Roshni-Fan Fic-P-M-prt10pg8-Tabyat - Page 5

yeah, finally and about time too. looking forward for the next part

Part 8

6 months later.

Mukti had to go for a check up and Prem was @ work...Mukti phones him.
Prem: hello...
Mukti: Prem.. 😡
Prem: kya hua??
Mukti: ajj meri check up hai...aur tumne jana hai mere saath...
Prem: oh shit i forgot!...ok u go and ill meet u there
Mukti: ok.

Hospital:

Mukti gets her check up done and was waiting for Prem...
Prem finally gets there and his face is pale.
Mukti:Prem???
Prem faints.
The doctor opperates on Prem and comes out.
Muki kya hua doctor?...Prem kaisa hain?
Doctor:....im sorry per Mr.Prem ko lung cancer hai.its last stage aur uske paas sirf 9 mahine baki hai. If ne mirical happens then he'll be able to live only a year...im really sorry Mrs. Mukti.
Mukti got the shock of her life! She fell into the chair that was behind her, and cried her eyes out.

Evening Bajaj house.

Prem and Mukti go to there room.
Prem goes and sits on the bed and Mukti goes and stands by the window.
Prem then stands up and goes to Mukti, he places his hand on her shoulder, and turns her around. Mukti cries again and hugs Prem.
Mukti: Prem tum mujhe chod kar nahin ja sakte! mein tum jane nahin doongi....(she pulls herself back) chalo...hum kisi aur doctor ke paas chalte hain...a better doctor...jaise USA mein hain!..Prem humhe USA jana hoga!
Prem: Mukti...hum jayenge..lekin ajj nahin kal.
Mukti: nahin ajj humhe jana hain! abhi isi waqt!
Prem: nahin Mukti ajj raat tum aram karo..kal subha hote hi hum jayenge.
Mukti: lekin Prem...
Prem: Mukti...
Mukti goes and lies on the bed
Mukti: Prem choti maa ko bata dena.Prem: nahin mein nahin bata sakta...voh toote jayengi.
Mukti: lekin voh tumhari maa hai Prem…unko batana hi hoga..aur batadena ke hum kal USA ja rahe hain…aur ek aur kaam karna..Janki aur Mitul ko upar le ana.
Prem: itne sare kaam to mein akela nahin kar paonga…plz tum bhi madat karo…
Mukti smiles…and gets up and hugs Prem
Prem and Mukti tell Prerna about Prem and she breaks down but they tell her about USA and she says for them to leave asap.
The next day they leave for USA

that's were ill end it today and plzzz leave comments! Good and bad!…luv ya tc…
Umam

cont soon Umam. i gt ur mail as well about a frienship bracelet. thanks for it

Part 9

They were in USA for 2 months and now they finally find a doctor to do Prem's operation...The doctor couldn't do it right away he does all the tests then he says for them to come back in a week for the operation. They come back the next week and the doctors start the operation. Mukti is waiting out side the OT. The Doctor comes out in a few hours. He Didn't Look Happy.
Mukti: Doctor…Wat Happened to Prem?
Doctor: Sorry…but(his frown turns upside down)

13 years later

There is a party going on

We see 2 guys standing side by side turned around.
2 girs beside them and the 2 girls are Mukti and Janki!

Then a song starts:

The guys start singing.
The Guys: Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re - 4
The guys turn around, the y are Prem and Mitul! Prem is alive! The doctor gave him the wrong information.
Prem: Hum se hai zamaana saara, hum zamaane se hain nahin
Mitul: Hum jo chaahe chura lenge tumko tum hi se ae haseen, Hum se hai zamaana saara, hum zamaane se hain nahin
Prem: Hum jo chaahe chura lenge tumko tum hi se ae haseen
Both: Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re

Mukti: Tum se hai zamaana saara, maanenge kabhi hum nahin
Janki: Jo karoge usse behtar kar dikhaayenge hum vahin
Both: Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re Teeri rapapa teeri rapapa teeri rapapa re

Prem: Sheron jaisa dil hai, cheete ki chaal hai
Mitul: Ladkiyaan to hai billi, billo ka janjaal hai

Mukti: Hum mein hain adaayein, tum jaise hum nahin
Janki: Dekhne mein ho jaade, andar se hai dam nahin
Mukti: Tum se hai zamaana saara, maanenge kabhi hum nahin
Janki: Jo karoge usse behtar kar dikhaayenge hum vahin
Both: Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo

Mukti: Hum na ho jahan mein, kuch na kar paaoge
Janki: Kis pe mar mitoge, kisse tum itraaoge

Prem: Make-up gar na ho to khud se darr jaaoge
Mitul: Dieting karte karte poore hi dhal jaaoge
Prem: Hum se hai zamaana saara, hum zamaane se hain nahin
Mitul: Hum jo chaahe chura lenge tumko tum hi se ae haseen
Prem and Mitul: Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo, Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo

Mukti and Janki: Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Girls are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo

Prem and Mitul: Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo Boys are best, jaan lo, baat yeh maan lo

Then Prerna comes up to them and says: Wat a wonderful dance u did…now tell me y didn't u do it with Priya?
Mukti: who kya hai ke hum Priya ko surprise karna chate hain…ajj uski birthday hai!
Prerna: ohh to is liye tum dono…to Prem tumne kya liya Priya ke liye?
Prem: kuch nahin…paise nahin the.
Prerna: kya! Apni beti ke liye tumne kuch nahin liya!
Prem: jokes ma! Meine ek bari gift li hain! Priya is gonna love it!
Prerna: ok
Mukti: aur tumne kya liya?
Prem: surprise!
Janki: meine to Priya ke liye ek necklace kharidi hain!
Mitul: aur meine ek…cheez!
Prem: kya cheez?
Mitul: surprise too dad!
Prem: ok

Then Priya comes dressed in a beautiful blue skirt and white top, with bangels and a diamond necklace.
Mukti: oh!! Priya ko dekho Choti Maa!!!
Prerna turns to look @ Priya and Priya come to them.
Priya: dekho mama! Meri skirt kitni cute hain na!
Mukti: haan!
Janki: Priya yeh lo tumhara gift!(she hands her, her gift)
Priya: Papa meine suna ke app ka gift bohut bari hai…plzz app mujhe de dijiye
Prem: ek min…(he grabs his phone and phones someone)
Priya: papa! App phone baandh ke jiye! Mujhe mera gift dijiye
Prem: ok ok ok vo ata hoga!
Priya: ata hoga?
Prem: haan!
Priya: kaun?
Prem: poorana dost!
Priya: (she breathes in excitedly) ANIL!
Prem: itni jaldi guess karliya!...just..dekho kya hota hain…aur kaun ata hain!
Just then the lights go off and some one enters the house. He looked around..the same age as Priya…he was walking in with some one older too.
He came up to Priya and the lights came back on…
Priya: ANIL! (she hugs him)
Anil is Priya's bachpan ka dost..they saw eachother in elementary but then anil moved…now shes in grade 8 and Anil moved back to stay in India!
Anil: how r u Priya?
Priya: im fine 2 saal ke baad tum change nahin hue?
Anil: guess not..well…aunty app kaisi hain?...chachu?
Prem: hey! Kya kaha tha meine tuje..mujhe chachu maat bula im Prem..not uncle vucnle im too young!
Mukti: mujhe to nahin lag raha
Prem: kya kaha tumne?
Mukti: mein keh rahi hoon ke tum 33 saal ke ho to tum younge kaise ho?
Prem: let me remind u Mukti… u r in ur 30's too so don't make fun!
The kids start to laugh.
Anil: ok Prem(whisper) chachu(aloud) mein jata hoon…chalo dad.
Prem: nahin…Tum log yaha raho rishtedaar jaise ho to party katam hone thak tum nahin ja sakte
Anil: ok
Anil's dad is Kul and kul's wife is one of Mukti's best friend from collage, her name is Payal.
Mukti: kul tum kaise ho?
Kul bilkul theek…
Prem: aur payal?
?: theek.
Mukti luks behind Kul: PAYAL!
She runs to her and hugs her.
Mukti: kaisi hain tu..itne saalong ke baad tu wapas ayi hain..ab toh tum log kabhi nahin ja sakte!
Payal: theek hain to hum kis kamre mein rahenge?
Mukti: uhhh…hum intezaam karenge tum chinta maat karo..ok..chalo ab Kul aur Payal dance karo.
Kul: nahin! Bacho ko kaho.
Prem: haan!!! Sare bache ko dance karma hoga!
Kids: NAHIN!!!!!

That's were ill end it today…im tired but hope u guys liked this part plzzz comment good and bad.

Luv ya
Umam

oh it was sooooooo good
u updated finally. i was waiting for this.
continue soon Umam

Part 10

Mitul: no!
Prem: wat?
Mitul: u guys have to join in a lil while
Prem: well think about it
And they push Mitul, Janki, Anil and Priya on the middle to dance
Cash-Cash:

Mitul: cash to da left for me, cash to the right of me
Anil: cash in the da the front of me, cash in the back of me
Both: cash be the day for me, cash be the nite for me
cash on mind making money all da time
Janki: cash meri saaason mein, cash meri aankhon mein
Priya: cash mere dil mein bhi, cash meri baahon mein
Both: cash meri khwaabon mein, cash meri yaadon mein
cash on mind making money all da time
Then Prem also enters the song:
yeh to seedhi seedhi baat hai, chaahe din hai ya raat hai
kismat apne hi saath hai, paisa feko tamasha dekho -2
Then Mukti also Enters:
yeh nasha kya nasha, hai yeh kaisa nasha
jis mein saara jahaan dil haar gaya
Mitul: cash to da left of me, cash to right of me
Anil: cash in da the front of me, cash in the back of me
Both: cash be the day for me, cash be nite for me
cash on mind making money all da time

Kul: ruke na idhar ruke na udhar, jhuke har sar isake dar par - 2
Prem: aise ya vaise par paise kamaayiyo, mauka na jaaye na mauka gaawaiyon
Mukti: yeh nasha kya nasha, hai yeh kaisa nasha
Jis mein saara jahaan dil haar gaya
Mitull and Anil Sing together, Janki and Priya dance together:
cash to da left for me, cash is right for me
cash to da the front for me, cash is the back for me
cash is the day for me, cash is nite for me
cash on mind making money all da time

Payal: sabki idhar teri hai nazar, batava bachaake rakhana ghar par - 2
Kul: aise ya vaise par paise kamaayiyo, mauka na jaaye na mauka gaawaaiyon
The Kids together:
cash to da left for me, cash to the right of me
cash in da the front of me, cash in the back of me
cash be the day for me, cash be nite for me
cash on mind making money al da time

Mukti: yeh nasha kya nasha, hai yeh kaisa nasha
Jis mein saara jahaan dil haar gaya
Prem: yeh to seedhi seedhi baat hai, chahe din hai ya raat hai
kismat apne hi saath hai, paisa feko tamasha dekho
Kul: yeh to seedhi seedhi baat hai, chahe din hai ya raat hai
kismat apne hi saath hai, paisa feko tamasha dekho
Payal: yeh nasha kya nasha, hai yeh kaisa nasha
Jis mein saara jahaan dil haar gaya - 2
Janki: cash meri saaason mein, cash meri aankhon mein
Priya: cash mere dil mein bhi, cash meri baahon mein
Both: cash meri khwaabon mein, cash meri yaadon mein
cash on mind making money all da time

Then they all get together again
Janki: ab humne apki baath manli….ab….hmmm hum sab ko 100 rupees dein!
Prem mein to sirf Payal ko 100 rupees dunga kyon ki ajj uski birthday hain…tum dono mere liye koi maine nahin rakhte(he laughs)
Mitul and Janki: hmph!
Prem: acha theek hain tum dono ko mein 50-50 dunga aur Priya ko 100 ok
Mitul: fine
Janki: fine
They all give the money and then the party is over

Night-Time in PM bedroom:

Prem: ahh today was the best!
Mukti: yuppers
Prem: how'd u like the surprise I gave u and Priya?
Mukti: good
Prem: y r u giving one word answers
Mukti: dunno
Prem: Mukti kya hua??? Tumhari tabyat to theek hai na?
Mukti: mujhe nahin pata…
Prem: finaly more than one word answer
Mukti: haha! Meri tabyat subha se karab hai…
Prem: oh ho! To yeh baath hain…
Mukti: prem!
Prem: sorry! Mein koi davai laon?
Mukti: nahin uksi koi zarurat hain hain!
Prem: Mukti (seriously) koi davai laon ya nahin!?
Mukti: mujhe nahin pata kaunsi davai loon. Sometimes stomach pain, sometimes my throat ect.
Prem: ohh…kal hum doctors ke paas chalen?
Mukti: nahin kuch hua toh kyon jaon?
Prem: ok
He leaves to the bathroom
Mukti was to tired to change she fell asleep right there.(she was sitting on a chair.)
Prem came out and saw Mukti was sleeping so he picks her up and puts her on the bed and soon falls asleep too

The Next Morning:
PM Room:

Mukti was up and was in the shower.
She came out and was her hair when Prem woke up.
Prem: good morning!
Mukti: good morning.
Prem: how r u feeling to day?
Mukti: much worse!
Prem: r u sure u don't want to go to the doctors?
Mukti: Prem: nothing happened!
Prem: fine don't listen to me (he heads for the shower)
Mukti got ready and went downstairs.
No one was awake so she started cooking.
Then Prerna comes down and asks:
Mukti tu kaise subha subha nashta bana rahi hain…jao Prem ko utha mein banathi hoon
Mukti: choti ma Prem is awake aur app ajj nashta nahin bana rahi mein bana rahi hoon
Prera: Mukti tu…
Mukti bas choti maa meina kaha mein banaongi!(she giggles)
Prerna: theek hain
She looks at Mukti for a while
Prerna: Mukti tu theek haina….teri tabyat to theek haina!
Mukti: kya hain abhi abhi Prem ne poocha aur ab apne…mein theek hoon mujhe kuch nahin hua hain! Ok
Prerna: ok ab tu nashta jaldi bana aur mein sabko utha thi hoon ok
Mukti smiles
Prerna leaves
Soon everyone is down in the kitchen and eating breakfast
Everyone was really enjoying there food.
Sneha: mmmm maa apne to zabar dast nashta banaya hain!!!!
Prerna: meine nashta nahin banaya.
Everyone stops eating and luks at her.
Prerna: Mukti ne banaya hain and its not like Mukti made nashta for the first time.
Everyone starts eating again, they all say gud stuff about Mukti's made nashta

plzz comment guys i well try my best to make it the best but plzzz people i need the comments!!!
(dunno wat else to say)

luv ya
Umam

wow...continue soon....
awww thats sweet u used my name... 😳
will be waiting for the next part...wonder wht happened to mutki...she was kinda wired...?
update soon...btw umam i finally updated the next part of my FF...u can read it if u want to.....

Janki 😛

lovely part umam. continue soon