JJ TS: Waiting For you Chapter3 part 2 on pg 28 updtd on 2/02

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Hello Friends!!😃I know you must be thinking what this girl wants. I am here back to irritate you with one more story of mine. Though you are saved that it's not an FF or any SS. It's a Three shot. So, please do read it and post your precious comments. And don't forget to like...😆

chapter 1: page 1
chapter 2:page 14
chapter 3:page 21&28

Waiting for you
INDORE, INDIA
8:30 am
A gorgeous lady with a heavy stomach barged in the cabin and directly seated on the chair. She was utterly exhausted. Though unknown to the actual reason, she had convinced her mind with the reasons that it was all due to pregnancy and stress.
"Maam, sandhya maam has called you in her cabin."
"I m coming." Replied she in her ever sweet voice which was now filled with pain and only pain. Pain of betrayal by the person whom she loved unconditionally.
She stood up to go. Though she was tired of coming through the stairs still she never cursed her boss.
"May I come in?" Asked she.
"Yes sure sweet lady." Said sandhya.
"What's the work for me today Sandhya?"
Though she was her boss, but Jodha always addressed her as sandhya. She was her college friend but still she had immense respect for her. Firstly, because sandhya had always helped her no matter what be it in studies or anything else. Secondly, she was the one who forwarded her hand to Jodha when she was struggling for a job after leaving her so-called house. And thirdly, sandhya was always polite with her irrespective of their social status.
"I've already sent the files in your cabin. There are some rough structures of the Royal Style, our latest and probably the most expensive project till date. I don't want any flaws in this. And I hope i can trust you for this."
"Yes sure sandhya. I'll try my best to make those designs as beautiful as possible. Now I'd like to have your leave."
"Umm wait... I guess you have a appointment with the gynec tomorrow at 5:00?"
"Yes.. How do you know?"
"Rashi told me. So you try to do as much as possible till tomorrow evening then after submitting you may leave."
"Ok thankyou sandhya."and the lady stood up and headed towards her cabin.
Rashi was Jodha's best friend and her only support in her hard time. She always loved Jodha like her sister and Jodha did the same. They were like soul sisters. Whatever they'd do, they would do it together. Even told every secret to each other which they were uncomfortable of, with their moms too.
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NORTH BOSTON
8:30 pm

"Ranveer is my jet ready?"asked the boss in an authoritative tone.
"Yes Jalal. "Said his best buddy cum most trusted employee.
"Good. I'm leaving for india tomorrow and I don't want any mishandling over here. I trust you and hope that you'd take good care over here. Let me know if something urgent comes up." And with this the boss headed to his home leaving a stressed man behind.
Jalal finally reached his home correction house. It was a house because no one was there to take care of it. Neither his mother and wife? No comments about that. He couldn't stay with a lady for more than a week than entering a relationship for a lifetime was out of question.

1 HOUR LATER

The unfriendly man went directly in his room not paying any heed to the servants around, to change. After changing he slumped on his bed and switched on the TV. Nothing interesting was displayed. But one of the channels grabbed his attention. It was a youth channel. Though, he never watched any such channel, but this time it was different. He seemed to be interested because it had the name of one of his most loved person at a time. There was a time when none of them could live even a moment without each other, always together. Both of them fell in love without their knowledge. There was a time when they didn't even bother to look at each other, but later they fell deeply in love. But a huge tornado,hit their lives which changed everything upside down.
JALAL'S FLASHBACK
"Jalal. I want it please..."and the cute lady made a pouty face which made him melt, once again. She was constantly asking him for her favorite raspberry ice cream. But he was refusing her as she had a bad cold.
"Ok.. Ok ok... I am getting it. Happy now?"
"Thankyou so much Jallu." And gave him a tight hug. Jallu was the name which annoyed Jalal the most and the supercool girl always loved to tease him with this name. As usual the helpless man just smirk at the cute lady and went to buy the raspberry bar.
Jalal smiled at their fond memories which always managed to make him nostalgic. The lady whom he loved the most was no more in his life. He tried to track her in every possible way be it social networks or her phone. It is said,
"Breaking someone's trust is like crumbling up a perfect piece of paper. You can smooth it over but never get the same again."
Same was the case with Jalal. He knew whatever he had done was wrong but now no point on regretting because he knew it's nearly going to be impossible to persuade his girl even if he finds her.
He doesn't know anything about her. Where is she, how's she, is she married, etc,etc. But still a bit of hope was left that may be he can get her in India.
He drifted into a deep sleep with a new hope.

INDORE,INDIA
7:30 pm

The tired lady exited the office premises soon after reporting her boss about the day's work to which her polite boss was quite happy.
She heard her phone ringing once again. She was quite irritated with it, so finally she picked it up.
"Hello!"
"Hello, Jodha."
"Yes, Shohaib? Any problem?" Asked she, worriedly.
"Not really. But just wanted to remind you. Tomorrow you have your appointment. So be on time."
"Yes,I remember don't worry. I'll be on time."
"Ok I'll come at your office to take you. Fine?"
"Umm. I don't have any problem if you are fine with that."
"Ok. You tell Rashi also to come then."
"Haan. Thik hai."
("Haan ok")
"Ok then. I hope you are already out. Reach home safely and message me after you reach."
"Yes. I will. Bye. Gn"
"Gn. Bye."and they hung up.
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BOSTON
7:30 am

Jalal had already checked in the his private jet and was all set to go to India, his homeland. He had a deal with the Rachel Group of companies for his latest project in India. He checked the time nth time. He didn't know but he was feeling quite restless while going back.
Finally his wait was over. And his plane had taken off unknown to the hurricane waiting for him in India.
Hope you liked it. Will try to update the next part soon if you like this one. So, the response on this chapter will decide the next update's fate...😆.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start namu
poor jodha
what did jalal do?
continue soon
and Happy diwali
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Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

awesome start namu

poor jodha
what did jalal do?
continue soon
and Happy diwali

thankyou swara and happy diwali to you too!...
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congo😆
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Wonderful dear continue soon

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Awesome update n update nxt sn n thnxx for pm
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nice update
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Superb Namita👏
Eager to read more😳
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