my new fanfic...AR made 4 each oder

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys ...................... i myself enjoy a lot reading fanfics n 2 day decided 2 make 1 of my own............... so here it goes.........

part 1

its gonna be ridz's bday d next week..................

everybody cums 2 d hospital as usual............evry 1 is dere in d locker room except 4 ridz..............so anjali tells every1 bout ridz's upcoming bday...............atul very excitedly replies"are wah............... ridz ka bday hai wednesday ko!!!!!!!!!!!ye to baut achi bat hai...........kyu na hum log kuch kare uske liye"

anjali"to main tumhe ye bat aur kis liye bata rahi hu dr.atul?"

atul saying 2 sapna jali anjali kahin ki......

armaan thinking bout ridz n smilling n his background muzic is being played..............n den he says "hum sab log basket ke liye 1 surprise party prepare karte hai"

anjali"so dr. atul.........main aise ideas expect kar rahi hu................hai apke paas aisa kuch"

atul"ha hai na........... pichli bar ki tarah is bar bhi ridz ko party mein armaan hi lekar aega"

listening dis armaan bcums quite happy n kisses atul...........atul says chi chi ...........kya kar raha hai armaan>.....n armaan laughs n thnx atul.........

sapna"kyu na hum log ridz ke liye party beech side rakhe................aur sare arrangements main aur anjali kar lenge"

anjali"ya............gud idea"

atul"fir main kya karunga"

sapna"tum............tum...........flowers ka arrangement karna.................vaise bhi flowers ki tumse achi knowledge kie hogi"

atul "ha to fir thik hai"

armaan"aur main basket ko launga.........😊(thinking bout ridz n becuming very happy) aur sare guests ko invite karunga"

n every 1 says ok den armaan asks"vaise basket hai kaha?"

sapna"vo kal rat ko uski nite duty thi na to vo bas ati hi hogi apni shift khatam karke........."

armaan"(feeling bad 4 ridz ) n says"to jab uski shift khatam kab hogi"

n den ridz enters........

anjali"hi ridzi...............kaise ho? baut thaki hui lag rahi ho...........tum ghar jakar aram karo main aj ke liye tumhare cases attend kar lungi"

ridz says .........thnx di par uski koi jarurat nahi hai..........main ghar jakar 1 hour mein vapas ajaungi........

armaan "ha thik hai................ (every 1 luks at him)nahi matlab tab tak tumhare case main aur anji dekh lenge"

ridz "thnx armaan"

armaan smilling at ridz n wen ridz turns 2 laeve he holds her dupatta...........

den every 1 leaves

ridz turns 2 takout d dupatta frm armaaan's shirt which armaan has put janke in hisbutton.........she cums 2 take out d duppata

armaan touches her hand n den ridz luks at him.............dey both start luking at each oder.........armaan holds ridhima's hand .........she den realizes n tries 2 remove her dupatta frm armaan's shirt............her hair cums on her eyes ..........armaan sees dat n tries 2 remove her hairs frm his hands very gently .................she is buzy in removing d dupattan armaan buzy at admiring d beauty of riddima n luking at her in a very romantic way..............n den d dupatta cums out n ridzi leaves..............

n armaan says tum itni khoobsurat kyu ho ridhimma ..................kahin tumhe meri hi nazar na lag jae............... i love u ridhimma............. n den he says nahi ridhimma ko kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage" n leaves

dr. keerti standing behind listens everythng n smiles................ n she decides 2 help armaan armaan n ridhimma 4 patching up their relationship............

its d common room n cricket match is going on n all d docters r dere in d room 2 watch d final moments of d match............ suddenly by mistake d channel gets changed by sum1 n d news channel cum on.............. d news reporter says dat due 2 sum match fixings n everythng of dat soughts d pakistanis n indians are very angry n r fighting wid each oder(d cricket match was between pakistan n india)n den armaan puts back d cricket chaanel n sees d match has also been stopped............. dey put back news channel.............. d reporter is on d roads of mumbai n says dat here is a curfue like situation................ any1 who is cuming on d roads is being killed b d pakistanis............n den it is annonced dat all d interns except 4 dr.armaan hav 2 report 2 dr.keerti bcoz dr.armaan hav already been given his duty..............every 1 leaves..............

armaan is in d common room................ he is still watching d tv news.......... he suddenly remembers dat ridhimma also had left 30 mins be4 only n it takes atleast an hour 4 her 2 reach at her home............he tries 2 call ridhimma but she doesnt pics d phone up..................armaan becums very tensed..............n wen armaan finally decides 2 go n check 4 her..........he suddenly sees sum auto being put on fire n he sees d same dupatta which ridhimma was wearing..........

hope u like my story........ enjoy . please do comment!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..................n o replies!!!!!!!!!!n 10 views............... is d ff so bad?????????????? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow its cool. but i cant wait for the next part šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah it's cool .. but dont let anything happen to ridz ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg šŸ˜‰
so talented ..luved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part peppie.can't wait to read the next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue as soon as u can. don't take really long to write the next part šŸ˜‰

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
cool yaar nice story
continue soon
Rema
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good one pal.. plz do continue... :))
cheers
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice one so do continue yaar.............. šŸ‘
liked the AR scene............... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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arree..rukh kiyun gaye???....continue kar na plzzz šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰

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