Life gave a wonderful gift to us ,our safed love..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HI ,Guys a very good afternoon to you all ,my dear people,I am back again,I really missed a lot,posting in this awesome forum,now it is again my time to post in this forum,ya,I am happy for that people,luv u all buddies😊😊😊
So now,I am back with something special ,from the title people u would have guessed ,what I am going to open up here,Ya ,I am going to present a poetry on the scene were Viplav unknowingly breaks Dhani's fast that too with a chocolate,hope u people enjoy it.
POEM# LIFE GAVE A WONDERFUL GIFT TO US OUR SAFED LOVE...
Wow,life ...itself is a gift from heaven's almighty,
Then what can,we call this gift...is this mighty??
Life can u answer our questions pondering in our inner minds??
If u can prove ur state,then we will surrender ourselves that ur the mightiest mind,
Can majestic looks added to bond of two ,ENRICH it as the gift of all,
Or your stand can't make out the variations of true qualities of gift from all,
If love is pure in it's eternal form? is that so honourable to become a gift from you?
Then love is present all over the world,in it's pure scenario in minds of lovers,so tell me what is gift according to you.


Why can't love become a gift to one?
If the one who indulge in love are more pure than the love they have for their loved one,
Moon which glitters and paints the horizon,
Was ready to cover them with it's heavenly white shade as a symbol of their love's zone,
Chocolate the happiness of all people,transformed itself as life giving food,
In the hands of her life giving saviour,which was treated upon by magic of God and disguised as the FAST BREAKING FOOD,
Husband's love and wife's immense care are the results of Karwachauth ,which are nature's wonderful creations,
And these creations for sure are gift from God,in any way of thinking,that too awesome creations of creations,
These people are not couple in real ,
But they made Karwachauth in real,
His love is pure ,her care is more,
Hence they are suitable for a future couple's seat,offcourse as the chances for them are more,
He broke her so to be called fast of confusion,
In the land of love that ,I gave them as a result of their honesty's personification,
You asked me a question ,as to how love can become a gift ?
If these people can care for each other more than anything,
THen that love can be and deserve anything,
If love exists in it's pure form in the minds of lovers,
Then these lovers minds are embedded in the hearts of safed's emperor,they are the testimonial lovers,
Wow,this is what ,I didn't ever except from you,
Ur answer holds the justification of reality,which makes one clear about the ideas of a gift to be deserved from u,
I accept your decision to choose love as a gift,
To an ample gifted couple,is the biggest gift of all,
I am sure ur gift makes us jealous,because the loves of the world are pure but the love you have bestowed upon them is immortal,
Which can be engraved on the mighty heavy rocks and stones as the heavenly portal,
The couple for sure will rejoice up to the sky,
For getting a treasure countless of all their desires,which are not as light as the feather that fly in the sky
And they will profess"LIFE GAVE A WONDERFUL GIFT
TO US ,OUR SAFED LOVE,
Which is a prophecy from God for our infinity defeated love.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVELY POEM JENNY TUMHE PATA HAI THE BEAUTY OF UR POEM LIES IN THE REALISTIC TOUCH U GIVE THRU SIMPLE THINGS LIKE CHOCOLATES AND ALSO SIMPLE ASPECTS LIKE KARWA CHAUTH HERE BASICALLY I DONT CELEBRATE BUT I LIKE IT AND THRU UR POEM I LOVED IT DEAR PROBABLY NEXT TIME I WILL KEEP VRAT FOR MY LOVED ONES😛
UR POEM ALWAYS FULL OF LOVE UR FUTURE LOVE IS VERY LUCKY TO HAVE SUCH ROMANTIC POET😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks jenny what a come back! beautiful gift.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey jenni what an amazing poem. Your description of love is so so beautiful. Simple words used but they manage to leave a mark on my mind and succeed in touching my heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what a comeback post jenny...
this is so beautiful👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

LOVELY POEM JENNY TUMHE PATA HAI THE BEAUTY OF UR POEM LIES IN THE REALISTIC TOUCH U GIVE THRU SIMPLE THINGS LIKE CHOCOLATES AND ALSO SIMPLE ASPECTS LIKE KARWA CHAUTH HERE BASICALLY I DONT CELEBRATE BUT I LIKE IT AND THRU UR POEM I LOVED IT DEAR PROBABLY NEXT TIME I WILL KEEP VRAT FOR MY LOVED ONES😛

UR POEM ALWAYS FULL OF LOVE UR FUTURE LOVE IS VERY LUCKY TO HAVE SUCH ROMANTIC POET😉

Di,Omg u made me blush completely di,thanks a lot for this di😊😊
Di ,I am so happy that my poem made u to get a thought of keeping vrat ,wow it is so sweet of u di,ur comment made my day😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks jenny what a come back! beautiful gift.

Ohh thank u so much Tahera dear,for liking it😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jenny are you serious???😲 Can't believe this is beautiful...my words always finished yar...you are amazing👏
Your poem describe things so beautifully that I myself feel your words...you are a gem🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Hey jenni what an amazing poem. Your description of love is so so beautiful. Simple words used but they manage to leave a mark on my mind and succeed in touching my heart.

Thanks a lot Rosey dear,urs comments always make me smile😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful poem, Jenny! You blended the recent moments of ViDha on KC day beautifully. Loved reading it. You really are a great writer! 😊

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