RaGa SS: Pyaar Ki Baarish. (ch1-pg1)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue:

''Aap agayi.. Humein pata tha ki aap zaroor aayengi.'' Indra smiled as Gayatri came.

Gayatri smiled sadly.. She covered her sadness and replied, '' Humein aana parha,Ranaji.. Itna kuch humare saath hone ke baad bhi humein yahaan aana hi parha.. Waise,humari saheli Swarnalekha ki shaadi honewali hai.. Aapki patni,Amerkot ki Rani aur Swarna ki bhabhi aur saheli hone ke naate aana parha humein...''

Ranaji felt ashamed of his deeds and with a sad smile,he said, ''Humari wajah se aapko bohut kuch sehen karna parha.. Aapse hum kis mooh se shama chahenge,pata nahi... (tears formed in his eyes.. While wiping them) Shaadi ka mahol hai mahel mein,ab toh gussa mat rahiye,Swarnalekha ki khatir hi sahi..''

She let out a sad laugh,casually,and replied, ''Humara gussa aapne kahaan dekha hai abhi.. Hum yahaan thori der keliye kya gaye,yahaan ki hawa ne ruk morh liya...''

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prologue-pg1.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wonder what Ranaji did ?
Very intriguing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Want to read more
N thanks for starting story on raga
This forum has very less stories on them

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Supereb waiting for part one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting. Do continue soon please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ch1.

Amerkot Palace was decorated very beautifully and workers were buzzing from one corner to another,completing the decoration works of the main lounge. Rajmata and Yashoda were seen to be ordering the workers to be quick in motion.

Swarna was reading a book in her room,when Ranaji knocked and came inside. Swarna smiled while Ranaji sat beside her.

''So,you are getting married? How are you feeling?'' Ranaji asked.

''Feeling happy and sad,both.. I am feeling sad because i couldn't live a beautiful life with Lakshraj.. The life which was supposed to be happy,beautiful turned out to be the most horrendous one.. Torture,lies and distrust.. But,after everything came out in open,i was freed,finally... By the decision you took for me and the decision i took for myself... To be honest,there was nothing in my and Lakshraj's marriage. After the divorce,i lost my trust from love and marriage,but,whenever i saw you and Gayatri,i felt,i should also move on and also be happy.. The way you fell in love after your marriage with Gayatri,the day you decided to let Rani Sulakshana be a memory of your life and let Gayatri create her own corner in your heart,i decided to move on.. I actually couldn't love Lakshraj truly,as he wasn't the ideal husband... He was totally opposite.. Nothing near my wishes nor dreams was Lakshraj... But,now.. I am feeling very much happy,thanks a lot to Bhagwanji and to you,who helped me take the right decision... It was beacause of you and Gayatri due to which I came to know about Rajkunwar Prateek Aditya Rathore. He is the actual man of my dreams.. An ideal person...'' Swarna replies with a smile.

''Wow.. Got to see such a beautiful smile of yours,after ages,little sister... Do save some for us..'' Ranaji replied teasingly.

''Rana bhaisaa.. You are too much..'' Swarna replied blushingly..

Ranaji hugged Swarna lovingly and blessed her with lots of love and happiness and with a happy married life.

This beautiful scene was watched by Gayatri,who became emotional after seeing the bond they shared. Tears brimmed in her eyes.She remembered the bonding she and her brothers shared.. Wiping the tears,she knocked and went inside.

''My dear Nanadji,what are you doing now with a book? Its the time for you to get ready as it is your sangeet today. I couldn't attend your Roka and Engagement because of someone not inviting me,but,i can't take the risk of not attending your other functions,being your Bhabhi and the Rani of Amerkot. Quickly,get ready,i will just come back and help you... (she starts to leaves but turns around and says) By the way,don't take too much time,otherwise,Rajkunwar Prateek will get restless on your absence..'' Gayatri replied with a smile and left,while Swarnalekha blushed.

Ranaji looked on and smiled..

Precap: Swarna-Prateek's sangeet and RaGa dance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome
Loved first part
Cant wait for RaGa dance
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read both the pro and the first chapter it was too good👏👏
Do continue soon,waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls pm me. And cintinue sion
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plzz continue ...hoping to get next update soon ..😳

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