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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Letters 27-28:

I shouldn't even be here. I am hiding my face...So so so sorry. Since this is my bday week, don't get mad Ridz. But one promise I held on was, I am commenting on the previous one now. I haven't read this letter. So much of self control Ridz. My eyes just wandered above and I had to or rather forced to restrain myself. Blame it on your A and Jalebi. Btw, when will they tell the other, their real name? Isn't it long pending? I mean after the confession, yeh to banta hain.

So, what an excellently written letter. This time J won my heart with that Bollywood dhamaka. I loved that story. So kinda romantic... And these two are too witty for their own good. There is humor, there is brilliance, there is sorrow, there is happiness and there is an ocean. How I love this exchanging of letters. It is like I am waiting for my mail to be delivered.

Altruistic, cheesy but charismatic, gentleman like, all these just made me crack up and laugh out. They were too good and I enjoyed every bit. Oh the possessive, jealousy and petty. A lot! It means they need each other and lot! ;) finally Arnav's suggestion made me go bonkers over him! Ha my love for these two letters are more than the love I have for my Pride and Prejudice. :)

Letters 29-30:

I am here with all exorbitant happiness and sexiness..😉 😆

CONGRATS RIDZ!! I hope you add more pages to this beautiful story.

These two letters were fantabulous. Too good.. like Jigs remarked, how will it be when they meet? Will it be open? I am confident not.. at least during the first time..

And why aren't they eager to know the other's names? Cheesima? Lol that had me cracking up.. I loved how these two are ready to cut the other into half with their letters and making sure the other bends down.. but at the time they both like each other and one has become the other's breathing.. that is the beauty of their relation..

Sarcasm wins again!!! :D that was plain bad.. kewwwl! And munchkin seriously? Haha.. Lol poor cat I would anyway say the cat is a little more blessed to have at least been with her till now!! :D okay looking forward to his Di convo..

Now I will very happily say, waiting for the next.. I have every right to!!!

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 9 years ago

And I am here for my mail :)

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How do you manage to slip these small victories of courage in your updates? I mean - if this is not one continuous declaration of love I do no know what is...

How easily Khushi slipped this into her letter this time..

...know you will think I am being over-dramatic, but if your letter is even a tiny bit late, I feel...I feel like I've stopped breathing. That's how essential your presence is to me.

See.. She likes him just a tad more than Munchkin... and here it is again...

..Maybe...maybe he knows that I like you just a tad bit more than I like him?

And she is thinking of them as "us"... and brought the parent in the equation..

Maybe this, us, is my dad's doing too. Because no matter where they are, I'm sure that they are watching over me, over us

In between all that bluster and tease... she has laid her heart out for him to read.

And he is just as brave...

mere sanse ruk jayenge.

He laid his heart bare... because his breath will be suspended if he didn't hear from her and goes on to confess the truth of his statement!

But like most of my beliefs before meeting you, this one seemed to have been turned upside down as well.

And without a demur he acknowledges "uncles's" role in getting them together and that...

I'm stuck with you. I wouldn't have it any other way.

But isn't that the sorcery of the moment when one sits down to write a letter... the intimacy of that act that is between one's heart to another... That moment of solitude when everything else is suspended... and space provided for the heart to reveal itself without fear?

Kudos to you dear writer friend... for making these small earthquakes happen between the two of them...

Especially when you slip them between lines just like those small dips and slips that continents do when they shift.. making mountains... :)

Now, my question is... what is keeping these two from grabbing each other in ways that doesn't involve the written word? 😉

Perhaps for that to happen, they have to slip and shift from pen pals to...

This was a great update.. and what is even better is what it says without saying it at all...

Sleuthing ... here we come. :)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 9 years ago

Woohoo! Congrats on the new thread! 🥳

Now we shall wait for the mail to arrive...😳

Okay... so I waited and finally the moment arrived where the letter was delivered. Then I finally got my answer to the teaser...

He, who? = Muchkin

Me, who? = Jalebi Girl

You, who? = A...

That had me LMAO! Really, Munchkin? Poor cat, but come on there is no competition with our dear A, who is pretty awesome. 😳

I really am shipping these two, the way they are declaring their feelings openly through mere words on a paper. Can you imagine what it will be if they ever talked or saw each other? But that makes me think, would they be as open? We tend to express ourselves without hesitating when we are not face to face... so it will be interesting to see what happens?

And what the... these letters are short :( I want more, and want it now, dammit! Chop chop... waiting...

Loved it, Ridz! 🤗

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scrapbooker

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Posted: 9 years ago

LOL! That was just plain mean Blue!

Aap wakai bahut hoshiyar ho!

Kahan, kahan pahunch gaye the hum log... Anjali talking to Aman, about Arnav... Arnav writing to Khushi about Aman... LOL! isko kehte hain 'khoda Paharh Nikla Munchkin'

There is so much sweetness in their interaction... so much openness regarding their feelings... that it unsettles me a little bit. Maybe I am looking for shadows where there are none. Where are we going, Blue?

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats on new thread...

They have voiced out their feelings and know more about each other without knowing their identity...

Loving it Ridz...

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

UnRes :-)

CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD RIDZ :-)

Lolll. ... its neither 3 A'S nor kushi. .. so, its MUNCHKIN. .. your teasers are brilliant ridz :-)

I still can't understand, how these two are so open about their feelings without even knowing the names. ... or did they mention their names in any of the previous letter. .. will check. ..

Munchkin in competition with arnav is hilarious. . And arnav is on mission to find out about anjali and aman in his vacation. . Good.. so, what's next with arnav and kushi? ???

Waiting ridz :-)

Edited by pravallika - 9 years ago