Originally posted by: rabzonedge
Excellent piece of writing... I could visualise each n every scene...
Thankyou so much rabz...means a lott :))
Originally posted by: idonkno
First you got to accept a big hug (🤗🤗) for my side because reading this OS was the first thing I did this morning and without a doubt you can guess what an awesome day it has been for me since then. Thank you a lot for writing this wonderful OS that I was able to envisage so naturally!! Everything in it was just so so perfect (everyone completely in their character) and what made it ever more appealing to me was that Anita no longer needed to hear Kabir's version of the past because his actions already made her wholly convinced of his love for Ananya and the fact that chaahe kayamat bhi aa jaye who Ananya ka saath nahi chodega!
Thank you again Malika!! Hoping CVs try to use such a sequence to show either one's concern for the other. Such a bliss it would be
Aww thankyouu so much buddy for such sweet words 🤗 It really really means so much!!
So happy you could connect with the characters in my OS...actually thats the real task in any write up...to live up to the essence of the characters...and I am glad I cud do my bit of justice to it. 😳
And as for Anita I truly feel that somehow Anita not coming to know about what exactly happened between Tarini and Kabir and in what circumstances that mistake happened, is somewhere good. I still feel in case Kabir had to explain everything to Anita it can be too awkward for both and that essence of a MIL-SIL relationship might just be hampered. And thus I will always wish that Anita's trust builds only from the fact that how much Kabir loves Ananya rather than the details of what happened in his past. Yes I want her to know how evil Shreya can be but w/o going too much into that ONS thing...srsly it will somewhere spoil the things to an extent.
Edited by Malika - 10 years ago
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