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Chapter 5



Aziz was in front of asad house talking to his mom, while doing so he waited for someone to answer. When the door opened he was greeted by asad mom, " yes can I help you" she said confuse, Aziz got off the phone and looks at her than he figure out that it must be asad mother. "Namaste"

"Namaste" she said back before asking who he was, "I'm asad friend, we-"he never got too finished when as ad came running outside chitchatting to one of the servants. When he saw Aziz he walk away from the maid and walk to him, holding the door to let him in. "Aziz you made it" he said

"Yeah, I was lost at first" he said making asad laugh, "I know, this area is very hard to find" he said before turning to his mom "ah yes, Aziz I would like you to meet my awesome mam" he said hugging her, making her touch his face, "nice to meet you" he said

After the introduction, asad showed Aziz around the house, than he took him to his room. "So where is the rest of your family?"

"Hmm, my dad not around he's always busy, but my sister she's here in her room. You will probably see her later on for dinner"

"Where are you staying anyway?"

"At one of my cousin hotels, but it won't be long before I go back home", hearing this asad frown "why are you staying there, you should stay with us. We have a lot of space and room here for you, and you get to eat the best Indian food here", Aziz thought about it before declining, "well if you change your mind you can always call me" asad said

They spend some hours catching up on things before sanam 2 calls them for dinner, while they were about to go downstairs Aziz had the urge to go pee, "where is the bathroom" he said

"Over there"

"thanks", Aziz walks towards the bathroom when he reached he saw the light on, sighing he knocks on the door, Meanwhile, Dina was talking in the bathroom while drying her hair. "Ranveer is to macho for my taste, I will dump him soon"

"What why?"

"He's obsess, everything I do he wants to know. If I go somewhere he always finds me, I'm tiered now"

"So who will be your next target" her friend said

"I don't know, maybe someone handsome and funny"

"Like Hamad" she teased

"NO way!" she said making her friend laugh

"I don't think any guy will suit you Dina, unless it's someone that pays no attention to you"

"Like that will happen, are you forgetting I'm the beautiful Dina, Indian best model. Everyone wants me, and wants to be me" she said before going on "If I meet a man that doesn't want me than I will make him fall for me"

"How will you do that?"

"Simple, by seduc-"she never finished her sentence, when she heard a knock on the door, "GO AWAY ASAD!" she screamed before talking to her friend "like I was saying I will seduc-", once again she was cut off by the loud knocking. Irritated she told her friend to hold on, than she stomps towards the door angry before opening it " I said go awa-", she stopped what she was about to say, and ignored her friend on the phone. She lick her lips to make it moist and stares at Aziz from top to bottom. "Who are you" she said, when Aziz didn't reply back she frown. She told her friend she will call her back and hang up.

Aziz knew the look she was giving him, it wasn't knew to him. He figure she must be asad sister, he thought she would be more like her mom, but he was wrong. He opened his mouth to say something, this made her smirk thinking he was about to flirt with her, but she was wrong. "Are you done using the bathroom, I have to use it" he said

Dina, disappointed frowns before moving out the way and walk to her room. Before she left she stopped to watch him for a few second before saying "he is definitely my type. I wonder what he's doing here" she said before walking away.

When the sun went down, Aziz left asad house. He said his good byes and went to the hotel.

The next day, sonal made breakfast. Shad was already downstairs drinking his coffee, everyone was there except mahira "papa, where is mahira?" she asks

Shad points upstairs, "She's been up there since I woke up, Making noise" he said, sonal worried walks upstairs to her sister room, she was going to knock when she realize the door was open. Walking in she was surprise to see her room a mess, clothes were everywhere, shoes were being thrown and her books were scattered. "Why are you messing your room, mahira"

"I can't find mam necklace, and I have an audition today"

"Oh yes, the dance competition" she said

"Yes Didi, when I'm nervous I always hold the necklace. It's the only thing I have left of mam"

Sonal smiles warmly at her "I'm sure it's here somewhere" she said coming in and helping her. They spent a while searching, but they couldn't find it. Giving up, she left her room to check on the suit she was cleaning. When she didn't see it, she called her sister. "Didi help" she said panicking

"What is it?"

"Have you seen a white suit" she asks

"A white suit? Hmm...no I haven't. Whose is it" she said

"It's some guy's suit"

"Why exactly do you have a random guy's suit" she said with one eyebrows open

"I spilled food on it, but it was by accident. If that giant wasn't in the way, your food wouldn't have been ruined" she declared, getting angry

"Mahira what did I say about calling people names"

"Well it's true, all he needs now is to sprout leaves and he will be a white tree"

"MAHIRA!" she said before shaking her head "come on let's look for it" she said before searching the house. When sonal finds it, she quickly grabs it from Devaki before he ruins the suit any further. Mahira came and walk to her sister. Sonal hands the suit to her and told her what happened to it "no" she said

"Oh Allah, what am I going to do.. Mr grumpy will definitely have a fit" she said worried.

To be continued...

Preview

Scene 1

When Dina and her friends saw mahira, they went to the judges and told them about mahira.

"I'm sorry mahira, there's no way you can partake in the audition"

"Why is that" she said upset

"Because of your disability, you obviously need your dog to move about. We can't let you jeopardize other people performance"

"This is not fair" she said

Scene 2

Mahira meets with Aziz "where is my suit" he said, she slowly took it out the bag and showed it to him. "What happened to it" he said

"Devaki was playing with it"

"You let your dog ruin my suit"

"I wouldn't say he ruined it, it's still looks good" she said feeling the texture

"Are you blind" he said

Scene 3

Mahira seeing her necklace hanging on the outside mirror tries to reach for it, Aziz tries to stop her, but she was determined. He stopped the break making his tiered flatten, than he looks at mahira to yell at her when he saw her clutching on him, scared.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I realize that i sometimes, loose interest in my stories. I dont know if its the lack of comments or not, but when i wrote ek mutthi aasman stories, people were very live. but lately everyone is not, and because of that i get lazy to write something lol, i'm sorry for that everyone.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story line. like it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 6

When mahira reached the school, as'ad saw her "hey desi girl" he said but mahira ignored him and continued walking. As'ad ran towards her and stood right in front of her, blocking her from moving. "What do you want", he smiles before trying to pet her dog, who growls at him "where are you going" he asks

"None of your business"

"Oh come on, you don't have to be like this" he said

Mahira knitted her eyebrows together in annoyance "I see what this is, you're interested in me because you feel sorry for me" she said before going on "I don't need it from you, so if that is all I will leave" she said surprising asad, he watch as she walk away from him before he turn around to see his friends laughing at him.

"The day has finally come when asad gets rejected by a girl" his friend said putting his hand on his shoulder

"Yeah, and its someone that's not even your type"

Annoyed with his friends, asad ignores them and walk away, but while leaving he couldn't stop thinking about mahira. This is not love, he thought, I just met the girl. Maybe she's right I do feel sorry for her, he thought.

Elsewhere, shad got a report about missing supplies. He walk to the storage rooms and found some of the transmitter and secret weapons gone. "What's going on here" he said while searching around the room. The officers were hesitate "seems like the thief only steals dangerous stuff. This been going on for two days sir, but we still don't have a clue if its shash Kapoor."

Shad thought about it, he knew something was of, missing bombs, missing knives, and missing communicators. All of these sound like a suicide mission, he thought. He walk away from the storage room and locked the room, than he entered his office, turning around he look at his big screen and search for any footage of the thief, but he couldn't find one. "This doesn't make sense, if this is really shash doing, than she's really up to something, something dangerous." He said

"So what should we do sir?"

Shad sigh "I want you to watch shash, report to me everything she does and the location of the places she goes. We have to make sure no one else gets killed" he said before thinking about his daughters.

Meanwhile, sanam 2 remembered sanam falling off the cliff, she sip her tea while watching ahil picture "you see what you have done, if you only loved me your fate wouldn't have end up like this" she said before smirking "at the end of the day who is the one victorious, I AM!, who is the one living in luxury...I AM!, and who is the one alive...ME!" "All of this could have been yours if you only listen to me and love me, now where is your precious sanam you try to protect ahil, she's rotting in hell along with you"

She puts her tea down and gets up, while leaving she saw latifa cowering by the door, " is there a problem" she said, latifa shook her head before making an excuse to leave. Signing sanam 2 wondered why she still kept her around.

Elsewhere, while mahira was waiting in line, she decides to practice a little. While dancing, some of the girls stop what they were doing and started cheering for her. When Dina heard this she was upset, "she's pretty good"

"Yeah she could probably out shine you Dina" her friend said

Dina stares at mahira with hate, that jealousy and envy she felt from before arises. "I won't let her steal my spot light" she said

"What are you going to do", one of her friend said, Dina smirk before turning around, making her friends follow. They walk outside of the building and they spotted mahira dog. When they reached to her dog, Dina and her friends tried to release her, making her growl. "Calm down you beast" she said, before losing the rope. When Devaki was loose, she never once stopped growling at Dina and her friends. Soon she walk closer to them in anger, when Dina and her friends saw this, they were scared. Quickly they ran away from the dog, back to the building with the dog following behind them.

"HELP! HELP!" they screamed, grabbing everyone's attention, the judges worried asked them what is the matter, they started speaking all at once "there's a vicious dog outside"

"Yeah she wants to hurt us, help us teacher"

When everyone heard this, they turn to the door to see the dog entering. Growling at Dina and her friends, mahira surprise to hear Devaki walk over to her "Devaki, what's wrong" she said bending down, calming her. Everyone scared back away from mahira, the judges seeing this walk up to her " is this your dog?" one of them said

"Yes it is"

The judges spoke among each other before one of them spoke "I'm sorry young lady there's no way you can partake in this audition", when the judge said this Dina friends high five one another.

"Wait...why not?" she askes

"Your dog is not only scaring the contestant, but you obviously need your dog to guide you around. If you stay, you will only make everyone nervous in fear of your dog reacting like he did earlier" , mahira frowning tries to object, but the judges wouldn't hear it. " I think its best if you just leave", her teacher said , sad mahira grab her dogs collar and walk out. She wasn't angry, but was a little upset that she couldn't audition.

While outside she scolds Devaki for causing trouble, making her sulk, but she soon calm down and pat her in the head, while she was doing this asad saw her from the entrance, but he ignores her and walk with his friends. Mahira on the other hand dejected got a call from an unknown number confuse she said answered the phone, only to hear a very angry man on the phone. "Where are you" he said

"Who are you" she asked, making the man fume

"Meet me where we met yesterday, and you better have my suit" he said, mahira was about to say something when he hang up on her. Irritated she started rambling about him "jeesh can he be any ruder" "all that anger of his will turn him to a troll with red face" she said before leaving the campus.

To be continued...

Scene 1

Mahira meets with Aziz "where is my suit" he said, she slowly took it out the bag and showed it to him. "What happened to it" he said

"Devaki was playing with it"

"You let your dog ruin my suit"

"I wouldn't say he ruined it, it's still looks good" she said feeling the texture

"Are you blind" he said

Scene 2

Asad, seeing mahira dance asked her why she doesn't try out for the dance competition. Mahira replies, she was disqualified because of her dog. Later on asad heard Dina friends admitting to releasing Devaki leading to mahira not auditioning.

Scene 3

Sonal took her sister to the mosque to tie the red thread (sorry I don't know the name of it), unaware of Aziz leaving the area to go inside. When the priest saw him, he smiles and asks for donation. After that mahira and sonal walk to the priest and donate money. The priest stares hard at mahira, and hold her hand, saying you won't be in the dark for long, you and your sister will stop this never ending cycle and put the restless to rest. Confuse both sister look at one another

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I dont really know whose following the story, so it will be a little hard to email people that i
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Fab story ..
i kinda like asad and mahira ...
dont know if u plan to pair her with aziz :??!!!
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Originally posted by: naj7

Fab story ..

i kinda like asad and mahira ...
dont know if u plan to pair her with aziz :??!!!



lol i kinda made some of the characters a little similar to the first quabool hai persona, but i'm still deciding whether or not to go that route, but for right now, i'm making them all interact leading to the revenge plot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Amazing update
I love this story
Continue soon 😃
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coming soon

while the car wouldn't stop moving, the driver realize they were almost about to fall of the clif, he quickly unbuckled and jump out the car. while mahira called for help, aziz seeing this got out of the car and tried to save her, but it was to late. angry and hurt, he remembered when he saved her and brought her to asad house. after asad told him about his feeling for mahira, he decides to let her go for asad sake. while leaving he didnt hear mahira calling his name.

devastated and angry with himself, he walk towards the man who was trying to get up. when he reached to him, he started beaten him, takin his anger out. this was how sonal and asad meet him. asad seeing this quickly got out the car to stop him, when he wouldn't stop, asad punch him in the face asking him what happend.

at first he was silent, but than he admit to mahira dying, devastating both parties. sonal had it the hardest because that was her sister. she felt like she betrayed her by sleeping with asad and now having his kid. she thought this was allahs way of punishing her and she cried even harder. asad seeing her crying goes to her and comfort her, he was guiltier than ever. betraying mahira and ruining both sisters.

Aziz looks away, trying to hold his tears at bay, he got up and walk over to the guy to call the ambulance, when he realize something. "no" aziz says grabbing their attention " whats wrong?"

"the guy is dead" he says, shocking both parties
"what, how is that possible. i check his pulse he was alive and unconscious. he look like he would have survive his injures"

" are you sure sonal" he said making her nod

" than what in the name of allah is going on" he said

while this was going on, they were unaware of sanam 2 watching them. she smirks before turning away from them. " see my daughter, thats how its done." she says turning to dina

"now aziz will be only mine' she says

" i should have done this long ago with ahil, but than again i did" she says laughing, they both turn to the scene watching asad panicking. they were surprise that asad was there, but as long as he wasn't hurt, they were relieve.



Two weeks past and everyone was mourning over the loss of mahira, shad especially was upset. he knew who was behind this, he thought felt like he broke sanam promise. seher on the other hand told them this was what they get, for waiting so long. her and shad argued until sonal told them to be quiet.

while this was happening, a young women was lying on the ground. the suns ray shinning upon her, warming her body. soon she starts moving her fingers and than her whole body. turning, she looks at the sky blinking. " its so beautiful" she says but stops and close her eyes, only to open it again. " whats this, i see the sky" she says

quickly she got up screaming in pain, before steadying herself. she looks around and realize she can see, overjoy she cries " oh Allah i can see. i cant believe it" she says

she spend the remaining day thanking god, and cleaning her wounds. than she stop, because she heard the siren to pray. " a mosque most be near. they can help me" she says before walking the direction she heard it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I stopped writing this story because not a lot of people like it. Now I understand why some shows get canceled lllol

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