Sandeeps Confession......Fantasy Fiction2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆Hi friends im back again with some fantasy fic for u all.... i know it gets so boring here , 7 days gap n all..........im trying....help me with ur comments n criticism plzzzzz.............. thanks 😊... here goes........

Urmi is sitting on the swing in her house... thinking.... mere liya time nahi hai.... poori duniyah ke liya time hai... bus mujh ko sirif daantana aur no kah dena... bus......Urmi was busy sulking...didnt realise that someone had climbed stairs and was standing and looking at her........

Sandeep coughed and Urmi startled looed up and saw the reason for her miseries standing in front of her.....Sandeep comes near the swing n gestured if he could sit on the swing... urmi moved a bit n he sat down beside her..He was holding a paper bag.. Urmi wondered what was in it.....😉

Sandeep looking here n there like always....... S

said asked ....Naraaz ho?

Urmi, nahi....

S, phir raat ko khana dene kyoon nahi aayee?

U, saar main dard tha....( atypical excuse😆)

S,ab theek ho,.........bending his head a bit n looking at her.

U, hmmm... nodding........

S, jitna tum mujhe jaan ti ho, utna koyee mujhe nahi jaanta......Urmi looking straight. avoiding eye contact.... Sandeep going on...... main cheeko se moo nahi phair sakta.... woh mere best friend ka beta hai... jab main us ko daikh ta hoon, tu mujhe mera buchpan yaad aata hai, shukar hai ki us ki maa tu hai....main tu bilkul aanat tha...........

This made Urmi feel guilty and she turned to face him ,thinking what was coming next, not a bad news from him.......he was looking staight as if talking to himself.....suman mere best friend ki wife hai.... woh meri bhahie ki tarha hai( now wouldnt we love to hear this heheheh😆)

This little speech bought hope and light to Urmis life.....she smiled and Sandeep turned to look at her... seeing her smile, he smiled too....then he gave her the paper bag and said, kaal plaza chalo gee???

U, nahi

S, kyoon, abhi tak naraz ho?

U, nahi, main yahaan kal nahi hoon gi...

Surprised , Sandeep asked, kiya matlab?

U, Main kal 10 din ke liya (Sharimi Urmis little sis) ke paas Shimla ja rahee hoon....(about time urmi, go n leave him, then he might miss u 😛)

S, dus din????? He stood up, tum dus din wahaan kiya karro gi? bore ho jayoo gi....

U, nahi Sharmi aur main Shimla ke sair karain ge, phir doono wapis saath aajayaan ge.......

Urmi could see Sandeep really worried now......10 din bohat ziyada hote hain....

S, tum teen ,char din main aajana...

U kyoon?

S, CG tumhare bigair kiya kare ga.....

U, CG ko bhee mere bagair rahne ki aadat ho jayee gi...

S, aur mujhe??

This comment from Sandeep, made Urmi look at him and she sould see that he had that smile on his face.... Urmi , who had lost all hopes form sandeep ever returning her love.... didnt want to build high hopes on sandeeps this statement......... so she didnt ans.....

S, das din ke liya mat jayoo... char din main aajana... hmmm.... tum hari ticket aagayee hai?

U, papa le aayaan ge....

S, papa ko kyun kaha hai, main le aayoon ga......chaar din, bus......bag kholo..

U, hmmm, kiya....

U paper bag, present hai tumhare liya..

Urmi was holding the paper bag, but she was too disturbed at the sudden change in Sandeeps behaviour to notice it... she ddint know what was going on ........

She opened the bag and it contained a beautiful, perfect red rose.....(aaa so romantic 😆) .......Surprised she looked up to Sandeep.......(While reading this, keep U/S in ur mind, their expressions etc).......

S, ab is ke pata nahi nikal na....

U, KIYA????

S, haan , sara din tu yahan khari phooloon ke pate ukhair ti ho... pyar karta hai, nahi kar ta, karta hai, nahi karta............

Urmi is shocked,,,,.........aap ko kase pata chala...

S, haan main daikh ta hoon, tumhe tu pata hi nahi hota ke kahaan ho jub, phool se pooche ti ho....

U, aap ne kase suna?

S , suna nahi.... tumhare lips se parh liya, u know lip reading...

Urmi is in a total shock now.....

S, Urmi.........is phool se mut poochna... yeah kiya bataiyen ga... main bata ta hoon.........Haan woh tum se pyar karta hai... sirif tum se hi karta hai... plz is baat per secure ho jayoo... but ushe ahbi time chahiye........jaldbazi mat karna plz........

Urmi is shocked...shes staring at Sandeep....not a word coming out from her mouth..........am i asleep..... am i dreaming again????

S,Abhi mujhe time chahhiya... plz...(.😃)

Pami Aunty and Sujhata were coming up the stairs.... seeing them sandeep changed the topic...

S, Urmi tum fikar mat karo, ticket main le aayoon ga....

Hearing this Sujata says, are Sandeep tum, ache howa aagayee, Urmi ke liya ticket le aayoo plz, warna rasiklaa tu bhool hi jaayaan ge....

S, jee.. ab tu parsoo ki hi mile gi....

Sujata, Haan koyee baat nahi... jab bhee mile....

S, ok main try karta hoon...

Sandeep looks at urmi, whos still in a shock......holding the flower and just staring at sandeep.......mouth wide open...........(hehehhe)

Sujhata looks at the rose in her hands and says,, uff urmi, ab is phool ko na toor dena, pata nahi phooloon se kiya dushmani hai tumhari....😆

Sujata and Pami goes inthe house........Sandeep smiles at urmi, whos still in a deep shock.....

S asks, plaza tomorrow,, Urmi just nods, and Sandeep goes down the stairs.........

How is it??? plz comment so i can conti..............love u all 😉

My other ff urls

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/749896/fantasy-fiction-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/746994/my-version-of-s-and-us-confession-scene

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this was good ya ... very imaginative.


i wish this happens in the next episode 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wah wah wah!!!kya imagination hain fazila,plzzz do continue.thoda romance le aao.atleast fiction mein hi dekh lege hum,pata nahin kab ye romance onscreen dikhaga!! 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvanu

wah wah wah!!!kya imagination hain fazila,plzzz do continue.thoda romance le aao.atleast fiction mein hi dekh lege hum,pata nahin kab ye romance onscreen dikhaga!! 😭 😭

thanks..... no romance i have become like the ACHPM team......hahahah 🤣

kidding, next time, n that will be next or a week after that,... thanks for reading n posting :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fazila~

thanks..... no romance i have become like the ACHPM team......hahahah 🤣

kidding, next time, n that will be next or a week after that,... thanks for reading n posting :)

why so late,yaar.jalid karo na!!or have u really turned like achpm team,humko tadpao poore saath din ke liye😡😡

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fazila.. I dnt think i've said this before.. But your an awesome writer.. The way u described u/s.. U even have got the tiny details of how they speak or how they move.. Every little detail was spot on.. The story was so sweet.. And plzz do continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Peony

this was good ya ... very imaginative.


i wish this happens in the next episode 😆

thanks for ur opinion............i wish tooo 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_gal8390

Fazila.. I dnt think i've said this before.. But your an awesome writer.. The way u described u/s.. U even have got the tiny details of how they speak or how they move.. Every little detail was spot on.. The story was so sweet.. And plzz do continue..

why did u tell me before....😉...j/k..........thanks for posting, ur opions make me going, i didnt know i could write unless i came here... i knew i could write good letters, but not stories ....😛..... i will be writing...........so do come here to read them :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvanu

why so late,yaar.jalid karo na!!or have u really turned like achpm team,humko tadpao poore saath din ke liye😡😡

ill write soon...........its just that im busy these days, but still take out time to sneak in IF.......... soon... :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fazila~

ill write soon...........its just that im busy these days, but still take out time to sneak in IF.......... soon... :)

that we all know very well ki jab tak koi is section mein nahin aata uska din kaha poora hota hain,and especially u fazila😆😆

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