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Coming with os guys ...I hope you guys like it ...here it is ...ENJOY😛

Manan OS-
Heeriye❤️



Manik and nandani both were couple ...nandani who loves manik a lot ...couldn't bear any scratch on him ...and same with manik ...manik was going to for his class but someone dragged him in a corner and kissed on his lips ...manik was so shocked by this ...he couldn't understand what to do ...but this scene was watched by nandani ...who was shattered like anything ...she couldn't believe in her eyes whom she loved like anything was cheated on her ...she just left from there ...and cried like anything ...manik was continuously calling her but she didn't receive his calls ...she cried the whole night ...on the other side manik to get to knew this was the plan of vibha ...to separate them ...he tried every possible way to convince nandani but she doesn't even want to see his face ...but he knows he can't broke like this ...so in morning he send a lot of letters of sorry and bouquets of roses ...but that makes nothing increase nandani's temper ...


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CANTEEN-

Manik was sitting with fab5 ...his eyes were blood shot red ...everyone knows how much pain he is having ...cabir came towards him and placed his hand on his shoulder

Cabir : Manik don't worry ...am sure she will understand u ...she loves u dude ...it's just that ...she is heartbroken ...she thinks u cheated on her ...am sure when she get to knew the truth ...she will come back ...

Manik smiled a little but next thing makes everyone shock ...nandani came and slap manik tightly ...manik looked at in shock

Nandani angrily said: kya ese kya dekh rahe ho ...u knew what u deserve this ...samajhte kya ho khud ko ...u kissed a girl in front of me ...dammit ...and u want me to believe u ...to forgive u ...u knew what ...I thought that u love me ... but dad was right ...he told me like zillion times to stay away from u ... par main...I always told him that u r wrong... my manik loves me like anything ...but see what my manik did ...my manik broke me ...my ...manik broke my heart ...why haa ...why did you do that ...why ...

She grabbed his colar ...tears were flowing from her eyes but manik was also crying ...he never thought that she will react like this ...she will be in so much pain ...he tried to hold her but nandani show him her hand

Nandani shoutedly said : Don't u dare touch me ...u lost that right ...

Manik was all shocked by listening this ...she turned to go ...

Cabir : Nandani ek baar kam se kam baat toh sun lo ...

Nandani coldly said: ...kya sunu main ...jo dekhna tha dekh liya ...and one more thing ...Am leaving ...leaving Manik ...leaving this place ...leaving this country ...Thank you guys for giving me so much pain ...

She left from there ...leaving Manik all shattered ...he sat on the floor and cried ...and said

Manik cryingly said : I ...I ...lost her ...I ...lost ...her ...

Cabir came and hugged him tightly ...manik to hugged him and cried ...

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AFTER 2 DAYS...


fab5 ...These five people's who have everything...name ...fame ...everything was with them ...but they are not in peace ...bcz there peace left them ...there nandani ...there angle ...broke every relations with them ...she doesn't even want to see there face ...everyone tried to contact her but she blocked every way ...it has been two days...manik was breathing but he was not leaving ...bcz his soul reason of living was left him ...today is fab5 concert
...everyone knows how much difficult for manik ...cabir came towards him and said

Cabir : Manik are u okay?

Manik looked at him and said:I don't knew cabir ...I love her ...maybe my love for her is not that strong ...that's why she choosed to leave me ...but I want her back ...back in my life ...

Everyone was looking at him in shock they didn't understand what he is saying ...bcz in these two days he is almost lost all the hopes and now suddenly this ...they were not able to understand him...cabir left from there by saying some important work and goes to the airport ...where nandani is going to out of india ...cabir came in front of her ...nandani looked at him and said

Nandani furiously and : what u want ...jo tumhare dost ne kiya kaffi nahi tha ...

Cabir shoutedly said: haa nahi tha kaafi ...jo pyaar usne tujhse kiya ...shayad voh kaffi nahi tha ...jo tune ek baar bhi usse yeh puchne ki koshish nahi ki ...kya voh sach tha yaa jhooth ...

Nandani angrily said: sach yaa jhooth ...like Scriously cabir ...agar koi aur mujhse aa kar kehta naa toh main believe bhi nahi karti par jo maine dekha ...uss par kaise yakin naa karu main ...

Cabir calmly said: kabhi kabhi jo dikhai deta ha voh sach nahi hota ...

Nandani shockingly said : kya matlab

Cabir tells everything to nandani ...nandani was so shocked by listening everything ...she is not able to believe ...she is not able to forgive herself for accusing a person who loves her like anything ...tears were flowing from her eyes ...she sat on the chair ...fully shattered ...cabir placed his hand on her shoulder and said

Cabir : Maanta hu shayad galti uski bhi ha ...par bahot pyar karta ha tujhse ...jee nahi payega tere bina ...aaj concert ha uska ...nahi jaanta kya karega voh ...par usse lagta ha ki tum aaogi ...main tumhe kuch bhi karne ke liye force nahi karunga ......IF U FORGIVE HIM ...PLEASE COME BACK TO HIM...HE LOVES U ...IF THIS TIME U WOULDN'T COME ...MAYBE HE IS NOT ABLE TO ALIVE ...BCZ FOR HIM U R HIS SOUL ...HIS REASON OF EXISTANCE...HIS HEART ...


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Manik came on the stage ...he picked up his guitar ...and looked towards the entrence ...Druv came and placed his hand on his shoulder ...he gave them a weak smile ...and starts ...


Jadd tainu vekhiya
Pehli vari main taan
Tennu hi takhda raiya
Jachda nahi si
Tere naal main taan
Fir vi Jachda raiya

(Manik remember how they meet ...how he just lost in her ...her big eyes ...her sweet smile ...he knows maybe he was not for her but he was not able to believe that she left him ...a lone tear came from his eyes ...)

Khinchda raiya tainu apni ore
Tainu main kenda raiya
Khinchda raiya tenu apni ore
Tainu main kenda raiya

(He remember how he used to do something which brings her attention ...how he confessed his love to her ...)

O Heeriye tainu le jaana
Ai gal tu man'ch basa
Nahi jeena tere bina
Saanu de naa sazaa...

(He looked at the door and hope ...maybe she will come ...he wants to tell her believe him ...he only loves her only her ...and if u leave me I wouldn't be alive ...)


Jaane na tu ...ai kyu?
Teri teri yaadon main tanha hua
Tere liye saansein ...chale meri zinda hua
Tu jo kahe toh paaniyon pe chal dun main ...
Karaaan tera sadka
Tera hi sadka karaan


(He remember every moment ...there cute little fight ...there hug ...he wants to tell her when u r with me am alive but when u left me am nothing less than a dead body ...please come back ...this is the only thing ...he is able to say ...)


O HEERIYE tenu le jaana
Ai gal tu man'ch basa
Nahi jeena tere bina
Saanu de naa sazaaa

(His eyes were filled with tears as if saying please don't give such hard punishment to me ...to us ...please come back ...)

Rab ka ye tukda
Sona jeha mukhda
Ik waari hor dikha
Gham ki parat pe
Jhooti sharat pe
Phir jeena sikha

(He looked at the door hoping her to come and saw ger magical face which takes all my worries ...and makes me alive ...)

O HEERIYE tainu le jaana
Ai gal tu man'ch basa
Nahi jeena tere bina
Kyun dendi tu ai sazza...


Manik ended the song ...his eyes were closed ...tears of flowing from his eyes ...his hope ...his life ...his angel ...left him ...that breaks him ...but there was one person who was crying like anything bcz of her ...they were having so much pain ...she just ran towards him and hugged him tightly ...manik was shocked ...he opened his eyes and saw nandani in his arms ...he was not able to believe in his eyes ...but he hugged her back so tightly ..if it was a dream...he just don't want to end this dream ever in his life ...nandani broke the hug and cryingly said

Nandani cryingly said : Am sorry manik ...tumhare pyaar ke layak nahi hu main ...how could I ...am sorry ...am sorry for giving u so much pain ...for making u cry ...for breaking my promise ...am sorry manik ...sorry for everything ...maaf kar doo apni nandani ko ...

Manik wiped her tears and hugged her tightly and said

Manik : Never leave me Nandani ...I will not able to alive ...never left me jaan ...never ...

Nandani : I promise ...I will never left u ...I love u Manik ...I love u a lot...

Manik : I love you too my SOUL ...


Both eyes were filled with tears but this time these tears were happiness ...to be with each other ...


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***Sometimes misunderstandings create rift ...we should talk and clear them ...otherwise it will give you pain ...a pain which was unable to bear ...***


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Here is the os ...I hope you guys like it ...
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Diya😛
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vaishnavigarla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fabulous os
I just loved it
the meaning you gave
from this story is very thought full
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH!! DIYA... IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL... THANKS FOR THE ONE-SHOT... LOVE YOU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS👏
nice story...
nandini misunderstood manik😲
but loved the way how manik didn't gave upon them
nandini should have talked to him once...
she herself let vibha win...
but when there are friends like cabir ...no one apart them😊
finally nandini realised her mistake and manan were back😊

the lines you wrote about misunderstanding are superbb...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb os
the moral of the story is good
its absolutely right
i loved it
keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The best story ever continue plzzz soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. .awesome. ..u are surprising us day by day..
I really loved it.
Grt job. ..😳👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So emotional!! Loved it... Pls do write some more of such OS... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os dear just loved it thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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