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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys ,

As a viewer I feel cheated ...The makers failed to show Ranaji's slow progression of falling in love . I made this VM from Ranaji's POV ...why and how he falls in love with Gayatri .



PS : I am positive many won't agree with me ...that's perfectly fine . Some may agree ...which is great ...This thread is for commenting on the VM only... 😃 I love it when members leave a comment for the VM ... 😛











"There comes a time in your life when you have to choose to turn the page, write another book or simply close it."
~ Shannon L. Alder


Film: I me aur mei

Song: Saajna

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The first thing I noticed is how soothing the song is...esp considering you made it when there is so much drama in the show.

RNJ's journey from the riverside to the final announcement he made...
On his ride back, he reminisces on how he fell in love with her...how equally they had both given to this relationship...she had been with him through tough times, and her devotion and innocence had won him over.

He reaches the mahal..sees her in tears, turns back in helplessness...Loved the way you threaded the feeding scenes...G feeding the old lady first, and then him feeding her lovingly. ❤️

Another fb of them entering the mahal together- symbolic of Grihpravesh...just as she is about to leave the mahal, and he stops her...loved the contrast in the scenes.👏

RNJ burns his hands..her tears fall on his wounds...and he acknowledges the price of those tears...

She dresses up his wounds silently...

Next we see Gayatri running in anguish...she remembers the dream they had started living together...but what she has witnessed in the past few moments has broken everything..Only, she had been too quick to judge. Very soon, he was beside her...his judgement had been just what she had hoped to hear.

I have no idea how you do it so well.👏 You give us a story , every single time. Amazing!
Edited by chicksoup - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shwets-

Hi Guys ,


As a viewer I feel cheated ...The makers failed to show Ranaji's slow progression of falling in love . I made this VM from Ranaji's POV ...why and how he falls in love with Gayatri .



PS : I am positive many won't agree with me ...that's perfectly fine . Some may agree ...which is great ...This thread is for commenting on the VM only... 😃 I love it when members leave a comment for the VM ... 😛



"There comes a time in your life when you have to choose to turn the page, write another book or simply close it."
~ Shannon L. Alder


Film: I me aur mei

Song: Saajna


Shwets, I love it and enjoying it right now.

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Jhude hain tere kwab se .. tootein hain neend se .. yeh kaisa tera ishq hai ..excuse the typo .. apt. I love how apt the words are that describe RNJ falling in love with G.
The scene where he comes in and sees her crying and walks away .. you have added FBs to describe his slow realization of her as a person and his love for her .. Beautiful. The CVs should take some hints from you.

Thank you! merci, Gracias, Dhanyavad
Edited by eruditely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh how I would have loved to see the slow falling in love phase for RNji, the channel robbed us of the love story of ETR2, if only they had faith in their show and leads. It would have been a steady but consistent rise to the top.
Shwetha, Loved the VM and the realisation of RNji. And I also loved the stand of RGD to be his only chosen wife.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely, lovely little VM, Shweta 👏
When compressed into a VM, their love story hardly feels sketchy...the moments are all there, the passion, the angst, the overwhelming love...all put together in a tightly woven piece that accentuates the emotion..!

Not too familiar with the song...but Rahat Fateh Ali has rendered it with so much emotion that it goes beautifully with each of those moments that you've picked...

RNJ's angst so beautifully captured...a man torn between his love and what he sees as his duty...

What an epic love ...beautiful ❤️👏

Edit - oops...sorry...just realized that it was not Rahat Fateh Ali..it was such a typical Rahat song..that I have assumed..nice rendition by the singer...Falak Shabir..!





Edited by BertieWooster - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh love it shweta thank u n 🤗 wonderful vm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it Shwets.
Some intense story you told. My net played up & the lyrics didn't sync up.
Will have to watch once more to enjoy it fully.
Thanks for sharing.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shwets-

Hi Guys ,


As a viewer I feel cheated ...The makers failed to show Ranaji's slow progression of falling in love . I made this VM from Ranaji's POV ...why and how he falls in love with Gayatri .



PS : I am positive many won't agree with me ...that's perfectly fine . Some may agree ...which is great ...This thread is for commenting on the VM only... 😃 I love it when members leave a comment for the VM ... 😛











"There comes a time in your life when you have to choose to turn the page, write another book or simply close it."
~ Shannon L. Alder


Film: I me aur mei

Song: Saajna



@ bold - couldnt agree with you more.
Shwets, I dont believe I have heard this song or heard of the movie. The lyrics of the song - jude jo tere khwab se toh tute hum neend se... so apt for RaGa. Wow! Perfect.
Thank you for this VM.

Shannon L. Adler's quote is very fitting as well, it applied to RNJ's decision and to mine as well the day I walk away from this show once and for all!😛
Edited by Infofan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will upload and send you the link 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have watched that movie and do not remember the song. Hearing it again is good. What to tell you looks like my love with RAGA is at its all time low Shweta. Can not connect to them anymore.
Saying that You rock girl with your VM, your edit and your quote👍🏼 and following the quote I have closed the book for my own sanity😃

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