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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anxiously Waiting For Next Update This Maan And Geet Are So Interesting
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Interesting updates. Both behave so kiddish.
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PART 32

M-Our bond that is more than friendship and I don't have that bond with anyone else. You are perfect, no disfunctionality in my eyes. You are beautiful inside and out. So I am not embarrassed to take you out in public neither do I hate you when we are alone coz you are always beautiful

G-Chii dhat!

She hides her face in her hands

He stands close to her taking her hand off her face

M- I was born rich yes. I am still rich yes. But I am also independently rich and have a job. So I don't have to marry a rich girl to keep living a rich life and looking at you I don't think that a middle class life is altogether that bad either

Geet ki ankhein to abhi bhi neeche hai and she has a rosy blush spreading her on her cheeks

Maan cups her face and blows air on her eyes. He can feel his heart well with happiness, he only gets when he is with Geet

M-So now since everything is cleared up; very unromantically I am going to tell you what we are going to do. First I will officially propose you and you will yes coz of goodness of your heart and coz you like me too, then we are going to go on dates; nice places nice food and enjoy ourselves

Maan takes her hand and brings her out of water getting down on his knees

M- Will you be my girlfriend?

She is completely red like a tomato and her eyes dilate hearing him making her look super cute and innocent

She nods lightly

Maan gives her hand a chaste kiss, then stands up giving a very devilish smile

M- I am going to enjoying telling your mother that we are officially dating

G-You will???????

M- Of course i will

He gives her a quick hug and a kiss on forehead before moving back and takes her hand again

M-Chalo...tumhare ghar chalte hai

Par Geet hili nahi

She closes her eyes slowly

M-What's wrong?

He says caressing her cheek

Geet was expecting a kiss but Maan nahi kar raha. He is not horny and jungli as she believes him to be. He does take his mind out of gutter once in a while

G-Aye jungli!

She says as she opens her eyes

She tip toes and plants a quick kiss on his lips

He hooks his hand behind her

M-Whose jungli now huh?

He says casually brushing his lips against her

G-I am just making the moment memorable

Maan looks at her for a contemplative second and nods moving away

M-Memorable enough

G-Thode to romantic ho sakte ho

M- Isse zyada memorable banaya.. to mera jungli pana phoot kar bahar aajayega

G-Jaante ho Shankar ne mere liye gaana...

She stops

M- Baby you got nowhere to run...you are in my cave. You can be unclear what you will do... if he asks you Geet...but I am clear that I won't let you go without a fight and I will make you fall in love with me...damn the society and it rules and beliefs that we cant be together...before he gets enough spine to propose you. So he can write ballads in your honor...I am still going to steal you away from him

G-Jealous?

M- You haven't seen my jungli jealous side babes

G-ohhh, why what will you do?

M-You don't want to know that

G-I do

Without warning he grabs her waist and picks her up, carrying her in his arms around the pond behind the waterfall getting them both wet

She wraps her arms around his neck

Into the small dark cave

He whispers in her ear

M- I'll hide you here where no one can find you and take you away. I'll keep you inside a golden gilded cage so that you don't run away from me

He put her down and traps her between the cave wall and his body

He bends his head licking water drops from her lips

M- And that would just be the beginning

She moans biting her lips

M-Don't make that sound Geet... coz I am very close to losing my control...very close

He leans in her direction brushing their bodies so he can convey his need for her

She tightly grabs his collar

His hand tightening ever so slightly at her waist

Geet stiff ho gai, wo to immobile ho jati h inn mauko par

Maan sees and notes her reaction

He lets go of her waist and puts his hand on her head bringing her close for a hug

M- No matter how much I lose my control but I wouldn't force you ever ok?

She nods like a school student

M-We won't do anything you don't want to. For now this is fine...more than enough

She smiles in his embrace

After a while something occurs to her

G-Heyyy Maan! ye lo

She gives him her phone to him

He takes it

M- Now?

G-Photo dekho naa...meri behen ne liya...uski nayi saree hai

Maan gives the photo a glance

G-See, how do I look?

M-ermmm isme saari kahan hai???

G- Saree hi to hai

He says turning photo's angle

M-Not that I don't like the pic...serious hot

He winks at her

M-Let me transfer that to my phone

Maan takes out his phone and does the rest

M- I see the top and the bottom... and not the 6 feet cloth...not that I am complaining...

G-My sis put it this way

M- Your sis... has a dressing style which is mean to attract every male's attention...and you don't have to follow her style coz you already have my whole attention

He gives her the smoldering look again at which she grow stiff

They come back home now so that Maan can tell Geet's mom that they are officially a couple now

Geet was stunneddd

She never expected Maan aisa sahi mein keh dega

On the other hand, Maan had nothing more to lose so he laid down all his cards...waise bhi playing his hand close to his chest hadn't helped the matters

Ghar aaye to ghanti baji

Maa ne khola

Maan ne kaha namaste aunty

Geet side se andar aa gai

Ma-Namaste. Tum yahan?

Maan goes and hugs her

M-Hello aunty, kaise ho aap?

Maa frowns

M-Main to bas Geet ko drop karn e aya tha

He says stepping back

Maan looks at Geet jo Maan ko signal kar rahi thi peeche se ..go go

Ma-Geet ko?

M- haan

Ma-Geet ab bhi tumse milti hai

With a strict voice towards Geet she says

M-Nahi wo to bas aise hi aaj rasste mein mil gayi thi, so we got talking and we realized that we were really acting like kids...avoiding each other and being miserable .So- I proposed and she said yes. Can I take her out for dinner tomorrow night?

Ma-Proposed????????????????????? And she said yesss??????

Her gaze on stone hard gaze is on Geet

G-Wo maa ..wo

M- Aunty shaadi ki nahi...just you know she said yes that she would date me. Aap Geet par mat gussa hoiye after all I am a persuasive man and you know I'll take care of Geet

Ma-Geet ka to dimaag kharab ho gaya hai!

M- Kyun? Mere se achha ladka kahan milega?

Ma-Geet, kuch log pair pe kulhadi maarte hain aur tujh jaise bevkuf kulhadi dekhte hue kulhadi pe pair maarte hain

Geet looks down

M- Aunty aap kyun itna gussa kar rahi ho? Kya galat kiya hai usne aisa? We love each other; agar hum dono milna chahte hain, main aapse permission bhi le raha hu even then aap Geet par chilla rahi hain

Ma-Tum jaisi bade baap ki bigdi aulaadon ki asliyat chuppi nahi hai mujhse. Geet to bholi hai..kuch jaanti nahi hai, main apni beti ko okhli par sar kaise rakhne doon?

M- Main bigdi hui aulad? And what proof do you have of that? Kya bigda hua kaam kiya hai maine? Jhoot bolke nahi milta main; sab aapko batake kiya hai, aapke samne milta tha. Kabhi use nahi kiya hai maine, naa koi intention hai meri. Just cos I was born rich doesn't mean ki mera character kharab hai

Ma-Kya guarantee hai kal ko iska fayeda uthake chod nahi doge?

M-Kya guarantee chahiye boliye? Aap mera address janti hain, naam jaanti hain, logon ne hume saath dekha hai, office ke log eet ko jaante hai. Maine kuch kiya aur aapne complain kari to sab log yahi maanee ki galti meri hai aur waise bhi Geet ko main kabhi nahi chodunga

He gets the devil tone and expression

Ma-Kyun kahenge log tumhare bare mein? Hum to middle class hain aur tumhare paas to khub paisa hai logon ke mooh band karwane ke lie

M- Poore sheher ka muhh band karwaunga main? Itna bhi amir nahi hu

Ma- Ye sab awaaraapann bilkul pasand nahi hai mujhe Geet! Baad mein pachtayegi to mere paas mat aana

Maan scoffs

M-Aapse permission le raha tha bas, aapki approval nahi; kyonki mujhe aisa lagta hai ki hum kuch bhi galat nahi kar rahe hain

He glars at maa and goes to Geet takes her hand and smiles

M- Kal dinner 7 pm. I'll pick you?

Ma goes in saying, besharmi ki hadd paar kar chuke ho tum dono

M- Haath hi to pakda hai..

He says irritately to to Geet's mom

M- You'll be ready?

He asks looking back at Geet

G-wo maa...tum bura mat maano maa ki baaton ka

M- O I don't mind her

G-Wo mujhe leke zara zyada concerned rehti hain

M-She is much better than mine... tum kal taiyaar rehna ok? We'll go dancing

G-Dancing??????? Where ????? Mujhe naachna nahi aata

M- Acha hai, mujhe bhi nahi aata. We'll go to some restaurant have dinner then to some disc ok? I'll drop her back by 11

Maan tells maa in middle

Geet smiles

G-But its ok...you will be tired...kal office hai naa. Thak jao to mat aana

M- tch main to aa raha hu tum aage dekh lena

G-Bye take care

Maan nods

Kiss karne ka mann bhi kiya lekin phir bechari maa ko heart attack naa aajaye

He waves good bye and goes

Geet to waise hi mesmerized si smile chipkaaye khadi hai, pinches herself to make sure it's real

Maan goes out lets out a joyous whoop and a jump and khuhi khush car mein baith kar back to office

Secretary bhi surprised ki itne dino baad pehli baar Maan ko itne relaxed mode mein smile karte hue dekha hai

But as Maan enters the cabin; uske cabin mein koi baitha hai yaa kahun baithi hai

Ek lady baithi hai short dress mein in her mid-twenties

She looks at Maan with a seducing grin on her groomed face

It's his ex gf from abroad

Gayi Maan ki smile naale mei

Hi baby'

M- What are you doing here?

She walks up to him

Why are you so rude honey?'

She says wrapping her arms around him

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all for all the likes, comments and love...really grateful for all the appreciation...big hug!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update 👏
I really loved the way Maan talks to geet's mom lol 😆
Eenth ka jawab pathar se deta hai 😉 😆
Mom ab bhi is ke khilaf hain
waiting for their first official date 😳
Ab ye kon Haddi aagai beech me 😡
Maan ki koi ex bhi hai oh no ye tou latest news hai 😡

Waiting fr next nilz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. Maan and geet going to be dating. Nice loved the way maan asked permission from geet mom. Hope he can get rid of his exgf
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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love maneet...he Geet ki mom got abhi se hi khilaf he...love...maans back ans
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Nice update...

I loved how maan ask to geet's maa for her permission to take Geet as his date...

But the happiness is short lived after the entry of maan's ex-girlfriend..

Waiting to know more...

Continue soon...
Edited by shree2 - 9 years ago
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Awesome Update ..
i loved the way Maan talks to geet's mom ..
waiting for next update..

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