#3//The Ex's At War//Ch12 pg 137 Link for THREAD 4 on pg 150 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Congrats for new thread👏.keep up the good work. U deserve it😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
congo for new thread dear... u deserve it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
congo dear congo...
n many more 2 come... keep updating... 👍🏼
luv dis stry vry vry much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
My Haftewaali writer on week days...😉😆😛
Well this was wonderful surprise😃
Congratulations n celebrations... 🥳
3rd thread...wohooo
i said this b4 also...
this will b also superhit like impulsive ...
in fact more than it...
n look...its true...
u complted last thread just in 4 chappy...
impulsive me bhi aisa kabhi nahi hua😉😛

read last chappy just now...
i thot u wont update ex this weekend...
bt u did n i am superhappy 😃

Sooo faadu update...
loved it like hell...
as usual my cuttipie manini rocked once again ❤️
hyeee...
her sit ups idea 🤣
i cudnt stop laughing reading it...
manik ko nandu toh apni ungliyo pe nachati hai hi bt ab manini ko bhi sikha diya hai 🤣
@ d age of 4 she made manik to do sit ups in public 🤣

poor nandu..
pehle hi itni hurt thi...
thoda lonely time jab bhi chahti hai ...
tab manane ke bahane ye father-daughter duo ek chance nahi chodte nandu ko embrass karwane ka...office scene kissy on daddy's ooouuu n now this 😛 😆


manikkk...
being an impulsive guy...
he chose wrong way to do right thing again..
he has been like this only...
he act first n then think abt consequences...
kab sudhrega yeh ladka????😡


manan relationship has been always in roller coaster mode..
through all d peaks n valleys d only thing remained unchanged is Their love for each other n now for manini too...
abhi bhi ye hi pyaar and manini unko phir se ek saath layega...

i m loving d way u r unfolding d reason for their separation...

i think d major reason is they lost their second baby...
after manini...
manik considers his mom responsible for all d mess in their lives n nandu still talking to her irked him d most...
lets see what u hv in store coz u r just best at it...
loads of love🤗
Maithili

PS...liked cabir's punch n sarcasmic raita too😆
Edited by manandeeplove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Now that was something over my expectations!!
Trust me sumana di no one writes these things better than you!! How do u always manage to leave me all in aww!!
I read this chappy around 3 times!!
But still can't get enough of it!!

This was truly amazing!!
Manans reactions!! Gosh*_*!!

Manik is sucha overactor!!
Sahi kiya cabir ne punch mar kar!!
Ek do aur kheench ke lagane chahiye they!!

Par jab usne reason bola toh dil pigal gaya boss!!
He is such over protective!!
Still cares about nandu likes no one!!

Nandini!!
Bechari bikhar jaari!!
She's such a innocent soul!

I guess manik should have been with nandu!!
Lekin phir story mein mazaa nai aaata!!

Wat comes as a shocker is
THE BABY!!
Have manan lost their child!!
Kab?? Kyun?? Kaise??

And why did manik leace nandu in that condition??
I thought ki there divorced bcoz of maniks parents!!
Ab beech main yeh kaunsa naya drama hai??

Manik taking red roses to nandu was wayy too cutee!!
Par nandu bhi kuch kam nahi!!
Ghar par nahi thi!!

The marine drive scene!!
It was the cutest!!
Though it was thoda sad sad in the beginning!!
But eventually it was superb!!

The way manik and manini apologised to nandu!!
Awww it couldn't have been cuter!!
And even those random people played an imp role!!

The way manan was on each other!!
But the concequences were not nicee!!
Nandini was quite rude abd sarcastic!!
But then manik deserved it!!

The office scene make my go aww!!
Manik came to get her job back!!

But he gets a shock!!
Steve with nandu!!
That too snaking around her waist!!

Why do i think that steve will act a villain
Who will tear manan apart??
And eventually they will be back even stronger!!

Yayyyieee!!

P.S- Congratulations for the new thread u truly desrve it!!

Continue soon!!
Will be waiting!!

Lots of love
Zara😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
"My fliends in
sthool shay when boys have to say
sholly to gals they give loshes"

Itni si bacchi school me ye sab sikhne ke liye jate hai? Nandu school change karao manu ka. Varna ye aur kuch dino me dadi amma ban jaye gi.

Both father and daughter started doing sit up's holding their ears.

Oo Madam ab maaf bhi kardo apne
pati ko..ab bachhe ki jaan loge kya??"a random man shouted looking at us.

Manik being the jerk posed and smiled for the pictures too as I frowned and struggled to get out
of his grip.

🤣..soo funny..🤣 imagine kar ne pe v has ke hi jaan nikal jayega.🤣

Steve's hand that was placed
around my waist quite comfortably.
😡 jerk..huh..manik ne jo kia wo thik to nehi tha..par ye Steve..i m gonna kill him..

And ek past revealation update lao na jaldi se..please..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Congratulations ye wali ff ka b thread 3...
Great going...no. of readers are increasing daily...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Congratulationsss!!!
Ok i will admit initally even I didn't like it n could not connect it with impulsive soulmates... But eventually i fell in love with it..
Pata nahi kya jaadu hai tumhari writing mein.. I jst love it n yeh dil maange more 😉
Bas ek hi shikayat hai tht we get weekly updates but woh bhi maaf bcoz the wait is worth it..
Lastly, thank u for these wonderful stories.. Kp writing more n more. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
congo 4r d new thread!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Congratulations api ! U deserve every bit of it !
I gave u a lamba cmnt on the previous thread ...XD
All the love for u !

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