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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful update. Do write more n thanks for the pm

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice one
But it was painful
Thanks for pm

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it was painful os

bt live is all ways abt happiness

u pinned his perfectly

made us cry

do writng more

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

U killed me

Yaar

Scriously I mean

That is so

Emotional😭😭😭

Awww poor manan

God

Why love always

Gives pain

Continue soon

BcZ today u

Rock Yaar

Am Eagerly waiting

Love

Diya😛😛😛

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Anushi

@anushi3012

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Such a heartfelt and profound update...

I could feel Manik's pain and loss- so well described.

And as a reader, I always appreciate complete sentences and no abrev and you did it!!

So hats off to you!!!

Waiting for Manan reunion

Again thank you for the pm.

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Omg!
Such a heartwrenching os
loved it to the core
it wasn't his mistake though cz he wanted her to be happy
loved it very much

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

DAMN.. that was emotional girl..
You made ne cry..
I read this just now..
Going through ur inbox.. when i found this.. and i m happy i found one..
U r an awesome writer... do write more..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

It was really emotional but I loved it yo the core
Firstly to it was described beautifully or I must say perfectly
Painfull one
Manik did the right thing to let her go but what happened with him later was his punishment for previous deeds... If he died that may be less painful but being alive alone... Suffering is very painful like deing thousands deaths 😭