MaNan os- Chal wahan jate hain

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CHAL WAHAN JAATE HAIN

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Nandini was wearing a beautiful white churridar and walking in between a park . the pathwas covered with cherry blossoms since, it was spring season. When suddenly she heard a voice.

asmaan ke pare ek jahaan hai kahin
Jhooth sach ka wahan qayeda hi nahin
Roshni mein wahan ki alag noor hai
Saaye jismon se aage jahaan jaate hain
(she turned behind and saw manik standing behind leaning to a tree with hands in pockets and looking at her lovingly. Nandini slowly walked towards him and touched his cheek with her hand to which he touched her hand back affectionly)


Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyaar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain (x2)
(manik holds her hand and puts it on his shoulder. He then holds her waist with one had and entangles the other hand with her hand and puts his head over her as a sign of assurance that he is always there with her..forever.. nandini closes her eyes to absorb his presence)


Seene se tum mere aake lag jaao na
Darte ho kyun zara paas toh aao na (x2)
Dhunn meri dhadkano ki suno..
(he puts his both hand on her bare back to which touch nandini shivers and looks into his eyes. She can see the glint of mischief in his eyes. Suddenly, a drop of tear falls from her eyes which manik rubs off with his hand and signals a no)


Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain (x2)
(he hugs her and she closes her eyes. She holds him tight as possible as if her tight gets looses he will leave her)


Oo.. jaate hain
Chal jaate hain
Jaate hain... jaate hain...
Koi subah wahan raat se na mile
Ud ke wahan chalo aao tum hum chale (x2)
Pankh laaya hoon main ud chalo...
(manik breaks the hug and swirls her holding her from her waist. She let herself fel it, enjoy it. Manik twirls her around and plants a small kiss on her head on which nandini closes her and feels it)


Chal wahan jaate hain
Chal wahan jaate hain
Pyar karne chalo
Hum wahan jaate hain (x2)

Suddenly, a little voice shouting mamma breaks nandini's trance and looks behind to see little manik puuling her salwar as a gesture to pick him up. She looks around but no one was there. She closes her eyes and sighs sadly knowing it was again ONE OF HER DREAMS.

She look at liitle manik and picks him up. Manik sees tears in the eye of his mother he affectionly rubs them off from his extra lengthy sleeves shirt and gestures her a no to which nandini smiles.

Manik says"mamma apko papa ki yaald aa lahi hai"

Nandini smiles and says"nahi mera baccha hame unki yaad kyu ayegi app ho na aur hame toh pata hai ki who har waqt hamare saath hai..alwaya ..hamesha uss star " she point towards a bright big star and continues"wo hi toh papa hai jo hame har waqt dekhte hai toh ham kyu miss kare unhe"

She puts manik down who instantly hold her lttle finger and start naarating his day's event to which nandini continuously nods.

She turns behind and sees her manik still leaning on the tree and looking at her and little manik affectionaly. She smiles at him to which he smiles back too. She again turn toward little manik and pick him up .

Here manik keeps on seeing them and then turns back and gets lost in the white fog...

THE END...

Edited by diyamanan - 9 years ago

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Sukanyadhar12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely, emotional os. Thanks for posting it. Tack care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome👍🏼
but emotional OS😔
LOVED IT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u made me cry diya...
it was an emotional one...
and i loved it...
aww...lil manik cares for his mum sooo much...
truly an amazing one...

write more soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aawww
Tgis was so emotional.
Nice yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update babe...
emotional and touchy...
loved it



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ...amazing...really heart touching
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really emotional one..
Jst can't control myself frm crying..
U really made me out of words..
Do write more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm
It was a very emotional but nice os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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IT'S SO DIFFICUT TO LIVE WITHOUT YOUR SOULMATE... EMOTIONAL IT WAS... THANKS DIYA... LOVE YOU...

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