OS: Swara's Ordeal (2) - Phoenix Rising

Thank you - I was feeling so sorry for Swara - and this is my attempt at analyzing her thoughts. Glad you liked it😊

Thank you - for reading and letting me know!

Really your letter marked all words of swara character !!!

Feel swasan in your letter !!!! i think this is what you want to convey in this letter !!!👍🏼

Thank you - if you feel Swara and SwaSan, then I guess I have have got it right! I was not sure if I was able to express what I thought Swara was going through!

Thanks for reading!

So well written. This really said the perfect things we all wish Swara could/ would say to Sanskaar to really make a key difference to their relationship. I have a special fondness for hard hitting letters, tried to write a fair few from Sanskaar and could really engage with the pathos and touching honesty in this. I can see Sanskaar being so overcome when he reads this, he would have to thaw and no matter how good his reasons this would inspire a serious bout of self flagellation. Really enjoyed reading this, although enjoyed seems the wrong word given how harrowing the context.

Best wishes, Shruti