let's give it a chance || sandhir ff Part 17 UPDATED ON PAGE 49 - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Outstanding update
aww sandhir loves eachother
but sanyu's insecurity is come inbetween
wow they r going back to india
brilliantly written
teaser sound interesting
plz continue soon

Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago



Let's give it a chance

Part :11


Song after song his heart sank , her iPod was a collection of miseries , sadness engulfed him listening to her choice of songs , they reflected her pain, the pain she concealed behind her smile .He looked at her innocent face and wrapped his arm around her sleeping body , she too snuggled closer in her slumber , her warmth made him nod off .

"Sanyukta help " shouted Randhir from outside her balcony .
"What the hell are you doing over here Randhir " shouted Sanyukta running towards the balcony , getting out of her comforters , clad in a white tank and peach shorts , hair pulled up in a bun , still some tresses covering her face.
"Pull me up 1st " he shouted back at her
"No I won't " she replied adamant
"Not even , if I tell you I got you something "
"Umm I can think about it, may be"
"I guess you don't have time to think about it, I am hanging in the midway "
She laughed hard and pulled him up , her laughter became his melody from that movement.
They fell on the cold marble and shivered from the cold.
"Get up and get in , I don't wanna freeze" said Sanyukta.
"Nor do I " said Randhir in monotony .
The heaters brought the colour back to their almost frozen faces , though it doesn't snow fall in delhi but , fog there makes it cold and even worse during the night and early morning.
They hopped on the bed and nudged closer absorbing eachothers warmth
,the aura was cozy and calm , they cuddled under the blanket.
"Mom asked me to buy you a gift , so I bought you this " he cutely opened up the satin covered box, revealing a platinum Personalised Sanyukta in a beautiful calligraphy , studded with diamonds over the edges .
"It's beautiful Randhir ,but I can't take from you"
"And why so?"
"Because its too costly and I can't "
"I completely don't understand , what you are saying ! Will you please elaborate?"
"The thing is my morals and ethics don't allow me to Randhir , I am an independent women as you know , I never depended upon my dad for anything , I did a job though it wasn't required but I never wanted to be depended upon someone"
"Come here" he asked her to come close him , she did what he said and he put his arm across her shoulder and cuddled even closer her head resting on his chest , she could almost listen his heart flutter beneath.
"I won't snatch away your independence , rather who am I to do that "
She frowned her brow in return , he tied up the pendant , his fingers touched the nape of her neck making her shudder with the touch of his cold fingers .
"You can do whatever you want to do Sanyukta, I don't want to hurt your self-respect and this is nothing but my love and respect for you , that I bought you this, not that I want to impress you or something , I have many girls in line who are way to impressed"
She hit him across his shoulder, he laughed hard on the little joke he made, his muscles tensed with his every move , which sent jitters down her spine .
She punched him across his stomach.
"Ouch ! That hurts" he complained
"It should, you deserve this "
"Do I " asked Randhir making a puppy face.
She kissed across his cheek on an instant , she blushed crimson and covered her face with the duvet .
"Sanyukta" Randhir called her again with a jerk this time, she woke up with a jolt making him shift a little
The dream was over but the memories from the past and the crimson blush still prevailed .
"What happened ?" Questioned Randhir seeing her panic
"No nothing at all " she stuttered.
"It's time for lunch , air hostess asked for our order "
" I will have one veg cheese grilled sandwich and one glass of wine maybe , yeah that would be fine" answered Sanyukta calculating something in her mind .
"Get us 2 veg cheese grilled sandwich and 2 glasses of wine "
"It will be there in a while sir.Do you want anything else?"
"No ,that's all thank you "
Something inside her burn , seeing the over friendly air hostess. Jealousy you may call it.
"Your lunch Sir and ma'am"
"Thank you"
"Your lunch Sir" she mimicked that, air hostess's sugarcoated accent .
He laughed at her childish act.
"What ?" She shrugged her shoulders
"Nothing at all" he said in the middle of his laughter.
"I need to use the loo" she said all of a sudden
"Then go"
"No I mean I want ..." She trailed off
"You want?"
"I want you to come along" he arched his eyebrow to this.
"That guy is still keeping an eye on me if you don't mind"
He looked at the guy and gestured her to come along with him.
"Ma'am do you need anything"
The air hostess asked her .
"No , I just want to use the loo"
"Ma'am please don't use the washroom on the right it has a broken down lock and it doesn't opens up if locked"
"Sure thing thank you" she smiled at her for her help while Randhir still stated at that stupid guy on the seat and ignored the conversation.
"You go and freshen up I will stay out..." His voice got struck in his throat as there was a sudden movement in the plane.
"Careful " he held her shoulder , to make sure she doesn't stumbles . The plane moved again and both fell into the washroom , the plane for stable and the got up to get out of the cell they called washroom.
"Sanyukta .."
"Yes"
"The door"
"What happened to the door ?"
"It's not opening up "
"Damn it "
She moved her hand through her hairs relaxing her muscles , realizing they are struck in the washroom which has no way out ...Things were smooth but with no one around , its difficult to conceal those smitten feelings when the person who means world to you sits by your side , the world kind of turns upside down and there is a longing feeling for that love you have craved for long , soundproof washrooms as they call it , no one can hear them nor can they hear someone .



Heya guys hope you all are doing fine , m sorry for being so late again . Firstly I had some sort of writers block and then exams and what not, I know I know I deserve to be scolded for this all this wait , I apologize from my heart and I can't promise to post soon this time but I sure will try to post soon...
Lots of love

Wish you all a very happy diwali
#Simmy


Teaser : enclosed in a cell , how far can one remain...when love calls...

Edited by SimmyScribbles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one
but pls update soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mind blowing update
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing it was dii
nd I can understand
you must be busy
chill dii it's okay
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated
Was eagerly wtng for update


It was superb
Loved it


E
Rd is guilty he knows sanyu is very broken and is hiding pain behind her smile


The fb was so cute
Rd was so undeetstanding and loving then suddenly what hppnd


Sanyu jealous she's so cute


Omg sandhir locked

Super excited for nxt
Update soon


Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
Randhir realised how much pain is Sanyu concealing with her smiles

flashback scene jis lovely
Sanyu is independent girl and she wanted to remain as one
Randhir too supported her

accidentally Sandhir locked in the loo
romance will surely bloom in small confined place

update soon

Thanks for PM

love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cutay update ! <3
Enthralling must say <3
Gosh the last scene !!
So damn excited
Update soonish plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cool yaar
nice update
(but yes, do try 2 update sooner. U may risk loosing a section of ur readers for not all of us have phenomenal memories and going back n reading over again is hectic. )
Story is going great!
In an air plane washroom?? Ahem Ahem...
do conti sooon
-Sanyu

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Posted: 9 years ago



Let's give it a chance part 12


Sanyukta's breathing became frantic , even Randhir had panic written all over his face. He gulped down and took a closer look at the surroundings. The plane again had a sudden jerk but they somehow managed to balance . Having no other option Randhir took his seat on the toilet cover , he gestured her to sit on his lap but being adamant she refused , one more jolt made Sanyukta land straight away in his lap . Both were hesitant to even say a word though this wasn't the first time she did sit in his lap but things change and so do people.

It was another sunny day both were left alone in the huge mansion again. Not on purpose as both arrived home late at night and no one disturbed them for their betterment . They woke up with abrupt headache or hangover you may call it . Sanyukta woke up with all her energy and gulped down few advil with some fresh lime juice. She knocked on his door in a cranky mood .
"Randhir are you up?"
"No it's my ghost in here sitting upright" He too replied in no good mood either rather is a sarcastic tone.
"Whatever I got you some advil n fresh lime "
She said entering inside the room ,only to see him standing in his boxers. She closed her eyes on an instant .
"Sorry sorry"
She said hesitantly.
"Did I allow you to enter my r..."
He stopped in the midway and smirked seeing her panic, he continued to play it on.
"Come on in and thank you so much for this"
He said taking the glass from her hand touching her hand intentionally.
She opened up her eyes and turned back on an instant to leave , he held her wrist and pulled her towards him which made her stumble and slip in his lap.
Seeing the smirk on her face she realised what he was trying to do .
"Randhir"
She said in a seducing voice ,looking straight into his eyes and moved her index finger from his forehead to his lips. Seeing him gulp she got into fits of laughter . Her laughter made him pull her into him because of his burning anger. It didn't help much as they ended up kissing each other . Sanyukta blushed hard and left the room , it was her first kiss and so was his they didn't get this much attracted to anyone before . All in all they did realise there was some spark in their relationship but was it love ? they were yet to figure it out.

This one movement of their first kiss played up in their mind on repeat. If there was some word bigger than uncomfortable they felt it right now. The washroom on the inside was cold and that was the only thing in her favour she could use it as an excuse for the cherry red of her cheeks and the silence from both sides killed them both.
"I'm cold "
She said after what seemed like ages.
Instead of handing over her jacket to her he pulled her close.
"Don't you have a jacket ? "
She asked innocently making some distance .
"Do you see it in here? I left it outside,I didn't knew we would end up getting struck into the washroom of an airplay."
" Sorry "
She apologised after realising what stupid question she had asked to make the conversation work.
"Now stop making that stupid distance, you might fall ill"
She gave in ,as she herself wanted to be with him .

'It's strange how life is , for some things which you would have wanted all your life are in your hands but all you want to do it run away from them .'

Same was the case with her , she wanted to get close to him but that one fear made her stop in her tracks . He wanted her to be with him but he didn't want just that, he wanted her to trust him the same without that fear . That one fear he only developed in her . The pain of losing your loved one .
If she had never thought of dating a guy in this one year ,nor did he date a girl. Even with the things that set them apart their hearts they were together forever.
One intimate movement with your loved one can get into you.
"Randhir why did it happen at the first place?"
She asked leaning over his shoulder .
"We can't answer few questions, can we?"
He replied her with another question instead . How much he wanted to answer that question he couldn't , at least not right now .
He wanted to wait for a right movement.

'This is with life we always wait for the right movement instead of making the movement right and sometimes that one movement doesn't knock out on your door .'

"Sanyukta, know what..."
He thought of telling her for a movement but then something's don't come out with the flow, they require courage which he didn't have right now.
"What?"
She asked politely.
"Nothing ,may be some other time"
"Hmm"
She hummed just living in the movement both stayed quite for a while.
"Randhir"
"Yes"
"Can we start it again ?"
"Start what ?"
"Not being cold to each other"
"Is that what you want ,if yes then my answer is yes"
"Really , can we be friends like we used to be? "
She asked forwarding her hand for a hand shake . She had that innocent look on her face which he couldn't ignore and break her heart yet again but clearly all he had in his mind was did she ask him about giving it a chance just because of the intimacy they had right now or if she really wanted it.
"Let's give it a chance Sanyukta, one other chance to us"
She got him into a bear hug , his face clearly had that shock written all over.
"So how was this one year for you ?"
"I really didn't see it coming."
He replied.
"Will you answer me now? "
She asked getting more comfortable.
"Do I really have to answer that?"
"Yes,of course "
She said as a matter of fact hitting him over his shoulder .
"Okay fine , its wasn't the best of times I ever had buh nor did you."
"And how exactly do you know that?
Were you spying on me?"
"Ye, I mean no. Why would I?
"Oh yeah I can see that. Weren't you?"
"Okay fine kind of" he said lifting his hands up in the air giving up .
"And why would you do that?"
...
To be continued

Hello guys hope you all are doing fine , m sorry for being so late again . Firstly I had some sort of writers block and then exams and what not, I know I know I deserve to be scolded for this all this waiting process , I apologise from my heart and I sure will try to post soon...
I miss writing a lot and I realised this when I wrote this chapter .
I wanted to put all my efforts into it Caz I made you wait a lot for it. Hope you all like it...
Lots of love
And now forums won't let me post ...
Can it get more delayed
Sorry guys m not able to reply to your comments I want you
All to know that I love them a lot and appreciate your love all that I have is I wish to reply but still so damn tied up I m
#Simmy


Hahahaha i left it on a cliff hanger , m so mean
Teaser: Some unasked questions and some unsaid answers ...

Edited by SimmyScribbles - 9 years ago

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