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makunoor

@makunoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys we want u to know that i am the bbiiiggg faann of our lovely akdha

And this is our first story and we are new to this forum soo plzzz forgive for our mistake and if u like it so plzz press the like button

Thank u

Prologue😭

Jodha jalal love each other very much and they are the best husband wife in the world but due to some misunderstanding they have to apart and they have to go on different paths 😭

So let us see how they will unite after the separation of two years and in this two years wat the both lovers have to face in their lives.

So guys this was the prologue. I hope to update every Sunday or Saturday...

Character sketch

Jalaluddin mohammad-

Caring and very loving husband,brother,and son

He love jodha very much..and can do anything for her but now he hates her more than anything and leave in India with his mother brother and sister.and of course he is in the top five businessman in the whole world

Jodha jalaluddin mohammad-

The best and the beautiful wife in the world.love her husband soo much even after separation she don't hate him and yesss of course she is a best mommy and currently live in usa

Kulsum jalaluddin mohammad-

The cutest daughter of jalal and jodha and lives with jodha.one and half year old.very beautiful but a carbon copy of jalal

Hamida mohammad-

Mother of jalal veryy sweet with everyone but currently hate jodha to the core.

Mirza mohammad-

Brother of jalal Very nice love his family and even his bhabhijan very much and think to solve the problem between jodha and his family

Bakshi mohammad-

Sister of jalal love her family and confuse about her bhabhi jaan that whether se has done any crime or not

Moti singh-

Friend of jodha and like a sister to her love her very much can fight with anyone to give her justice and leave with jodha in USA and is a doctor

Ruqaiyya sultan

Cousin of jalal.love jalal money and always try to come near jalal but jalal doesn't care for her

As he always has a feeling that his jodha is not wrong

So this is my character sketch if any more person are added so I will inform u thank u and hope u wil like it 😕

Index

Prologue n character sketch on page 1

Part 1-page 2

Part 2-page 3

Part 3-page 5

Part 4-page 6

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

welcome to forums
all the best for ur story
nice prologue

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prologue dear
Continue soon
And pm me if possible

One more thing welcome to ja forum:-) :-)

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

hii dear..
welcome to JA forum..
ccongratulation fr ur frst ever story..
prologue was awesome dear n it will interesting to see hw both unite..
please do continue soon
n if possible please do pm me...😊

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

nic prologue

update asap

do pm me when u update

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

congrats fr yr new story dear
nyc prologue
update soon
n pm me 2

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

hmm concept is nice

please update ur first chapter

btw what's your name dear?

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

And ya I forgot

"Welcome to ur akdha kingdom "

Here everyone is king and queen in the kingdom so enjoy ur self🤣

Sorry ye Kuch jyada ho gaya😆

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makunoor

@makunoor

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Part 1

Jodha sat near the window of her room. It was 8 in the morning.

2 years have passed since I last met u jalal. These 2 years were not easy for me. It's been 2 years since I left India. I miss u a lot. Jodha thought to herself. Her eyes were filled with tears on thinking this. Just then moti came.

Moti- jodha! Where are u lost huh? She noticed her teary eyes and asked- why are u crying?

Jodha wipe her tears and said nothing

Moti said - u again miss HIM why do u miss that cheater who donteve trust u then suddenly kulsum came whil crawling and she just pull jodha's dupatta and she called her mama mama and she was laughing

Jodha forgot all her sorrows and just took her in her arms and was playing with her and she asked moti to come and eat the breakfast and she went with her cutipie

Here in India somebody was throwing files on table and was very angry that his green file is not to be seen and it was none other than jallad (our jallu)😆

Jalal angrily-ammi ami where are u and where is this god dammit file

Hamida came runningly and said-jalal wo yahi par hogi ruko

And she find it under the pillow and gave hi m and said-jalal tum kabhi bhi thande dimagh se kaam nahi lete

Jalal - ammi I am sorry to disturb u at night but tomorrow I have very imp meeting so I have to work .goodnight

Hamida-goodnight

Hamida was thinking and praying to God to give some streangh and peace to jalal and make him move on in his life and she went froangrily

Jalal was going to sleep wen suddenly he saw the pic of jodha with him on wedding and he got tear in his eyes remembering her and he was thinking-why jodha why u betrayed me why u left me alone why

And he remember what she had done thenhe angrily just close the lights and sleep

Here jodha was going to office after lunch wen moti came and told her that she is living and will meet in night

Jodha was going just wen kulsum came behind her and called her mama mama

She just turn and took her in her arms and tell her -kulsum now I have to go to office na so stay with daima(sorry guys daima is very kind and old woman who use to take care of kulsum in absence of jodha)

Kulsum angrily told -no mama no go beat beat

Jodha was laughing as to how kulsum was trying to say dat if she will go den she will beat her

Jodha said-no kulsum beta I have to go its urgent

Kulsum just move to other side and cutily pouts

Jodha see her and thik of an idea and she hold her ers and said-solllyy silly plz forgive your momma plzz

Den kulsum just see from the corner of her eyes and see her pleading and she just smirk and said-ichechlemmm otay

Jodha saw her drama queen and said-okay my drama queen I will surely brin your ichchlem okay now I can go

Kulsum just kiss on her check and said okay

Jodha while going remember jalal and said-see jalal your daughter is just a carbon copy of yours and she left to office

(Note:jodha's parents are dead in an accident and she have no siblings and relatives)

So guys this was the first part of this ff and next part will be posted on next Saturday or Sunday plzz do hit like button if u like this.

Thank u😳