AsYa-AyRa-SidNi-MaNan FF: Incredible Love- Part 3- Pg 10 on 7th Jan - Page 4

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Amazing update
Loved reading it
It is a treat to read all 4 of them together
Love the concept of the story
Please continue soon 😊
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Loved it..
Interesting..
U cleared that boys are vampires..
But didn't cleared about girls are they werewolf's...
Sorry...asked just like that...
Plz update soon
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I am so excited to read this
At least all the couples r from shows I know abt
But Asya my all time fav
So the singing vampires met the designers kiwis
So they both r fan of each other
So the boys wonder y they can't read the girls mind
Tht means the girls r not normal
So what r they
The girls r tracking the boys to find their secret
They know there is something
Hope we get more Asya scenes
Continue
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Nice start dear
Interesting to read other couples with Asya
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its good as well as mysterious tnx fr pm
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nice concept...
enjoy reading
continue soon...

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Part 2

After shopping, d girls went near d bowling area n hid there to avoid seen by d boys. They watched 4 them playing bowling.

"I don't think we will get to know anything abt them here," said Zoya.

"Exactly, it's a public place na so they won't talk anything," said Nandini.

They waited there for 15 more minutes till d boys stopped playing bowling. D girls hid wen d boys came out. D boys told dat they sud leave. Roshni went quickly in d parking n brought d car outside d mall till some distance away so dat d boys don't doubt dat they r still in d mall. She went back inside n joined her friends. They followed d boys in d parking. D girls hid behind some cars to watch wat d boys talks or wat they do. There was no one in d parking apart 4m them. D boys tampered d camera wid their telekinesis power.

"Guys, I find these girls weird," said Manik.

"Which girls?" asked Asad.

"Kiwis," replied Manik, "Dunno why we r not able to...

Manik cud not finish wen Asad heard some movements.

"Someone else is here," said Asad.

"Where?" asked Ayaan.

"I don't know but I heard sumthn," replied Asad.

"Lets find out who is watching us," said Ayaan.

D girls got shocked. D boys started lukn in d parking. Wen d boys were lukn on other side, they stealthily moved n got up. As they moved, Humeira's hand banged on one of d cars. D guys heard d noise n turned around. They went in dat direction but found none.

"Someone was definitely here n watching us," said Sid.

"Who might it be?" asked Manik.

"Dunno," replied Sid.

Scene shifts to d girls going back to their hostel in their car. Roshni was driving.

"Glad dat they did not saw us," said Zoya.

"Manik was abt to say sumthn abt us but before dat Asad heard some noise," said Nandini.

"They find us weird," said Roshni.

"Why they find only us as weird?" asked Humeira, "Did they doubt abt who we are?"

"I don't think so they got doubt on us," replied Roshni.

Next day, during recess break, Nandini follows Thunderstorm till d door of d boys locker room wearing a black hoodie jacket.

"Dunno why I am feeling dat someone is following us some of d times," said Sid.

"We all r feeling d same," said Asad.

"We can't let anyone dat who we are," said Ayaan.

"Exactly, no one sud know who we are," said Manik.

Just then, Manik realizes dat someone is watching n comes out. He sees someone in black hoodie. Nandini turns her back to him so dat he does not see her face. She starts walking.

"Who r u?" asked Manik, "Turn around now."

Nandini keeps walking.

"I said turn around," said Manik n held dat person's hand.

He realized dat d hand is of a girl. He was abt to turn her around to see her face but she punches him in d face making him fall on d ground n runs away leaving him shocked.

"Who d hell was dis girl who punched me so hard?" asked Manik shockingly as he got up, "How come her punch hurt me enough to make me fall on d ground?"

Ayaan, Asad n Sid comes out.

"Wat happened dude? Why u came out all of a sudden?" asked Ayaan.

"A girl was watching us & wen I tried to see her face she punched me making me fall on d ground," replied Manik teln them wat all happened some moments ago shocking them.

"How can some normal human being dat also a girl's punch can make u fall on d ground so easily?" asked Sid shockingly.

"Dunno dude," replied Manik, "Dat girl seems weird n different."

"We need to soon find dat girl," said Asad.

"Exactly," said Manik.

Scene shifts to Kiwis talking near d stairs. Nandini was now widout d black hoodie.

"Abhi bhi kuch pata nahi chala. Manik ne muje dekh liya so I had to punch him hard & I ran 4m there wen he fell on d ground," said Nandini.

"We r not able to find abt them yaar," said Roshni.

Just then, Thunderstorm came there.

"Hi girls," greeted Asad.

"Hi," greeted d girls.

"Wat u all doing here?" asked Ayaan.

"Talking," replied Humeira.

"Lets go to d class. We have lectures," said Nandini.

"Yaa lets go," said Manik.

"Poore college me sirf tum 4 jan humaare friends," said Sid.

"We want to say d same to u guys," said Roshni.

"Others only wants to be friends wid Kiwis not d real us," said Zoya.

"We can understand as we all r in d same boat," said Asad.

"Lets go to d class," said Humeira.

"U all go. We r cumn after some time," said Sid.

"Okay," said Humeira n left wid other girls.

D girls did not went to d classroom but hid behind a wall to hear their talks.

"We will have a meeting at d backside of d college after college hours," said Ayaan.

"Okay," said Asad.

D guys too left 4m there. D girls reached d class before them.

After college hours, d girls followed d boys to d backside of d college n hid there to watch their meeting. No other students were there in d college or around d college. Zoya n Humeira were standing behind a wall while Roshni n Nandini were hiding behind some another wall. D guys were sitting on a bench while their

"We still did not got to know who is following us," said Sid.

"Hope dat person does not knows dat we r vampires," said Asad.

D girls r shocked to hear wat he said.

"So, they r vampires. We were right dat these boys r sumthn different," whispered Zoya.

"We sud leave before they us," said Humeira.

As they turned to leave, d boys saw them.

"So, u both were spying us ha," said Sid.

"Humi, lets get away 4m these vampires," said Zoya.

Before d girls cud go, d guys rushed to them n circled them. D girls got nervous.

"Where do u think u both r going ha?" asked Ayaan.

"None of ur business," replied Humeira.

"Its our business since u got to know abt us," said Ayaan.

"So, since u both came to know who we r u both will live wid us 4m now on," said Asad.

"No," said Zoya, "We will not live wid u vampires."

Zoya n Humeira were lukn in d direction where Roshni n Nandini were hiding. D boys caught wat they were lukn at.

"So, we have 2 more ladies to give us company," said Sid amusingly.

"Nandini, Roshni, u both better come out. We have seen u," said Manik.

Nandini n Roshni came near them.

"Sid, call a van. We will need more space," said Asad.

"Okay," said Sid n called someone.

He told someone to bring a car van.

"We r not cumn wid u," said Zoya firmly.

Asad pulled out a gun 4m his pocket n brushed it on her right cheek.

"Wat nonsense is dis?" asked Roshni.

"Dis is gun not nonsense," replied Asad still pressing d gun on Zoya's cheek.

"Dat I can see," said Roshni annoyingly.

"Such firecrackers they are. Inke saath rehkar it will be so much," said Ayaan amusingly.

"Shut up, we r not cumn," said Zoya annoyingly.

"Come quietly wid us or...," threatened Asad moving d gun to her chin.

He lift her chin slightly wid d gun. All 4 girls got scared or pretended to get scared.

"Asad, u r mad," said Nandini.

"They all r mad," said Roshni.

"Thanks for d compliments," said Sid wid a smile.

"Leave her," said Humeira firmly pushing d gun off his hand.

"Lets run," said Zoya.

D girls started to run but they were caught by d guys in no time as they wud appear before them if they tried to run. Asad picked up his gun n kept in his pocket.

"Do u think dat its easy to run 4m us?" asked Manik wid taunt.

"I will punch u again," replied Nandini annoyingly.

She raised her fist to punch him but he caught her hand mid-air.

"So, u were d one who punched me ha," said Manik amusingly.

"Yes," said Nandini.

Just then, d van arrived. A random male vampire was driving d van. D van stopped before them. D driver got down n opened all d doors.

"Lets get them inside," said Sid.

"Before dat, we have to do sumthn," said Asad.

Asad lukd at Zoya who he was holding n said, "Turn around."

Zoya turned around. Asad removed a black cloth n tied it around her eyes.

"Wat r u doing?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"Blindfolding u, u dumb," replied Asad.

"U r dumb," said Zoya annoyingly.

D other girls too were blindfolded. Sid blindfolded Roshni, Ayaan blindfolded Humeira n Manik blindfolded Nandini. D girls were then pushed inside d car van.

"Driver, start d car," said Sid.

D driver started d car.

"U fools, why u blindfolded us?" asked Nandini.

"So dat u don't know d way where u all r taken," came Manik's voice who was holding her.

"Tum chaaron ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai. Let us go," said Roshni.

"Dimaag to tum chaaron ka kharab hua jo tum humaari jasoosi kar rahe the," said Sid.

"Tum chaaron hume weird lag rahe the so we wanted to know more abt u," said Humeira.

"Weird to tum chaaron bhi hume lagte ho," said Ayaan.

"We r not weird," said Nandini annoyingly.

"U can't do dis to us. We r ur friends. We will not tell abt u to anyone," said Zoya.

"I think we sud let them go. We r doing wrong. They r our friends yaar," said Asad thru his mind to other boys in whisper so dat d driver does not hear him.

"No, not so early. We need to keep these girls wid us so dat we sud find out more abt them. We need to find out why we cud not read their minds," whispered Ayaan thru mind.

Asad, Manik n Sid agreed wid Ayaan.

"Yes, u r our friends but since u got to know abt us we don't have any option other than keeping u as we can't trust u," said Asad.

Zoya n other girls got annoyed. After some time, d van stopped.

"We have reached, lovely ladies," came Ayaan's cheerful voice.

"Shut up," said Humeira annoyingly.

D guys removed their blindfolds. All got down. D girls saw a beautiful mansion wid beautiful garden n scenery around d mansion.

"Its so beautiful," said Nandini wid a smile.

"Nandu, hum yaha picnic nahi manaane aaye hai. These idiots have kidnapped us n they will surely keep us in d basement n tie us there," said Zoya irritatingly.

D boys laughed hearing Zoya's statement.

"Don't give us ideas," said Asad amusingly, "Lets go inside."

D boys tuk them inside d house which was very beautiful.

"Let us go. U can't keep us here," said Roshni, "We have college."

"U will go to college but instead of hostel live wid us," said Sid.

"Dats ridiculous," said Nandini, "We will not let anyone know abt u. Let us go."

"Luks like u girls want to die so early," said Manik removing his gun n pointing at d girls.

"U all have gone mad," shouted Zoya.

Asad, Ayaan n Sid too removed their gun.

"If u girls don't stop whining abt going back to ur hostel then we will shoot all of u," threatened Asad pointing gun at them wid other guys.

D girls got scared n held one another much to d guys amusement.

"Don't kill us. We r ur friends," said Humeira.

"They r no longer our friends. If they wud have been our friends then they wud have left us instead of threatening to kill us," said Nandini in an unhappy tone.

D boys were hurt by wat she said as they knew wat she said is not true.

"We can easily leave," whispered Zoya.

"But we can't let them know who we are," whispered Roshni.

"Wat r they whispering to each other?" whispered Ayaan.

"Don't know, we can't even read their minds," whispered Asad.

"We will soon find out abt them. Till then they will live here," whispered Sid.

"Girls, let us take u to ur room," said Manik.

D girls followed d boys prepared to be put in d basement, storeroom or any other prison like room. D boys stopped outside a room. Ayaan opened d door. D girls were lightly pushed inside by them. It was a big room more than enough for 4 girls. D girls were astonished to find themselves in a room was very big n beautiful instead of some dark basement or storeroom. D room had 2 double beds, a LCD, several furniture like couch, cupboard, light-lamp tables, dressing table n so on. It also had a washroom attached to d room.

"4m now, u girls will live here only. We hope u liked d room," said Manik wid a smile.

"Yaa, d room is beautiful," said Humeira.

"We will not keep such beautiful ladies in d basement like ur friend Zoya said" said Asad amusingly as he smiled at her while she glared at him annoyingly.

"2mrw, u will bring ur things here after teln d college dat u will not live in d hostel anymore," said Ayaan.

"We will not do dat," said Humeira.

"U have to do dat or u all know better wat we can do," threatened Ayaan.

"Fine," said Humeira wid frustration.

"We r leaving now. If u all need anything then u may tell us widout hesitation," said Asad.

"Don't try to run," said Sid.

D boys left d room.

"These guys r psychos," said Roshni annoyingly to which others agreed.

Precap: #During dinner, there was a jug of red coloured juice.

"Girls, have dis juice," said Asad wid a smile.

"Ewww, we don't want to drink blood," said Zoya wid disgust.

"U have to n we will make u," said Asad coolly n dignalled other boys.

D boys moved closer to d girls wid glasses of red juice in their hands.

#A group of spoilt brat girls of rich businessmen named Queen Bees including Tanveer(Amrapali Gupta), Nisha(Nisha Nagpal), Soha(vamp of KYY) n Misha(vamp of JR) insults Kiwis saying dat they r better than them n also dat Thunderstorm may be their friends but its them who they will be interested in as they r hotter than them.


A/N: All 4 couples are equally important so they will be shown equally. They are among my favourite couples😊.



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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago

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