna do overtime today also ?

Girl turns around , she has a pretty face and a charming smile. She is short heigthed but full of energy and confidence. Her name is swara

She changes into a beautiful blue and white print forck and says to Rags(Ragini) - ii ahve to rags, chritmas is round the corner and i haven't earned enough penny. You know i could never save much but this chritmas i want to go to placdes no body has heard of

Rags - You are crazy swara, i'll leave

Rags is swara's childhood friend and both are more like sisters.

Swara is alone in store and cleaning the shelves. suddenly se hears smthng from the storage and goes towards it as she is very courageous and adventrous.

The door seems open and hence she enters it , and calls for the guard

Swara - people just don'tknow how to work , she was about to leave when she hears a little crackle , she turns to look but coudl not find anything , she s about to go but again hears the voice but this time she was shocked "did that dummy just moved?"

Shit swara just leave right now, she start running and hears a voice "Run , Run and don't look back" , she wanted to find out who was the owner ofsuch a heavenly voice but could not dare to , especially after the warning .

So she ran and ran until she was out of the building , and the moment she came out ... the storage part of building burnt into flames. and woah , mannequins were coming out of storage as if thery were alive.

Swara was scared , now she just wanted to rush to home , she definately dint want to die . she rushed but was followed by a mannequin. swara ddecied to dodge it but failed now the live maneqquin was in front of her reachng for her.

Suddenly wind started to rustle , and divine white ligth followed it , Swara could not believe her eyes, a blue box appered in front of her out of thin air . Now she was deintely going to faint but before she was out , she saw the guy breaking the manequin and rushing towards her . she could hear the same heavenly voice and last thing she remembered was the footstep approachinng fast towards her.

...

Shammy is Swara's mother , she is single women and independent , she taught wara how to live life and never be defeated

Shammy - Shona , r u fine ? you scared me

Swara - How did i came home ?

Rags - we got to know about the fire in storage and we rushed to get you, and found you on a loenyl street.

Swara - Where is he ?

Shammy - who?

Swara- the guy who saved me ?

Lucky - I am right here

Lucky is swara's best friend however they both always keep fighting , lucky likes swara but she has no clue

Swara - He saved me? impossible but where's the blue box came from and that walking maneuin where is it ?

Shammy , Rags and Lucky looked at each other and decided she need to rest to overcome the shock of fire.

Was it really Swara's imagination or someting else?

Precap :-

Swara encounters the blue box again

Guys do leave comment , so that I know you like it and want me to continue

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Swaragini + Dr. Who.? Nice try at Sci-Fi! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bwvianna

Swaragini + Dr. Who.? Nice try at Sci-Fi! :)

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Yeah I actually find Varun quite similar to David Tenannat so thought Y not give it a try :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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By god...its so diff...huge fan of sci fi...do pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice nd unique concept.
Wld definitely like to read a SciFi.
Do PM me plz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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#FF #Kaun_Ho_Tum

Hi Guys , I am back with next part . It might be little uninteresting for some but have to write it this way to give story a base, as it is a sci-fi at the core

Hope you like it , do leave comments .

PART -2

Shammy " Shona , I am going for work , as you don't have any till now , I got this one in nearby restauran, will be back by eve"

Swara feeling sorry for her mother and start looking for new jobs in the newspaper

Rags comes there " hey girl, what are you doing?

Looking for job rags , I really don't want mom to work and you know my christmas plan ryt , go on a trip , so gotta find one soon"

Rags " oh , come on give urself some rest, lets go to the nearby summer ausement park , you will get fresh air and we will enjoy" she makes her puppy eyes that swara can't deny

Ok fine , and girls leave for park

...

Amusement park

Swara and Ragini are enjoying a lot in the park , they eat and ride and have lot of fun

Swara was passing by when she sees people making a circle and enjoying something , she clears the crowd to reach to front and she sees

A tall , lean and thin guy dancing crazily , people are enjoying it a lot. He is wearing white sneakers and dark blue coat he turns around and swara was mesmerized by that heavenly smile . he thanks everybody for apprecating his dance , few little girls kisses him on his cheeks .Swara who was lost in the heavenly presence of the guy comes out of her thought when she see him standing in front of her and making actions as if asking for kiss on his cheek

Swara heart started to pound hard , and without thinking anything she kisses his cheeks . "OMG , so soft his cheeks are , the fragrance was out of this world and his stubble gave her Goosebumps "

She came back in her senses only to find him gone far away , she follwos his trail in the crowd and then sees that same blue box disappearing

was she dreaming or he really exits ?

Ragini asks swara that it's late they should go home , its late

...

Night

Swara was thinking about the mystery guy and his blue box

Suddenly Lucky jumps into her room

Swara " what are you doing here so late ?"

Lucky " I am hungry , and your mom won't open "

Swara brings fries fr lucky and again gets lost in her thought

Lucky " what happened shona ? "

Swara tell him everything in detail about the fire day and the incident at amusement park

Lucky " ok , I know a guy which might help you, he keeps doing some crazy stuff mabe he has some answers for you"

He gives her an address and asks her to go there and take his name

...

Next Day

Swara goes to the address given by lucky

It's a shabby place and she was cursing lucky for sending her here alone

She enters the canister , there was an old guy named jacky

Swra "lucky has sent me here , I want to know smthng"

Jacky" oh come dear, I might help , first tell me everything you know"

Jacky gets up after hearing the sotry and takes out an old album from a shelf , he puts the dust off and opens it

Album has pics of news paper clipping

Jacky " the blue box has appeared many a time in centuries , but diferent men appeared with it all the time , but everytime the name he was called by is "The Doctor"

Swara " Doctor who?"

Jacky " nobody knows , but what you are telling is true then my whole theory sets right , he does exist"

Swara looks in the album for a while and leave from there

She comes out from the place and is walking in the ally , suddenly she feels something following her she turns around to see the same mannequin following her at a fast pace , she runs but hear one more footstep and turns around to see , mystery man fighting the mannequin with a . ...wait he is fighting with a screw driver ?

He fights with the manequin and in the meantime talsk to swara

Doc Hi , we meet again . R u a cyborg? "

Swaraa " what ?" No I am human

Doc " then why are these things behind you?

Swara "I don't know "

Swara sees doc running behind the wall like a lunatic but it was funny , she smiles and then he comes back

Doc " phew done, hope it was the last one , they are like sheeps and I am their sheperd"

Swara was again memsmezied by his voice and his cute looks and finds him leaving

Swara " hey wit , who are you ?"

Doc " I am the Doctor ?"

Swara " doctor who ?"

Doctor turns and gives a killer smile and goes towards his blue box

Swara " will we meet again"?

Doctor " Depends on how much you need me ?"

...

Swara was thinking about all the encounters with this doctor, and amused at his cute gestures. She definitely wanted to meet him again

Precap

Swara and Doctor meet again , in her room

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice. What is a cyborg?
Nyways continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanavi

Nice. What is a cyborg?
Nyways continue soon


Cyborg is a kind of robot , which has its own brains and looks like humans

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