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Posted: 9 years ago


100th episode special banner by Lakshmi


And this one is created by Priya

I m so Lucky to have friends like all of you❤️


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I have achieved what I wanted to..Pv has touched the century.. I m so so so happy ..Thank u so much friends for this awesome support and having the faith on my writing.. PV is going to end soon. May be one or two updates aftyer this one and I m going to miss it...After all I gave it more than two years.. Love you all for joining me on the long journey of Maaneet Punarvivah

This is a filler update.. not the regular one.. I did not want to make it emotional one .as I m celebrating the century.. so you all can enjoy the light moments between the family

Part 100

Next Morning


Smita came to check babies and Geet and declared them perfectly fine.. and they could move to their home.. and After completing the formalities ..They headed towards the home.. Handas too joined them .. Both families were too excited with the arrival of two angels..

And after one hour they were standing with the babies on the door of KM..Yash in Geet's arms and sargam in Maan's arms..

Priya welcomed them with all rituals...

Geet was not allowed to go to their room as it was up stairs so priya had asked all of them to stay downstairs so that it was easy for all to take care of them..

Babies were very small and delicate to handle.. Everyone taking every precaution related hygiene and other things..

One person was amused to see the babies and it was Sameer.. Son of Suresh..He was One year old and babies were like a toy for him..He was again and again was trying to touch them.. and it was becoming tough for elders to keep him away..

All were enjoying his condition..

Anie wanted to stay there for some days to be with babies..

Anie asked Sudha-Mamma Can I stay here for some days.?

Sudha looked at her with a frown and Anie got scared a little seeing her frown..Everyone too was looking at Sudha and were surprised at her reaction.

Sudha after a pause-You can but on one condition .

.Anie-Ji?

Sudha-You will take care of yourself.. promise me that you will eat well ..I know it's very hard to feed you theses day.. and everyone smiled

Anie-I promise Mamma ..I will take care of myself and she hugged her-Thanks Mamma..

Priya-Thank U sudha ji..and Don't worry..we all will take care of your DIL..

Rahul's face hung down-what will you do here?.. main kya krunga akele wahaan? If you want I can bring you here daily

Gautam-Lo.. Here comes the joru ka gulaam..kyun wo tujhe apne haath se khana khilaati hai kya jo tu uske bina nahin rah sakta..

and Rahul and Anie were embarrassed at this comment.. Rahul had nothing to say after this..

Handas left from there leaving Anie behind..

The naming ceremony was to be held at the 21st day of the birth of babaies.. Name were already selected..

Maan had joined the office but he was missing Geet there..

He was missing their chori chori love moment which they spend hiding from Ram's eyes during lunch time or some moments which they spent in Maan's cabin or in FH's store room..

Maan (ST)- Maan control yourself.. Now you are going to spend a long time without her..make it a habit for now.. and he taking a deep breath immersed in to the work..

At evening He reached at home and found babies with Anie and Priya.

He sat near them..wanted to take them in his arms but Priya told him not to touch as his hands were not clean .He frowned at this but stood to wash his hands but before that he did not forget to peck them..

Priya shook her head seeing him behaving like that

He reached to their new room..He found Geet standing near the bed.. She was folding the clothes of babies..

Maan moved with silent steps towards her and caged her in his arms from behind..

Geet-Maan

Maan -I missed you today Geet in office..

Geet smiled and turned in to his arms.

Geet-Maan.. now you have to get used to this.. I think I m not going to office for many days..

Maan tucked her locks behind her ears-I know,,But this heart does not know na..It always wants you to be around you..

Geet put her head on his chest..

Maan-Kya hua Geet ? Feeling tired?

Geet-Haan thoda.. It's really tough to take care of two babies.. one stops to cry then other starts.. both are hungry almost together.. I m so confused whom should I feed first and she pouted..

Maan laughed hearing her.and he tightened his arms around her-Don't worry Geet..This is really a new phase of our life and we all have to adjust with it..and now about your tiredness..I m there for it..

and he picked her up in his arms..

Geet was startled-Maan what are you doing..this is not our bedroom.. anyone comes here without knock..Put me down

Maan shook his head-No..Not so easily.. he looked at her with naughty eyes..

Geet-Maan..No..Don't even think..

But maan ignored her and he pulled her more in to her,,She was already in his arms so could not keep her away as he had caged her..

Maan bent on to her face but heard Rahul-Lo bachhon..your parents are stealing the moment to romance with each other..

Geet and Maan looked at the door ..

Anie and Rahul were standing there with babies..

Both came in..

Maan had put Geet down..

Maan gave him a frowned look-There is a word called manners.. Don't you know to knock at the door?

Rahul-And there is a word called DECENCY,, Don't you know to close the door before romancing your wife..and this is your bad time Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.. I think you should forget about that knocking thing for now.. And now you are Father to try to learn to be decent.. bachchhe kya sochenge tumhaare bare me?

Maan-Achchha,, just wait for few month then I will ask you..BTW.. what are you doing here at this time?

Rahul-How rude Maan.? You should not ask such questions to your guest that too when the guest is Son In Law of your family.. bad manners..You have kept my wife with you so what could I do? You yourself are romancing with your wife and asking me the reason of being here..

And he winked at Maan.. and Anie gave him a hard hit on his back-Rahul what are you saying..Control yourself..

Geet and Maan smiled looking at them

And he and Anies put the babies on bed.

Rahul went out and came back with loads of toys..

Maan-Rahul ..what's this?

Rahul-Toys for my babies..

Geet-Rahul..They are too small to play with..

Rahul-So what? They can't play today but will play after some days.. after all I m their maamu..so ye sab to mujhe karna hi hai na..

Maan-Rahul if you do this regularly then this house will turn in to a toy museum

Rahul-And I will be the happiest parson to see this house as toy museum.. Bachhe bhi kya yaad rakhenge apne pyaare Maamu ko

Everyone smiled at his craziness..

After spending some time Rahul left from there..

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It was dinner time..

Geet was advised to eat light yet healthy food..and Meena cooked food separately for her

She opened the lid of the bowl and Maan saw the food.It was khichdi

Maan-Meena..what you have cooked for Geet..You know na that she does not like Khichdi..still you cooked?

Meena-Wo bhaiya.. she needs to eat light and healthy foods .so I have to cook different food on different days..So I cooked it today.. it's very healthy for her..

Maan-But why only khichdi..aur bhi to healthy food hain..

Geet-Maan calm dowm.. I have no problem with this..I will eat.. Infect I have asked Meena to cook it for me.I need something different to cange the taste .For one day it's not bad..and most important..I can eat everything now.. So don't worry

Maan-Sure? I m really shocked

Geet-off course.and she smiled

Everyone smiled looking at both of them

Geet started to eat.. and Maan looked at her ..He wanted to see if she was eating it without interest..He was surprised to see that she was eating it with comfort.. A smile crept on his face..

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Kids have a special Characteristic in their nature..They sleep during the day and stay awake at nights..or they awake early in the morning..and this makes mother very tired as she is not able to take proper sleep.. Geet had double of the problem.. both kids could not sleep together..at many times when one was sleeping the other was awaking..

Though she had a lot of support but it all was new to her so she was feeling very tired..

It was late night and Geet fed both of the kids and they slept.. Maan helped her to settle them in the cribe.

After that they both settled on their places at bed.. Geet knew that she had to awake again mid night to feed them.. as they would start to cry.. Maan asked her to come to him and she made herself comfortable near him.. she rested her head on his shoulder..Both were tired and slept soon having each other close...

It was morning ..Geet's eyes opened with the voice of Maan..She looked at him and a smile crept on her face..

She witnessed a beautiful scene there.. Kids were awake..They were full as she had fed them two sometime earlier and then had slept again..now ..

Geet found Maan talking to the kids in some child language. He had settled both of them on the bed in front of him ...Kids were throwing their legs in the air.He was again and again was trying to cover them with small blanket but while throwing the legs it was slipping down again and again..Maan smiled seeing them

Maan-.Don't want to be be covered ?..Ok chalo thodi de raise hi rahte hain. The girl was going to cry but Maan distracted her by touching her cheeks and she stopped

Maan-Don't cry Baby..Mamma uth jaayegi..See she is sleeping.. let her sleep for some ore time..you dad is here with you.. Spend some time with him too..and he looked at Yash..your sis is very naughty.jab dekho roti rahti hai ..hain na baby.. You are a good boy..Maan leaned on to him to kiss is cheeks but moved away with a shriek-Oh no..what did you do?

And geet saw Maan had got a splash from Yash.He had peed on his face..his hair and face was fully wet

He was looking at Yash with wide eyes-Dad ke saath koi aisa karta hai kya.. he was literally scolding him as if the baby was understanding.. But the baby was throwing his legs in the air and then Maan found him smiling as if he was smiling at his dad

Maan-Badmaash..laughing at your dad? Mom ka asar hai.. pahle tang karna phir hansna..

And he heard a Geet laughing..He looked at her.

.He knew that she had witnessed whole scene and was now laughing on him..

Maan was embarrassed seeing her laughing -Lagta hai dono bachchhe tum par gaye hain..mujhe tang karna inko achchha lagta hai.. lo ab sambhaalo inhen.. saying this he got up to wash himself..

Geet was still laughing imagining wet Maan..she changed baby's nappy and make him comfortable.. maan came out of the washroom and went out.. and after some time returned with coffee and tea for themselves..

Geet was still trying hard to stop her laughter..Maan looked at her and now he too found that scene funny when he imagined himself like that

and he too could not control his laugh seeing her laughing like insane

Precap-Old one continues..



PS:-I hope you enjoyed the cute moments between the family..So this was my 100th update.. Thanks a lot once again for joining me on the journey of Punarvivah

For pm add me at - pmatrash

Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago



100 updates...
congratulations rashmi for successfully completing 100 updates of pv... this really calls for a celebration... pv is been among those rare ffs which are realistic, which we can realte with... and u been such an awesome and generous writer we got many cute adorable and romantic maaneet moments for which we crave for... looking forward for more moments of new mummy papa



the update was a cute bundle of lovely scenes... loved how maan tried to get a moment alone with his wifey which was royally disturbed by rahul... but as i adore rahul... i didnt mind that😆


the last scene where maan as a perfect hubby was trying to let geet sleep and was trying to manage babies was awesome... and i loved the last moment where he got a gift of susu from yash😆..


fab edit by priya...👏

aur meri new editor on group rashmi ... wow... I loved the moving hearts ... and also how u a pic just for ur readers...⭐️

and valli u r awesome darling😳 ... loved the pics u chose... especially the susu one😆

sab ki taareef ki... meri bhi tho kar loo
100 update par mein first aayi

Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi rashmi
congrats for the 100 update ..
its a marvellous feeling you must be going through ...wish ur every story cross 100 and gain lot of popularity..
heartiest congratulations ...


update was superb ..maneet lovely moments with the kids ..
susu scene with maan was hilarious ...


Edited by tabby999 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

That is a fabulous update rashmi... and congrats for the Splendid century and still not out



superb update...


Maan is stealing lovely moments
with geet in her busy schedule... i.e, her kids...😆


And rahul is cribbing... yeh rahul cribbing bird bangaya hai



and here is your gift 😳for the fantastic century😃... I wish to read more and more from you...😉







Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsem update maneet with babies fab the last scene was quite funny
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Part - 97
Awesome part ..
Maan is so caring for Geet always taking care of her and the babies too ..
Adi and Pinky got married too ..
Geet wanted some other date for her delivery but doctors given date made her sad ..
Now Geet is having labour pain look like God listened to her prayers and babies are going to come on her desired date ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part - 98
Lovely part ..
Finally babies arrived taking all restlessness of Maan away leaving him in immense joy and happiness ..
Maan love for Geet is just so beautiful and serene ..
Thank god baby girl name is Sargam not Arpita ..
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Part - 99
Nice part ..
So that was the reason Geet wanted babies to be born on this particular date so that babies and father could share same birthday ..
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Part - 100
Superb part ..
Babies are at home and got warm welcome from elders ..
Maan can't stop romancing his wife ..
Ufff Maan was saying Sargam is naughty but the work done was Yash is also not less than naughtiness ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's amazing. Everyone is very happy around those babies. Geet become.tired soon as she has to feed them in a small gap. Maneet romance is disturbed by rahul who bought lot of toys for kids. Maan and babies moment was beautiful and yash's act on maan was hilarious. Congrats dear.for completeting hundered parts successfully. Waiting for next.dear.

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