The Apology: Last part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all a big sorry to u guys as i m updating after a long long time its almost a month as i was busy wid my exams. And today it just got over so i decided to finish my story. A big sorry..Hope this update will compensate. This update is not filmy so have no expectations and forgive me if u dont find it good.
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Kabir's Car was running at a very high speed. His eyes had turned red. His mind was full of thoughts and confusion. He was getting frustrated and his heart was calling out only one name"ANANYA"

Ananya was at the airport. Her face was blank in 30 minutes she was about board her plane leaaving everything behind. Her home, her family, her channel , her friends and Kabir. The thought of being away from Kabir made her eyes teary again and again. She was confused. Her mind was forcing her to go and but her soul and heart were dying to remain and be with her beloved.

Kabir had reached the airport. He started running madly searching for his Ananya. He was desperate to meet her, to stop her, to ask her why she was leaving him lifeless.

And then she saw Ananya.

K: Ananya!(He shouted)

Ananya turned around to see that Kabir had come to stop her. She wanted to run and feel safe in Kabirs Arms but then all the images of the happenings that took place came in front of her. Hw she insulted Kabir, How kabir tried to support her even when she ignored him. How she humiliated him.

And the thought that she doesnt deserve such a kind and honest soul like Kabir she turned the other way round and made her way to the check-in.

Kabir couldnt understand why she was doing this. He ran to her and held her by her shoulders. He made her face him. Her mesmerizing eyes had tears in them. Tears of pain. He knew she still loved him but couldnt understand what was making her go.

K: Where are you going Ananya? May I know what are you doing? What is going in your mind? Tell me. Why are you leaving me alone here lifeless? Why are u doing this to me? You are the reason for my living. You are the reason for my happiness. Why are u taking away my life and happiness? Why?

Ananya was speechless. She couldnt face Kabir. She couldnt look in his eyes. She couldnt. She just couldnt!

A: Kabir let me go. I am leaving for your good. For our good. I know you are angry but the truth is that im not forgiveable. I have hurt u a lot. You always supported me. Kept loving me. Never doubted me. But I in return humiliated u, insulted you and doubted you. I dont desreve your love and care. You deserve much much better then a silly and stupid girl like me who can only hurt you. So i am going away. And please forgive me if you can.

Kabir was shocked. What was she talking about? He was fuming in anger.

K: Who said that u have hurt me? Who said that I felt insulted because of you? Who said that you have humiliated me? Who are you to decide that i desereve you or not? Ananya you mean the world to me. You are my everything. I have nothing to forgive you. You cannot go away. U r mine and u will be mine. No one can take u away from me. U urself cannot take urself away from me. Do you understand!

A: But Kabir... i am sorry...I shud go away..Please let me go..

Kabir couldnot bear it anymore. This stupid fiance of his was not going anywhere. He hugged Ananya tightly not letting her go.
The people present on the airport started clapping.

Love had won again. The world is incomplete without love. True love need not be expressed in words it can be expressed through eyes, through a hug and in anyway.

Kaya forever!!
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So guys here it ends. Hope you like it. And there is a special surprise for you and ill update that soon.Many of u might have forgotten this silly story so here's the link.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4501228

Enjoy reading!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys I promised a surprise and i couldnt help writing it down. This update is especially for sagi as she wanted the story to end in a different way. Hope sagi would like it. I have tried my best to make it different.
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Kabir had reached the airport. The flight was about to fly in an hour. Kabir was finding out a way to stop it. He entered the boarding line and boarded the flight, He had to stop Ananya in any way.All the passengers had already boarded the plane.
And then he got an idea.

He had to clear his way to go to the cockpit( the main cabin). And then an airhostess stopped him in his mid way.

Airhostess: Sir your ticket? Sir You cannot go to the cockpit. The pilots are busy making arrangements for the plane to fly.

K: Please let let me go. You know the pilot is my friend. See my name is Kabir Sharma and im the business head of kkn channel. I am journalist so i have got information that the plane contains a bomb!!

AH: A BOMB!!

K: Yes. ANd its very dangerous. If the plane started flyind it will blast and all passengers will die. Please let me inform this. And by the way a beautifull and charming airhostess like you will not understand the problem then who will understand? Right?

The airhostess was fluttered. The Kabir Sharma who was so hot and dashing was calling her beautiful! Oh My god!! She let him go and never did a thought llike checking his ticket came into her mind. She was in her own dreamland.

Kabir entered the cockpit and there were 2 pilots sitting in there.


P1: Oh Hi! Welcome on board sir! But you are not allowed in the cockpit Please leave.

P2: You are KABIR Sharma right? Sir im a big fan of urs. But u r not allowed here. Plz be seated the plane is about to fly.

K: No. no .no. U cannot fly the plane its contains a bomdb!

P1&P2: A BOMB!

Kabir thinks: My life is on fire. Oh god! Plz help me i have to get ananya out of the plane.

K: Yes a bomb! I got the information right now. So came running here. We cannot risk the passengers lives can we? I am going to make an announcement. Plz help me.

P!: Yah but from where did you get this information..

But before he could say anything Kabir made the announcement.

K: All the passengers are requested to deboard the plane as this plane is containing a bomb. Plz get out as quick as possible.

All the passengers panicked as they heard this. And there was a chaos in the plane. Everyone was running here and there.

Ananya heard the announcement and was shocked. But the voice seemed familiar. But the situation had turned unusual as everyone was running up and down.

Soon all the passengers deboarded the plane. Even the pilots were confused what was happening. Kabir took advantage of this. Ananya was walking out fromt the plane. As soon as she got out on the airport someone picked her up and started running.
That someone was no one but KABIR.

A: Kabir!! What are you doing?

K: Ms Kashyap this should be my question? Well we have no time to chat lets run.

Kabir to the pilots: Thanks you sir! I have got another info that the plane is absolutely safe! Dont worry! Enjoy flying!

With this he held ananya in his arms and ran out of the airport. And all the passengers were left dumb-founded wondering what had happened!

Kaya were in Kabir's car. Both were relaxed to see each other. Ananya in her mind was smiling thinking what all kabir had done to stop her.

Kabir smiled and haNding over her resignation letter said: Ms Kashyap you have made a history of giving resignations. This is the 5th time u have given the resignation. Plz keep this letter safe as this letter will never be signed until im in KKN.

A: Im sorry Kabir! Im really sorry! Plz forgive me.
K: SHHH... Stop crying. I have nothing to forgive you. And madam pls never go away u know what u mean to me. Plz keep ur stupid ideas to urself. This time it was a bomb and next time u might know till what extend i will go to stop u.

Ananya smiled. She was happy.
Kaya forever!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woohhooo...!!! the first part was so so beautiful & emotional😊👏
& the second part was damn Hillarious😆😆
just loved the update... thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaalkhan

woohhooo...!!! the first part was so so beautiful & emotional😊👏
& the second part was damn Hillarious😆😆
just loved the update... thanks for the PM...

Thanks manaal ur comments are always gr8!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it Di. One small dialogue.
Kabir to the pilots: I have identified and isolated the bomb. You are safe now.
Pilots: but sir where is the bomb?
Kabir gestures to Ananya: here. And I am taking her home to defuse her.
The airhostess comes running. Sir, the special branch called up. Ananya has links to a known arms dealer called Bhadresh Kutty. She should be detained for interrogation!
Kabir 'facepalm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Loved it Di. One small dialogue.

Kabir to the pilots: I have identified and isolated the bomb. You are safe now.
Pilots: but sir where is the bomb?
Kabir gestures to Ananya: here. And I am taking her home to defuse her.
The airhostess comes running. Sir, the special branch called up. Ananya has links to a known arms dealer called Bhadresh Kutty. She should be detained for interrogation!
Kabir 'facepalm!


😆🤣
I cannot beat u in humour!! That was too good.

ANd sagi plz mujhe di mat bulao! behen kya gunaa kiya hai mene? Sab di bulaane lag jaatein ha. Im only 16 yaar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god!! 🤣🤣Still laughing for bomb vala scene. Ur first is superb one. And second one is too hilarious.. I can imagine both are running and behind then pilots,cabin screw,police😆...ananya ne kabir ko EIC se business head and then this.😆😆😆..

Superb yar...thank u for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH Yes Kavika...
Loved both updates...👏

The first one was emotional 😭

And second was hilarious...🤣

Wow...You made my mood in two different emotions...😆

Loved your writing... It was AWESOME yaar...❤️

And Thanks for the PM dear...🤗

P.S. aaj exam kaisa gaya??? paper tha na tumhara...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Loved it Di. One small dialogue.

Kabir to the pilots: I have identified and isolated the bomb. You are safe now.
Pilots: but sir where is the bomb?
Kabir gestures to Ananya: here. And I am taking her home to defuse her.
The airhostess comes running. Sir, the special branch called up. Ananya has links to a known arms dealer called Bhadresh Kutty. She should be detained for interrogation!
Kabir 'facepalm!


Sagi... U r simply amzing yaar... how can you write everything so good...

U can write serious things, then your sense of humor just WOW!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome updates Kavika 👏👏
Kabirs love...Ananyas guilt...all emotions... Great
Alternate part..such an exuberance... Loved it...all 😳😳

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