Doggerel from Swara

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends

Sigh...after that confusing episode which left me with serious angst, the SwaSan OS I'm writing is temporarily stuck. 😕 I'm really wondering:

1) Has Swara even told Sanskaar about the "kidnapping" and the photos which happened before the KC puja? Or has she conveniently forgotten, for them to surface and hurt Sansku like mad later?

2) Couldn't she have told Sansku the same thing she said while doing the arti, that she only wants to give this "ek mauka" to Lakshya for him to just talk to her. So that he doesn't feel she has "given him a dhoka"? 😕

Firstly, wherefrom is the question of a dhoka, I dunno. Secondly, when she so clearly wants Sanskaar to come along, why not just tell him this? Arre yaar, they speak 2 languages in common--Hindi and English. Maybe Sansku knows Bengali too. Couldn't she have freaking tried one out of the 3 languages to TELL him?

Anyway, to get rid of the angst from my system, here goes: 😊 😊

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Doggerel from Swara:


Lakshya, Lakshya everywhere,
Not a sanskaar in sight;
I looked for my pati here & there,
But all I got was plight!! 🤢

Lakshya & Ragini took me for a drive,
"We'll go to the farmhouse" they said;
I've heard wasps live in a hive,
But these two buzz around my head!! 😡

Even amid bright & azure skies,
With a glorious sun overhead;
These two roll in like fog & ice,
And turn my spirits heavy as lead!! 🤢

Sanskaar, my Darling, I know I've hurt you,
I'll make up for it my whole life;
I swear to you, My love is true,
I want us to be Husband & Wife!! ☺️ ☺️

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There... I felt a little better after that...😆 😆

Anyway, am off to attempt to finish my OS. Do let me know what you thought of this doggerel. As always, your feedback means a lot!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Viji- I'll comment soon, just now am crying just reading the LU. My OS I've been working on is frozen too. Feel like a negative nancy which is no not me as you know but I hate forced MUs and Sanskaar's constant repeated pain is too much to take now- in serious angst</font>

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Sorry I'm late Viji. You know how I feel about Swara's total oblivious disregard to how she comes across, the cvs have done this to her before too. I'm calmer today and feeling much better and the Limerick today made me smile:). Wish we see the bomb blast knock sense into madam but I think she will continue to be trusting of Laksh who is clearly Ragini 2 so in for a rough ride! X
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Viji- I'll comment soon, just now am crying just reading the LU. My OS I've been working on is frozen too. Feel like a negative nancy which is no not me as you know but I hate forced MUs and Sanskaar's constant repeated pain is too much to take now- in serious angst



Shru my dear...I watched the episode, and wanted to throw something at the TV every minute. 🤢 And here I was, writing a light hearted, romantic OS. Its already turned angsty...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viji ...swara is irritating me like anything
I think I have to skip some epi till everything between swason is alright
Atleast wen swara wud realise

This girl is getting on my nerves now
Is sanskaar not a human.being
jas he got no emotions ..comeon he definitely has done some mistakes in past but u can't make him pay by murdering him every min
Laksh n ragini...I don't want to say something about them..I might get banned by if
Am skipping some epia for sure...
It's enough...I want swason at every cost now
I am too much angry pained n hurt lemeriick is awesome

Edited by samiya.059 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for this but my mood is really bad after reading LU... How can some one be so Dumb???!!!
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Viji... 🤗🤗🤗
I am usually a optimistic person but just reading update about this episode have left me depressed. Ek bhi positive thought nahi aa rahi hai... 😭😭 I dont understand where is the brain of everyone?? How can no one see Ragini and Laksh playing games. Swara.. I dont have words for her now... What the hell happened to this girl... Is this the same girl who had such sharp instincts that nothing used to escape her eye...?? Today I seriously wanted someone to kill Ragini.. she is pure evil. I watched just a little part and I wanted to throw the remote at TV... Sanskaar... my heart breaks for him. I dont know what will happen in future but one thing is for sure... Swara is definitely digging pit for her herself and Sanskaar. Why can't she communicate with him... those pics are gonna create a great deal of MU along with this farmhouse talk.😭
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Originally posted by: samiya.059

Viji ...swara is irritating me like anything
I think I have to skip some epi till everything between swason is alright
Atleast wen swara wud realise
Between the Limerick is awesomeezz



Thanks so much Samiya. It really means a lot, coming from you dear. 🤗

I won't start skipping episodes right away, but if they drag this forced MU track, I just might skip a few. MU should have some rational basis at least, not just zabardasti shoved in!

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Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Thanks for this but my mood is really bad after reading LU... How can some one be so Dumb???!!!



I know Leki...I know. I watched the epi and I'm also feeling the same: how can everyone (not just Swara) be so dumb. Ragini is playing games, and after her deceit and lies are exposed in front of everybody, they still fall for her tactics again. Lakshya seems to have taken a leaf out of her book as far as acting is concerned. Trying to pretend to be understanding to Swara, getting her guard down, and then try to sneak his way back into her life.

Swara needs to talk to Sanskaar. Not talk at him. There's a difference...😕

Anyway, in the meantime, I'm trying to cheer myself up by writing. Let's see...

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thanks so much Samiya. It really means a lot, coming from you dear. 🤗

I won't start skipping episodes right away, but if they drag this forced MU track, I just might skip a few. MU should have some rational basis at least, not just zabardasti shoved in!</font>


I am too angry n pained at today's epi yaar...Feelling too bad for sanky
he deserves some happiness
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Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Viji... 🤗🤗🤗
I am usually a optimistic person but just reading update about this episode have left me depressed. Ek bhi positive thought nahi aa rahi hai... 😭😭 I dont understand where is the brain of everyone?? How can no one see Ragini and Laksh playing games. Swara.. I dont have words for her now... What the hell happened to this girl... Is this the same girl who had such sharp instincts that nothing used to escape her eye...?? Today I seriously wanted someone to kill Ragini.. she is pure evil. I watched just a little part and I wanted to throw the remote at TV... Sanskaar... my heart breaks for him. I dont know what will happen in future but one thing is for sure... Swara is definitely digging pit for her herself and Sanskaar. Why can't she communicate with him... those pics are gonna create a great deal of MU along with this farmhouse talk.😭



Hey Nityah...I think we are all in the same boat dear. As I was just replying to Leki, I am amazed that everyone--AP, Sujata, Swara, even Lakshya, are so conveniently believing all of Ragini's acting, though all her previous lies and deceit have been exposed. Actually, Ok, forget Lakshya, he is anyway acting completely brainless these days. But what about the others?

And I couldn't understand why Swara could not just tell Sanskaar, that she is going with Lakshya just to give an opportunity to talk to her. And then, she is just going to tell him the same thing, that she will not come back to him. Itna tho batha hi sakthi thi na? But no, she tells this while doing the arti, but not to Sansku.

This is laying the grounds for a forced, baseless MU. And the photos are yet to come to Sansku's hands...Swara has conveniently forgotten to tell him.

Sigh...

Anyway, I am desperately trying to cheer myself up by writing some stuff. Hope to complete my OS soon.



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