SWASAN FF: Piya Ke Rang Mein Rangi upd pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting character sketch. . waiting for the story.. pls pm me
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awesome CS
would love to read more
update it asap
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Liked the CS
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Prologue:

It was 6.30 am, when a girl woke up from her sound beauty sleep, and the first thing she did was to switch on her music system.

A soft melody was playing in the background, when she freshened up and got dressed in simple blue jeans and white sleeveless top. She brushed her hair and let them loose. She then applied some kohl on her eyes, and lip gloss to make her lips perfect. She smiles at herself seeing in the mirror and says

Girl: perfect just like I always want to be.. just me.. just swara...

It was 8.00am when she leaves her room, with her handbag in her left hand which is adorned with a roles watch, and few notebooks in her left hand.

She comes to dining hall, and greets to the two most important ladies of her life: her maa, and her dida. She goes and hugs her dida from the back.

Swara: good morning dida...

Dida: good morning shoru.. Aaj kya khayega tum breakfast mein...??

Swara: dida... aap ne job hi banaya hai.. main kha lungi... waise maa kahan hai??

Just then she hears a voice from behind.

Voice: main yahan hoon!!

Swara and dida turns towards the voice, its none other than sharmishta..

Swara goes and hugs her.

Swara: good morning maa, aaj aap late ho gaye???

Sharmishta: good morning shone, and then she touches her mother's feet: good morning maa...

Dida: chalo baitho, maine breakfast ban alia hai... jaldi breakfast karo, nahi toh hum jane mei late ho jayega...

All three sits for breakfast.

Swara: maa, aaj mujhe aakrity ke bade papa ke birthday mei jana hai.. so main late aaungi!! Aap dono mera dinner ke liye wait mat karna

Sharmishta: okk shone... but take care okay?? And kuch bhi ho toh mujhe call kar dena. Main aa jaungi...

Dida: arey shumi.. hamari shoru ab badi ho gayi hai.. usko koi takleef nahi hoga.. aur fir aakrity toh hai na uske saath...

Sharmishta: haan maa, lekin aise shone peheli baar unke ghar jaa rahi hai, toh thoda darr lag raha hai!

Swara: arey maa, aap chinta mat karo.. main time se aa jaungi.. and agar kuchproblem hua toh main aapko call kar lungi.. ab aap jao, nahi toh aapka wo partner, punctuality ka lecture dega aapko...

Sharmishta: shone, aise nahi bolte, wo punctual hai, disciplined hai, isiliye aaj itni young age mei itna successful bhi hai.. I mean he is hardly 25, and ye mat bhulo shone ki usne company mei 50% paise lagaye hai...

Swara: haan maa, wo sab tpoh theek hai, but mujhe ye samajhnahi aaya ki wo aapke sath kaam kyu kar raha hai??

Sharmishta: achcha theek hai, main raat ko bataungi... chalo abhi bye...

Saying this sharmishta leaves in her car, dida asks swara to come with her, as she will drop her to her college on her way.

Stay tuned, for more!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start...
Continue soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice 👏
Continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice start..
waiting to read fun part too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb yaar...
Do update soon...
Pm me while updating...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start and pls pm me whenever u r updating
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its a nice start,,,plz continue..

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