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Its was old os written by me i just wanted to share with u guys
Akshara birthday celebration
The scene takes place on akshara birthday's night. At 8pm Naksh, duggu went to bed. Once akshara slept, naitik takes duggu and gives to g3 to take care of him during their absence because he wants to surprise akshara. G3 agreed to take care of duggu.
Naitik goes back to his room and started to decorate the room with flowers and candles.
At 12oclock he goes and sit beside akshara .he caresses her hair and places o mild kiss on her lip that makes her wake up. Once she wakes up he started to sing birthday song and kisses her cheeks.

Naitik: happy birthday akshara
Akshara: thank u naitik. Aapne room ko bahot ache se sajadiya aur duggu kahan hai.
Naitik: hamara beta teek hai aur apko mera surprise kaisa raha
Akshara: apka surprises hamesha acha hi hota hai
Naitik: vo tho hai , aur bi baki hai akshara. Aap chaliye mere sath
Akshara: kahan
Naitik: aap chaliye na .aap sawal bahot puchthe hai
Akshara: teke hai chaliye

Then they reach to naitik designated place

Naitik: aap apna ake bandh kigiye
Akshara: kyun
Naitik : kyun ki mein kehera hoon
Akshara : haan karthi hoon

Naitik and akshara entered that place

Naitik: now u can open ur eyes

After opening her eyes she got surprised and tightly hugs natik

Akshara : thank u naitik. Aapne mere arman puri kaliya. Mein bachpan pan se sapna dekraha tha sea mei mere janam dine

Naitik : mein janthi hoon isliye mein aap keliye ye ship book kiya tha
Akshara kisses on naitik's lip to express her love. They cut a cake together.
A round bed was decorated with rose petals.
Naitik akshara ka godh mein sir rakekar letke romatic chit chat kiya.

After their romantic chit chat naitik gifts a locket to her
Akshara opened that locket and she sees a photo of naksh and duggu and hears sound which came from that locket (naitik says I love u akshara background music was duggu's laughing sound)
Akshara : ilove u too . thank u {wit tears}
Naitik weap akshara's tears with his kisses then they went to their dream land(smp)

ps: sorry for mistakes. this is my first os so encourage me wit ur commentsSmile

it was so simple si beautiful si os

Such a nice os
Ak bday celebrations
Sea mai ak dream
Really nice don't think it's bad
Update more

Very nice&cute os 👏
Loved nk surprise fr ak
Keep writing os 😃

Finally i got one os for reading. ..it was too cute ...dont think that it is not gud..
I dont know ur name 😃 but loved ur writting yr ..
U wrote vry nicly to every scene 👏 loved it from heart..idea was superb ⭐️ ...isse pad ke i went in dream of old naksh... 😃 ..pls continue this os i waana read more parts like this iff possible 😛 ..
So sweet ...do update next part soon 😳

simple nice cute lovely os. ... akshara bdy celebration was nice... naitik's surprise gift was so cute

very nice os
nk cute surprise for ak
nd ak dream got fulfilled
really luvd it nd espesially tht locket idea it was lovely
pls try to update more parts or new os 😊

Thanks u guys .i wrote this in 2012. I am planning to write os (When They were in capetown naira's first day to school)

Originally posted by: Nakshfanlovely

Thanks u guys .i wrote this in 2012. I am planning to write os (When They were in capetown naira's first day to school)

Originally posted by: Nakshfanlovely

Thanks u guys .i wrote this in 2012. I am planning to write os (When They were in capetown naira's first day to school)

eagerly waiting for your new os