TaaRey 3S|| A Fortunate Stroke of Serendipity

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TR_lovebirds

@TR_lovebirds

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Superb update...
Their confession was beautiful...
The reason behind their break up showed how much they love each other...
And abt cheating thing...u r right they are TaaRey...how can they do that...they can do anything for each other but not this..
Beautifully written...
Keep writing...

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skfirdous

@skfirdous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

wow amezing

loved TR confession at the end

thanx for pm

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Wow...awesome chapter!
Beautifully penned down :) (as usual 😆 )
TaaRey having to sleep on the same bed ;)
Glad that you did not make Rey cheat on Taani :D
Loved their confession <3...it was so sweet and simple :)
Perfect ending! <3

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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

This story was enchanting !!!!!!

Really now, you can't call it chesy, its really good !

I like the college Taarey , they are cute

You are good at writing.

I like the part that you end each update with a song, it makes the update unique .

And what may I say, keep writing, your stories are a pleasure to read !

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CrazyForAmar

@CrazyForAmar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Awesome update

Loved it

It was BEAUTIFUL..

Very well written

Their love was so true...so pure

I am glad you didn't made rey cheat on Taani

Thanks for that

This concept is far more better than that

Just beautiful

Keep writing

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Beautiful confession😳...i loved the ending...😊
Write more😃

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Diya

@DazzlingDiya

Dazzler

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Okay, I'll admit, at first I was all like "Ugh, not another cliche!"

But YAY, it was not a cliche!

Taani's POV is really fun to read, and what the hell? Rey just sits beside his ex-girlfriend from way back in high school on the plane? Like, dude, awkward...

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Diya

@DazzlingDiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Okay, can I just say that Rey's nervousness is the most adorable thing ever?! It was really funny!

And damn, what did Taani do? Like, just suddenly break up with him, or...

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Diya

@DazzlingDiya

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Okay, this actually makes sense.

At first, I thought Rey cheated on Taani, or Rey broke with her.

But then you were all just like "Taani broke his heart" so the cheating theory kind of flew out the window because... Well, it's Taani! She doesn't cheat...

Moving on, the ending was perfect. It was a happy ending, but I'm still kind of upset... I would've liked to have met Priya! She seemed really cool.