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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you SooO much Guys for this amazing response ...am glad you guys Like it...so here u go ...I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛


PART-2 (B)



Malhotra mension -


There is a lot of hustle bustle in malhotra mansion...whole house was decorated with flowers ...lights ...curtains ...and much more ...guests are started arriving ...cabir came to the manik's room and saw him getting ready ...


Cabir teasingly said : aur bhi saale tayar ha sulli pe chadhne ke liye ...


Manik looked at cabir and again started getting ready and frustratingly said


Manik frustratingly said: Cabir please yaar not now ...


Cabir : kyu be aaj kya hua ...lela ke saath jhagda hua kya ...😉


Manik gave him a deadly glare to whiccabir chuckled and said


Cabir : vaise ek baat bata ...tu kya yeh ghurta rehta ha mujhe har vakt ...main koi esa vaisa nahi hu ...dekh meri shaadi ho chuki ha ...haa ...😉


Manik looked at cabir who gave him like scarry look to which Manik gave him a disgusting look and sit in the bed ...


Cabir Pov :


Ese kya ho gaya lagta ha mamla Scrious ha ...varna yeh aur voh bhi aaj ke din itna gussa ...kabhi bhi nahi ...chal beta cabir ho jaa shuru ...


Cabir : aaj yeh romeo ...angry young man kyu bana hua ha ...baat kya ha saale sahab ...😉


Manik didn't said anything and placed his hand on her face ...cabir sit beside him and placed his hand on his shoulder and said


Cabir : kya hua manik sab thik ha naa ...


Manik worriedly said : I don't know mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ha yaar ...she ...she is not talking to me ...not even receiving my calls yaar ...am worried kahi voh yeh...


Cabir : Manik pagal hgaya ha kya ...kya soch raha ha ...jitna maine dekha ha ISHQ karti ha voh bhi tujhse ...dekha ha uski aankho main ...ho sakta ha busy ho ...issiliye phone naa utha rahi ho ...aur vaise bhi yeh ISHQ itni kutti cheez ha ...ek baar lag jaye toh jaane ka naam hi nahi leti😉


Manik hit in his stomach lightly and said : tu nahi sudhrega...


Cabir : Naa ...kabhi bhi nahi ...accha ab ready ho jaa ...Teri lela aati hi hogi ...😉


Before manik could say anything Cabir left from there ...


Manik smirkingly said : SO BE READY MY KISHMISH ...U REALLY LOVE TO MAKE ME WAIT NAA ...NOW NO MORE ...TODAY U R GOING TO CONFESS UR FEELINGS ...


MURTHY MENSION -


Nandani was sitting in front of the dressing table ...she was lost somewhere ...


Nandani Pov :

GOD jii ...sachi main bahot mazza aata ha naa ...mujhe pareshan karne main ...ek taraf manik ha jo subha se call kar raha ha ...par uthau toh kaise uthao uska call ...kehna vahi usne ...kya kahu kaise kahu ...sachi batao duniya ka sabse pehla insaan he jo ladki ko pehli hi meeting pe kiss kare ...propose kare and now I fell in love with that jerk sacchi main ..kamal haina ...and now this jerk want me to confess my feelings that too today ...sacchi main ...main aapko bhi kyu blame karu ..ishq to mujhe hi hua ha ...chal nandani tayar ho jaa ...


She left from there for malhotra mansion ...



MALHOTRA MENSION -



Manik came downstairs and saw murthy's are still not here ...he was getting restless by passing each second ...Druv came towards him


Druv : Arre kyu itna besabra ho raha ha ...aa jayegi...teri lela ...😉


Cabir winked at druv and druv winked back


Cabir : aa nahi jaayegi aa gayi voh dekh ...😉


Manik instantly turned and saw no one is there ...then looked at cabir and druv angrily ...who was laughing like hell...


Cabir teasingly said: God manik tera chehra ...hehe ...sachi yaar mujhe nahi pata tha ki tu itna badal jaayega ...


Druv teasingly said : aur nahi toh kya cabir baat nahi hui toh yeh haal ha ...soch agar nahi aayi toh ...


Manik angrily said: toh utha kar le aaunga ...ab khush ...tum log naa kissi kaam ke nahi ho ...sach main yaha meri jaan nikal rahi ha aur tum logo ko ...sirf tease karna ha ...kyu galat keh raha hu ...


Cabir : Manik relax yaar ...just chill ...maine abhi baat ki ha ...aa rahe ha voh ...


Manik : hmm ...


Manik eyes were on the entrance he couldn't wait ...to meet her ...see her ...it's being 24 hours ...since he didn't see her ...but for him it's like 24 yrs. ...he is restless by passing each second ...


Manik Pov :

Kaha ho kismish aur kitna wait karaogi ...subha se baat bhi nahi ki ...aur tum jaanti ho naa ...I can't able to alive without u ...and here u r touchering me ...by making me wait but I promise you have to pay hard ...hard to make me wait 😉


He was smirking by thinking what is going to be come then he saw his kismish coming towards him ...she is looking breathtaking beautiful in pink color lehnga which is simple yet classy ...her waist is completely visible which is added nothing much but fuel ...he just wanted to kiss her till she was breathless ...her blouse was backless which was exposing her bareback ...her hairs were tied in a messy bun ...he was completely lost in her beauty ...she is pretty at the same time hot too ...nandani knew manik was looking at her ...she just blushed but didn't looked at him ...manik came towards her and stand in front of her ...nandani looked at him ...he came more closer to her and freed her hairs ...and covered her back and placed his hand around her Waist ...nandani was looking at him confusingly but then she looked around and saw every guy was ogling over her ...she smile at his possessive nature ...both came on the stage and exchanged there rings...everyone was utting ...cheering and clapping for them ...manik was holding nandani's hand ...nandani was trying hard to get free but every time his grip became more tight


Nandani : Manik leave my hand please


Manik : Nope ...


Nandani : Manik please chodo naa dekho sab dekh rahe ha...


Manik : why u didn't receive my calls ...


Nandani stammeringly said : voh ...main...m


Manik : bolo ...aacha chalo ...now ur punishment time ...😉


Nandani shockingly said : what punishment ...


Manik : u have to confess ur feelings in front of everyone that too now ...

Nandani couldn't believe in his ears and said


Nandani : u can't be serious ...


Manik : am hell scirious my kishmish 😉

Nandani makes a babish face:Manik please am sholly ...


Manik looked at her babish face ...


Manik Pov :

Sachi bagwan ji she really knows how to deal with me but not this time ..this time she needs to tell ...after all now we are going to married ...


Manik : don't do that kishmish bcz this time these faces wouldn't work ...so u have to do it ...


Nandani angrily said : jerk


Manik kissed her cheek without noticing anyone .nandani makes a oO shape face and looked at him who was smirking looking at her reaction and lovingly said


Manik lovingly : ONLY UR JERK KISHMISH ...


nandani looked at him both shares a cute eye lock which is broke by cabir


Cabir : hello nandani...


Manik mumbled : aa gaya kebab main haddi ...I wonder meri behen ko sirf ek yahi jerk mila tha saari duniya main ...


Cabir : kuch kaha tunee ...

Manik sarcastically said : Nahi ...nahi hamari itni himmat kaha ...


Cabir : haa voh toh ha ...aakhir saala ha tu mera


Manik makes a bad face:badkismatti se ...


Cabir : kuch kaha ...chal chod ...vaise nandani u look hot yaar😉


Manik pov

What the ...how can he ...


Nandani smiled bcz she knew why he said all this to make manik jealous ...she too wink him and said


Nandani : Thank you cabir ..btw u r not less ...


Cabir : voh toh pata ha ...par ab tum keh rahi ho confirm ho gaya ...


Nandani :. .hehe ...tum mujhe pehle milte toh main tumse hi shaadi kar leti ...


Cabir : haaye ...vaise bura hua haina ...


Nandani makes bad face and nodded and manik who was burning in jealousy ...hold her hand and pulled her towards him and said


Manik angrily said : what the hell are u guys saying haa ...u r mine ...did u get that ...


Nandani instantly nodded and looked at cabir and started laughing like hell...manik too realized why she is saying everything ...so he too smiled ...looking at her smiling face ...


Cabir smirkingly said : vaise ek baat batao ...yeh saara din ishq ...ishq karta rehta ha ...aakhir yeh ISHQ ha kya ...


Manik smirks by listening this and said : haa ...haa bolo naa kishmish ...


She gave manik a deadly glare to which he smirks ...

Nandani : Cabir ...ishq ki baate aapka saala karta ha toh iss baare main bhi vahi bataye gaa 😉


Manik:Arre ese kaise ...jisse ishq hua ha vahi batayega ...kyu cabir


Cabir : haa Nandani that was right ...ab batana toh padega ...vaise kyu naa tum dono hi batao ...aakhir ishq toh tum dono ko hi hua ha ...😉


Manik looked at nandani who was already giving him angry glare to which he gave his ever sweet smile and holds her hand ...he tuned his guitar and asked her to sing ...she closed her eyes and remember there first kiss and smile or blush crept on her lips ...manik smiled bcz he knew what she must be remembering there first kiss...he too blushed a little ...


Besharmiyan...barbadiyaan...

Hai ISHQ ki shaitaaniyan...

Yeh fitoor jo...sar pe sawar ho...

Jeena bhi phir Dushwaar ho ...

(Manik looked at her ...to which she just blushed and continue ...)

Iss rog ko kuch sujhe na ...

Koi farq ise bujhe na ...

Yeh hararatein ..utare nahi...


Hai sarphiri ye ASHIQUI ...

Maddmast bhi yeh ASHIQUI ...


Jo ye sang chale ..sang challe...

Jo ye rang chadhe ...Rang Chadee

Kya fikar koi kya kahe ...


(Both sing together ...a smile to be with each other ...there hands were intervened ...everyone smiled looking at them)



Kiski majaal koi rok le...

Kiski majaal koi tok le...

ISHQ K JUNOON RUKE NAHI ...


HAI BAANWRI... ye ...ASHIQUI

GUSTAAKH ...si ye ...ASHIQUI

BEKHAUFF ...si ye... ASHIQUI



YE ISHQ NAHI ASAAN

BAS ITNA SAMJH LIJIYE

EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI

AUR DOOB KE JAANA HA ...


Manik ended the song and nandani hugged him tightly ...everyone smiled and utting for such a beautiful and unique couple ...nandani came close to his ears and lovingly said


Nandani : ISHQ Ho Gaya Ha TUJSE ...ISHQ...


After listening this Manik hugged her more tightly ...and twril her around and said

Manik: Thank u ...Thank u ...sooO much kismish ...



Ho gaya ...kaisa laga ...batao please...am waiting for ur comments and likes ...jaldi jaldi comment karo fir last part bahot dhamakedar hoga ...hehe ...

I want long ...long comment...

Love you all guys

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya😛

Sunshine2604 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update.
Can't wait to read the next part.
I'm in love with their love story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome
Loved the updte
Confession was super cool
And waiting for the dhamakedar part
Hehe
Plzs update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. what a amazing. part.. I totally loved it. . its beautiful. . way explained. their Love story. is just amazing. . I m in love with this love story. it is so mind blowing. . fantastic. . amazing. . awesome. .. fabulous. .. soo love to the core... u know u r such a expressive writer. hatts off yr... its so amazing. . keep updating waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. . update soon thanksss for this beautiful update... n their amazing love story.. Stay blessed Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Too good too romantic too lovely too cute...
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Posted: 9 years ago
ishq ishq ishq
nandini ko bhi ho gyaaa

manik ko to hua hi hua h

lolzzz

cabir ni sudhrne waalaaa

lolzzz

love him

n manan too

continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww how cute...
Manik cabir se bi jealous hai...
I can't believe this...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow ishq ho gaya mjse ishq if story se
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Posted: 9 years ago
SHOO CUTE!!!! THE CONFESSION IS DONE... AM SO EXCITED... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... AND THANKS FOR PM ALSO IN ADVANCE... LOVE YOU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oohhhooo tht was amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update really just loved it alot bt u did nt pm bt it's ok np it's was very sweet n cute update tht nokh jokh aawww tysm plzzz update the next part soon plzzz it's a request plzzz tysm once again

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