new swasan,ragya ss forgiveness part 2 updated.

hello people im not a writer but have tried to write this ff if you like it.i will continue to write.in this ss all characters are same.laksh had kidnapped ragini.now swara is finding kidnapper.sanskar helping her.and laksh is not putting blame on sanskar swara and uttara.
ss- forgiveness
part 1

( laksh takes all family members to the same mandir where swara take to ragini saying he have to talk to them all.)
dp: laksh why have you brought us here.and what do you want to tell.
laksh: i want to tell you all that i had kidnapped ragini and wanted to kill her.
ragini: lakshji your joking right.you cant do that.
swara: laksh.
laksh.yes i had done it because i wanted revenge from ragini far all the thinks she has done bad but.i could not kill ragini as im not that bad like ragini.i know swara you dont love me anymore and you dont want to be with me its ok.im happy for you and sanskar now.but i cant forgive ragini.and i know she will not give me devorce so easily.so i have decided to end my life.as it will be my punishment for all my mistakes.(saying he jumps from the same bridge.all family in shock.ap faints.and all are crying for laksh.ragini become statue in shock.swara hugs sanskar and crying.sanskar emotional.)
in some days later
ap: it all happens because swara and ragini they will not livd here.
dp: (to dadi) aap please ragini ko yahase le jayiye.and sanskar it will be good if you and swara shift to outhous for some days.
sanskar ok bade papa.
( swasan shifts to outhouse.sujata angry starts her bangalan jaap but sanskar dont listen to her.)
here ragini in badi.
dadi: lado forget about this incident and start fresh life.
ragini: no dadi.laksh died because of me.now i will have to pay for it.i will ask forgiveness from god for all my sins by praying in mandir all my life.( saying she goes to mandir)

precap for part 2: laksh alive but where.and swasan starts new life and some swasan romantic moments.

no one likes it.so wanted ragini to repent and laksh to not murderer.and swasan alone somewhere so write it.will not continue if you people dont like.and sorry for any mistake or if its already written dont know if there do let me know.thanks.

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Brilliant Yaar.. [:D/] i loved it

Ragini bani sanyasini..matlab RagLak ki prem kahaani..

SwaSan to start a new.life 🤗

Plz jaldi update yaar.. 🥳

hey people.thank you for liking this story.i never thought anyone will like it.as its my first story.thank you for all likes and comment is writing part 2 for only you.


part 2

( somewhere in Kolkata in a small garage)
raj(laksh) : hey chotu why have you come.
chotu : bhaiyya ma have send your dinner.
raj : ok tell her i will eat and come home late have to repair.
chotu : ok bhaiyya.
( in formhouse swasan)
sanskar : swara dont worry everything will be ok.
swara : but im worried for ragini.will she ever move on.
sanskar: we will help her in that.but first you chear up.lets
start new fresh life together. lets go for dinner together.
( swara and sanskar in car)
swara plays radio and the song plays tum hi ho
sanskar looks at swara and swasan forget everthing.
swara : sanskar look ahead or the accident will happen.
sanskar : oh.sorry.( smile sheepishly).
song stops.swasan in hotel have dinner and was returning
home when car breakdown in middle of road.
sanskar: the car have some problem.will have to call
machanic suddenly he saw a workshop and goes there
with swara.
sanskar : anyone there we need a mechanic our car have
breakdown.
swara : hello anyone there.
raj ( laksh ): hello.im the raj the mechanic let me check
your car.
sanskar : (shocked) laksh.
swara : ( shacked) laksh.
raj (laksh) : oh hello my name is raj not laksh ok.do you
need help or not( confused).
precap : is he laksh or not.did he loss memory or is acting.
what will swasan do.ragya meeting.
again thanks only write this for you people.

I hope he is Laksh n is acting. ..
Waiting badly for RagLak meeting.. plz update jaldi..

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