IshRa TS || Tujhya Vina || ( updated )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello buddies...

I hope you all remembered me na?
I am back again but this time with a TS. This TS was in my time from very long time but didn't found time to post this. OK before starting I would like to tell you that this plot is inspired from a Marathi song from show Eka Lagnachi Dusri Gost . I immediately fell for this song when I heard this first time.

Don't worry I will give u translation with the progress of plots. Do posting prologue today and eagerly waiting for your feedbacks. Ok before ending my speech,I have a request to all forum members and readers who knew Marathi language. Please friends kindly drop your suggestions here regarding translation and plots as its first time I tried something in my mother tounge

So below is prologue
Read and give your reviews
Next part will be based on your feedbacks😊
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Tujhya Vina
( Without You )

Raman Bhalla, sole owner of chains of bhalla industries was feeling restless today. In coming hours he was going to sign new deal with European markets but was his mind in his sense today?

" Ishita...meri chailaao na yaar. I have a bad headache " [ Ishita...bring my tea fast. I had a bad headache ] he yelled loudly but stopped at another second after realising that she was not with him now. " Sab tumhaari galti hai, jab nahi chahata tha tab toh mere dil main aake apna ghar bana liya, aur jab nahi chahata tha tab chali gayi " [ It was all yours fault. First you entered in my life without permission, And herself left my house when I my heart didn't wanted to live without you ] he threw file away from himself frustratly not knowing what to do now.

" Fekafaaki band karo bhai. it was your decision phir kyon naaraz hote ho? " \[ Stop throwing things here and there bhai. It was your decision ] he turned other side and found his friend cum PA Mihir on door.

" Kya hai tujhe? Kyon mera sar dard badhane ko aaya hai? " [ what is your problem Mihir? Why you came hereto increase my headache more? ] he angrily asked while clearing his desk.

" Admit it bhai that u loved her. U fell for her, she made u mad for herself " he calmly said while keeping his hand on his shoulder.

" Ho gaya tera? Bakwaas band kar aur conference room main chal. Woh European investors tere chachaji nahi hai jo humara wait karenge " [ Did you done? Stop your rubbish and come with me. That European investors are not your uncle who will wait for us " he didn't gave him another chance to speak and angrily left for conference room for his meeting leaving a chuckling mihir behind.

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Tujhya Vina
( Without You )

" Not more appointments for today Sarika " she whispered to her assistant Sarikaa while rubbing her forehead. It was more then shock for her as she never cancelled her appointments with patients in these past 2 years. She obliged her command and went her cabin.

Ishita Iyer, the famous gynologist of Delhi was restless today. She never felt so much emptiness in past 2 years but suddenly things started to change with her. Her days became no more her, was occupied with someone thoughts.

" Raavan Kumar...yeh sab aapki galti hai. Roz chikchik karke mera sar dard karte ho. Irritating insaan. " [ It is all your fault Ravan Kumar. Daily you caused headache to me because of your nonsense ] She muttered to herself but stopped at another second after realising that he was not with her now.

" Is aadmi ne apni aadat bana li hai mere life main. Pehle yeh life main aaya tha isliye gussa aata tha, ab yeh chala gaya hai, toh bechaini rehti hai " [ He became my life now. First I was angry because he came in my life, but why I am restless now? ]

So what was happened with them?
They loved each other but didn't with each other...
waiting for your responses

Edited by Albeli26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey, nice prologue
lvd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story.superb prologue dr.waiting to read more.update sooner.pm me when u update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Please Continue Soon And Me To Your PM List
Thank You
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing! Loved it! I hope I will get PM for this story! Thankuuu in advance!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m reading ur story first time
And its superb
Starting is interesting
Very emotional and lovely also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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vry nyc starting..
seems dey left each other.. is dat so..?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting start
Eager to know more...
Pls add me to your pm list...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can U PM me for this story ????
I liked It

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