MG SS#3:The Deadly Husband Note Part 39-Page 140 13/8/2018 - Page 66

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Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Awesome... Superb... Maaneet are totally in love... And I am in love with them. Sooo happy for maaneet. At last they got their happiness which they deserved. And geet got a lot of relations along with her sister back after marrying maan. Can understand y maan felt bad as geet could not enjoy her marriage. But now everything is ganna be fine. Absolutely lovely update. Loved it when maan asked geet to come along with him for a long drive and geet could not understand if it's a request or an order... That is maan Singh khurana. šŸ‘.
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lovely update
maan taking annies help to give geet surprise
they are off to shimla
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Read all parts. Superb story. Loved the bond bet maan-annie-Aryan-Rahul. Nicely woven the story. You gave more importance to friendhship bet all and then maan-annie-geet friendship was awesome. They had to part ways from each other. But maan never stopped finding her whereabouts. His love has no limits. How much he loved her from the beginning. But geet took so long to respond back. But she too was never at fault after whatever she has endured. Glad that she understood his love and they became one. Hate akshay & abhinav. Now what they planning ahead..? Aryan Shaina love story was cute. Annie is too sweet. Whatever she did was just to bring them close. Loved Rahul-Annie's Jodi. They were sweet & cute. Waiting for Rahul-annie to unite.
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Awesomde part
maan made her shift to his room, she was exicted seeing wedding pics of her friend, maan felt bad as she missed on her wedding. Maan is planning something with annie to suprise geet. Geet called shaina n her family for dinner. Maaneet on way to shimla... wat annie is planning with rahul... waiting to know
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Maaneet missing each other
Maan reached his room saw geet his bed
He want sleep her she too accept
Annie ask geet for help wearing dress
Geet shocked watching dress
She too admired her beauty saw in mirror
Maan came annie saw geet position
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nice update dear
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After ur lovely works of OS n SS, i totally addictes to The Deadly Husband!!!
I really like the way of ur writing n creative ideas!!
Story is moving in good pace with their ups n downs!! Its a delight read their budding relation!!
so much eager to knw tat how annie's affair will be out!!! Waiting for nxt part!! Iam glad tat u used jeena song for ts update!! It suits the current situation perfectly!!
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Finally maaneet became one
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Part 36

Maan hoped and had prayed that she could only sleep till they reach but then, she woke up and above, got to know about the place they were going to. Things could never be as perfect as you wish them to be. But none the less, her smile, her excitement on knowing about their destined place was not defamed. Maan noticed her looking at him cheekily before looking ahead but then, suddenly she frowned and looked back at him. "Why do you have to keep it a secret? You could have told me...I should have packed few things". She complained making him chuckle. "I could not tell you because I want to keep it a secret... I wanted to surprise you..." He fake a sad expression. "Actually was hoping that after last night, you will be too tired to wake up on the way and was even thinking...that you will sleep down at a place and wake up to another...But some plans are never too apt" And Geet smiled broadly this time. "With me, you shouldn't think of a plan to be apt...They can go haywire (faulty)". She bit her lip as she speak. Naughtiness could be seen in her eyes and that made Maan smirk. Holding her hand, he brushed the thumb slightly onto her knuckles before whispering. "With you, I am planning to be haywire (out of control)". She considered his words for a moment before her cheeks flushed thinking how he had turned her words from her in his favor. Seeing the redness he smiled and looking ahead, changed the gears, still keeping her hand held between his. "And don't worry about other things...Everything else is planned." And as much as it made her excited, she was feeling overwhelmed too. His love was boundless.

Hotel inside pics.(Do check to get an insight)

http://www.cleartrip.ae/hotels/info/the-oberoi-cecil-41445

Few minutes later, they were standing infront of the receptionist of The Oberoi Cecil where Maan had already made bookings. Geet was glad to roam around and explore the antique furniture, the wooden floors and while looking through the windows, witnessed the most beautiful view of a rised sun trying to make it rays flow from the thick fog. Snuggling more into her shawl, she took a deep breath when she saw some hotel resident moving towards the restaurant area dressed up in sleek and fancy suits and then, she looked down at her ownself. The night suit pj's having outlined bears and she felt herself Stupid. "Let's go..." Maan said as he came back after finishing the check in procedure and saw her glaring but without saying a word, she moved towards the elevators leaving him confused. Maan swiped the card on the door of the room allotted to them which was on the top floor of the hotel and made her enter. The room was elegant and classy. The front room was a living room where comfy blue sofas were placed and then was join by the room having similar furniture of the bed. Geet loved the decor. "It's very nice" She said but the next moment, she was trapped against the door, closing it at her back while her front was covered with his body. "It is nice but first tell me, why were you looking angry downstairs?" He had noticed, she noted but making a pouty face, she replied. "I can't believe you made me stand in a nightsuit in such a posh hotel...I must have been looking funny". She complained making him smile. Moving his hand, he ran his thumb across her cheek before whispering. "I don't care about others or there thoughts...for me, you look beautiful in everything...". And Geet was all smiles. He could always lift up his mood. "Besides, I don't think you would have preferred me carrying your sleeping self-inside instead of you standing in a night suit...now would you have?" He explained his original plan with a naughty glint only to see her eyes turning wide before she shook her head in a furious No. "Definitely not..." "So...Come on now...lets take a nap...than in the afternoon we have to go to your Mom's factory..." Maan said as the door was knocked and he pulled Geet to the side to open in up. The bellboy was there to deliver their luggage. "Thank you" Maan said closing the door and moving it to the bedroom to make it easy for Geet to open up. "But I am hungry...". Geet said following him in. "Ok...call the reception and order the food...In the meantime, I will take a quick bath". As Maan left to have a shower, Geet placed the order of a hassle free light breakfast and opened up the bags. One was Maan's from which she took out another sweatshirt and trouser for him to change into. After placing it nicely onto the bed, she went to another bag and was stunned on opening it. Inside were her all kind of toiletries, innerwear and beside them, some night suits. Ahem. The sexy ones. She took them out for a moment before shoving them back in. "What the..." She was shocked. "Has Maan packed them?" She wondered but then her eyes fell onto the front zipping side where a yellow note was attached. "Few Gifts from me ;) Hope you will have a great time on your Honeymoon...Annie". And Geet was all blushed. She opened the next bag to see whole new set of dresses. The click sound from the back caught her attention and she looked up to see Maan coming out, wrapping a towel around his waist with bear torso. For the first time, she felt her throat turned dry cause of anything else than thirst.

On the other side, Annie woke up on hearing the loud commotion occurring outside. Cursing the intruder, she got out from her warm bed and looked out at the entrance of the house through the terrace door and found the one man she never wanted to face. She boiled with anger at once. "Seems like he really need that slap he missed to get last time". Grabbing the shawl from the night stand, she made her way downstairs and out in the chilled air.

"See, you better let me in...or I will complain to Geet...She knows me...and on knowing that what kind of attitude you guys showed me, she will kick you out." An egoistic Abhinav was warning Roy. "Wow...what a confidence" Annie shook her head in amusement before approaching the men. "What the hell is happening out here?" She inquired loudly grabbing the attention of the men. "Annie Maam, this man is trying to enter the premises of the house. He is keep on claiming that he and Geet maam are close friends" Roy, who definitely knew the man, acted as indifferent. "And Maan Sir has strictly instructed us to not let any stranger get into the house." Roy added. "That bloody Maan...No one can stop me to see Geet today" Abhinav growled and tried to get out from Roy's hold only to receive that well deserved slap from Annie. He looked down at that little girl with anger. "You b*itch..." He grunted and tried to leap at her only to get pushed back by Roy and fell down on the floor. "Don't you dare swear on my brother... this house, as much as it belong to Bhai and BHABHI, (she emphasized on Bhabhi) it belongs to me too and I willn't dare anyone take a step inside who don't respect my brother...Roy, Please show him the way outside...I need to call my lawyer ASAP." Annie turned while Roy with the help on another man, threw Abhinav out. That was the time when Rahul made his way inside and saw Annie dialing a number from the local line cordless. "Hey...whats up...who was this man outside?" Rahul inquired as Annie turned and made her way into his arms taking a loud sigh of relief. "You okay?" Rahul inquired worriedly as he caressed her back. "Hmmm...I am fine now...How was your night out with Aryan Bro and friends?" Annie inquired parting away. Rahul wasn't convinced by her but let her divert the topic. "It was great...after so long...catching up with your friends..." Rahul's smile was reciprocated by Annie as she took her place on the sofa along with him. "Good...glad to know it... Did you have breakfast?" Annie questioned just to see him shook his head. "Why don't you fresh up and then we will have it together...Rupa must be in kitchen by now" Rahul gave her a precise look and the nodded. "Let me grab my bag from the car then..." And he made his way towards the door just to see Roy approaching and passed him greeting before moving out. "Annie Maam...Are you fine?" He inquired just to see Annie smile. "Yeah, I am...you were there to protect me and beside, he was not here for me" And Roy agreed. "Beside, I am going to pull out a restriction order from the court...I so don't want this man to come anywhere near Geet or Bhai..." and Roy nodded in agreement. "By the way, how could bhai left you behind...Who went with him for security?" Annie inquired with a raised brow. From the time Roy was hired, he had always acted like a shadow for Maan. Wherever Maan went, if not anyone else from the security, Roy was surly made to take along with him. It was the first time Annie remember in last 7 years that Maan was not in home and Roy was. "Maan sir didn't took anyone with him this time..." And that made Annie smirk with a giggle. "First time huh...things are surly changing for good..." Annie grinned and that grin broadened as Rahul entered with his stay over bag.

After having a sound sleep of straight 5 hours, Maan woke up alone in his bed only to see Geet already dressed up for the day. She was wearing a bright yellow suit that was having multi color flower patterns. She has topped it up with a soft yellow sweater, minimal makeup and small but bright pink earrings. "You woke up early?" Maan inquired in a just wake up voice as he sat up and looked at the clock. They still have some time in hand. "I just couldn't sleep...I...I tried but couldn't...so I took a bath and couldn't help but check all the dresses...You shouldn't have asked Annie to buy so many...I already have plenty which are still untouched..." She complained just to see him stretching his arms out before he get down from bed. "And got my surprise ruined right before it started...no way..." Geet bit her lip to hide her smile that was trying to come up seeing his childish way. Rising up his hands, he stretched them out before getting up. Shying Geet looked down and played with her fingers. Maan noticed and moved ahead to grab her fingers with his. He smoothed the tie ring with his thumb before looking up with a smile. The afternoon cool shine of the sun was pouring more glow on her already smooth face. "You are looking beautiful Geet..." His other hand moved up to cup her face. Her heart raced. Her blood pumped through her veins with a rushing speed. Oh God! How much she was waiting to get touch by him...She never knew she had ever craved for someone's touch as much as of him. Right from after their first intimate night, he has been keeping himself a bit away from her. Her heart was contentiously dipping with the thoughts of disappointment. He would keep her close, hug her, occasionally kiss her on forehead or her neck, but never initiated anything more than that. She clenched her fists at the side, not allowing any moment from her to make him jump back. She needed him. He bend her head on a side before moving down in a slow motion. He saw her gulping down her saliva, her trembling lips, her down casted eyes. Oh how he love her. But as soon as there was just a hairline gap between their lips, he backed off. "Oh! I need to brush" Saying so quickly, he turned on his toes and moved towards the bathroom with a sneaky smile. "Maan k bache" He heard her groan and turned the tap on to let the running water hide the sound of his laugh. Then he heard the sound of something striking to the bathroom door and chuckled. Hair brush. He thought before undressing.

2 hours later, Geet was made to sit on the office chair in her mother's office room. "Whenever Maam used to visit, she used to sit here on this very same chair". One of the old employees informed making Geet teary. Maan stood near so happy to see Geet getting her rightful respect and place. "Maam do you need anything?" The employee asked just to see Geet shook her head and left. Maan sat on the table right beside her and looked down at her with a happy smile. "You are happy, aren't you?" He inquired just to see her nod before she leaned back at the chair. "I can feel Mom around here Maan". "Hmm...Me too..." He replied with a sigh. She opened her eyes and found him looking out at the scene through the window, crossing his hands on his chest. She was feeling frustrated and angry now with his Self-Control. Feeling bold, she got up and made a place between his thighs before circling her hands around his neck. "Why are you keeping a distance away from me Maan? Am...Am I...Did...Did I do something?" Her questions made him wide eyed now and instantly, his arms circled her waist. "How can you think something like this Geet...You are all I needed, all through...all I wanted, now, forever, always" He assured, "Then why are you staying away?" She was teary. A kind of rejection was searing her heart. "Shhh..." He hushed and pulled her closer, making their breaths hitting eachother face. "I...I don't want you to think that it's just the physical aspect of this relation that I am interested in...I want you to assure that...that what we share is more than this...". Her fingers now rushed through his thick hairs. God, how much she was itching to do it since this morning. She wanted to do it when he had came out in just a towel, hoping in her heart that he makes a move to her but instead he turned back to the bathroom after grabbing his clothes. During the breakfast, she again hoped for some morning fun but again he kept stick to the newspaper and asked her to search on her Iphone the places she will like to see and visit. "I know now what we share Maan...If it had been just physical, then you wouldn't have kept away all those months after marriage" She whispered back just to see him smile. "So...am I allowed to do anything?" He questioned huskily, against her cheek rubbing it softly against his own one. "Anything..." She agreed breathlessly only to find him closing the aching distance between there lips.

On the other side, Rahul and Annie were having a blast. After the breakfast, they sat down into silence till Annie suggested to watch a movie to with Rahul agreed. Spreading lazily onto the couch, snuggling, they both watched an old hindi flick from Maan's collection which was mostly seen by Annie as Rahul slept half the way. But she loved it. To see him so careless than his always on alert position. "Thank you Bhai". She whispered in her heart before moving his hairs away from the forehead and cuddled him till she too was asleep. Going out would have meant to take Roy along that she nor Rahul wanted. They wanted to be relaxed so instead, they bought online tickets of Bajirao Mastani and sent Rupa and her driver husband out for a date, having all the house to there ownself. The chased eachother, they laughed, they teased eachother before falling into eachother arms for a quick kiss. They ordered take out and had a mini party which was joined by Aryan and Shaina who came to check up on Annie having Maan's orders. But nonetheless, they had a great time.

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain

Duniya meri humdum

O aasma mila zameen ko meri

Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena

Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum

Maan pulled out the chair to let his beautiful wife get seated comfortably onto the terrace of Raddison Hotel Pulse Bar area. She shivered as the cold wind hit her and heard Maan's disapproved groan. "Geet, We should shift inside" He argued just to see her shook her head. Adament, she was. But he so didn't want her wife to get hit by cold right on the first day of their mini honeymoon. This part of the hotel was mostly only reserved for residents but he had visited it earlier and loved the food. So he pulled some strings and above advantage to be in the same business, he was escorted outside along with his dear wife at his hand in a royal way. They had been roaming into the busy streets of Shimla all day. Shopped from bystanders and enjoyed chatpatta snack. With cluttering teeth, she rubbed her hands as he placed a quick order for some hot soup and moved closer to wrap his arms around her. Happily she leaned into his warm self and nuzzled. "Sitting outside in the cold..." He opened up his jacket to enclose her in. "has it's own perks" He mumbled to just see her clutching his shirt in a fist. "Does...Does't it?" She stuttered with an equally stuttering giggle. He grabbed her fisted hand in his and rubbed it. Having no one sitting outside in such a cold weather had also provided them with the much needed loneliness, they needed. So what if it's cold?. "Look ahead" Geet mumbled as they both moved ahead to see the sun setting down and fog covering the peaks of the mountains standing ahead. "It's a preview of heaven" she murmured and he pulled her closer agreeing. "My view of heaven". Later he ordered the server to get a shawl but instead of giving it to her, he pulled out his jacket to cover her and took the shawl on himself. Her wife willn't take something used by someone else. He was determined. They dined into the coolness of the air and warmness of the shawl and embrace and hot gazes. He got there dessert packed while leaving.

Entering their room, Geet's hand moved to switch on the lights but was stopped by Maan, who had grabbed her hand. She smiled blushingly as he turned her around, entwined both of his hand finger with her's at her back. Her chest rose to the front, making the contact more intimate. "I want you, Now, Geet..." He grumbled huskily. His eyes had been making her feel hot and cold, promising her of a passionate night that she so eagerly looking forward too. But the way, he said it, made her toe curl. She bit her lower lip, moved her chin up and looked back at him with the same intense gaze before whispering. "You have me..." and that was enough to let down all the left out barriers between them. Any hesitation, any bounding thoughts were forgotten as his lips moved ahead to trail a list of kisses on her forehead to the temple till lightly sucking on her ear lobe. She hissed as he pulled the soft skin of her ear with his teeth and fall into his arms helplessly. He pushed her against the cream wall of the living room and bared her body till she was matching the color of the wall. She shivered as his cold finger tips ran at her bare waist. Maan noticed and smirked before making her go through the same torture for a few minutes before pulling her up and leading her to the bed. Leaving her writhing, he went away to put on the room heater before joining back and taking her on a ride of pure pleasure.

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Next: Honeymoon part 2

Edited by ..oneOone.. - 9 years ago

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